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ArHi SS: Fateful Love *Ch 4, pg 1 NOW* (New Thread Link pg 139) (Page 36)

45ramadevi Senior Member

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
Smilelovely story dearSmile

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
Don't know what to say other than WOW! At first I thought it might be a ghost story but then you said y wasn't... But I'm all confused! Lets see what happens as the story unfolds.
First it was adorably innocent! Everything about it screamed innocence. Khushi is eager to move into her new home with her fathe as the caretaker. While the rest of her family are not as excited, she finds the new place thrilling as comforting.
Unlike Khushi, Payal has some reservations over this new home of theirs. She has heard stories that its haunted and has taken them to heart. Payal obviously die not feel the warmth that Khushi feels in the house.
The room situation shows how accommodating and caring Khushi is. She takes the creepier and less "happy" room so that her sister can stay comfortably in the other room. Khushi obviously cares a lot for her sister.
The rose painting they found in the room was signed by A and Chote, most likely by Anjali and Arnav. This can symbolize the strong bond the siblings have. They paint a piece together who h shows that they are together through it all and love each other and supper each other.
Khushi wakes up to find a boy in her room who is Arnav. Her yells for her Babuji interestingly appeared deaf to him (first thing that made me think that it was a ghost story). Then they hear the voice of Anjali who wishes her Chote a good night. We never get to see her though since she is behind the door (second thing). Then after Khushi confirms that Arnav is living an real both slip into an easy conversation. We find out that Khushi is sleeping in Arnav's room which makes me think that Payal is sleeping in Anjali's room maybe. Khushi feels a sense of familiarity towards this boy and she feels that she can trust him and is safe around him. This newfound feeling towards a strange is intriguing for Khushi. After talking for a long time we find out that Arnav and Anjali live here. The Raizadas though apparently don't live there anymore and the house was filthy and empty, unlike Arnav's thought of there being so many servants (third thing). After falling asleep the next morning Arnav is missing ( fourth thing).
All these things make me think that this is a ghost story but if you say that it isn't then I guess we will have to wait for this mystery to unfold and become clear.
Overall the update was AMAZING and I'm happily waiting for the next one!
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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 2:06am | IP Logged
nice and interesting story
continue soon

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Kavya_sarun IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 2:37am | IP Logged
OMG!! Wat was tat? How cum Arnav and Anjali r tere n SM When its already said 2 b vacant? Bt i love( nt luv..mre thn tat)tis fateful luv. Totally diffrnt concept vd intrstng chap. U r amazing as usual. Love u for tis Ss... Thanx for d PM.

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aaradhaya1688 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 5:02am | IP Logged
wait what was that
I m so intrigued and confused right now
Will wait for the story to unfold

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hiralhk IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 6:05am | IP Logged
wow just superb...

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Shamz94 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Can't wait to read more

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hot.cakes Senior Member

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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
What a gripping, thrilling story!
I sooo love suspense!
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