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ArHi SS: Fateful Love *Ch 4, pg 1 NOW* (New Thread Link pg 139) (Page 32)

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 7:03am | IP Logged
wow... new ss...
great start... waiting for more...

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Wow yaar!!! Awesome start!!! Loved it!!! Yes you did indeed confuse me!!! Waiting eagerly to read how the story unfolds!! Loved the start!!! Please do update soon Smile
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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 9:29am | IP Logged
amazing...
loved it...
smilli IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 11:05am | IP Logged

Woaaa...superb...n very interesting.
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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 11:27am | IP Logged
1st off...m loving it...!!!

Is this like merging of time...2 eras...colliding at a particular time...but then did Payal meet Anjali...?? Or is the house stuck in a time wrap...

Ugh...questions questions...& i need answers pronto...!!!

Thnxs for tge PM
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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 11:30am | IP Logged
a brilliant start..u hav me glued to this story by the mysterious setup..
u made me see sheesh mahal in 2 different view points..eerie and cold thru payal eyes and thru khushiz eyes it seemed warm with lots of promises..i wonder y khushi felt so...
and how come arnav is here and anjali too..is payal in anjaliz room..??
sashi is the care taker and arnav is still there..
arnav saying that sheesh mahal is his home and he wud never leave gav me a weird feeling..
after reading the whole chapter i am really confused..is arnav  a ghost..or is khushi dreaming..for a moment it felt that they were in a parallel universe..arnav is right in his place and khushi is also at where she should be..
i will stop guessing and just wait for ur next chapter...

maanmeet1 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 11:58am | IP Logged
It was eerie, scary trust me...full of suspense and d end leaves on a cliffhanger...now m thinking if he was real or a ghost? M sure d story is abt d fight of 2 people against der fate...

It was very interesting to tell u d truth...though I had goosebumps while reading d later part...m very excited for dis new story of urs...u r such an amazing writer dear,...
cheesemad IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
awesome conceptwaaa...

loved reading it...it was scary n damn interesting...

I loved the way you developed the suspense

No one lived in Sheesh Mahal, then from where dis our ASR come??

Aww I loved that heartbeat part.

Continue soonwa:D

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