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ArHi SS: Fateful Love *Ch 4, pg 1 NOW* (New Thread Link pg 139) (Page 103)

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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
Romance in d air already.awesome update.I m still Mr able to make out d mystery of this story.but anyways good stuff

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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
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Sorry for late editing I was disturbed yesterday n couldn't read. Anyways the update was amazing. A confession first I thought the girl was her but jaldi hi confusion dor ho gai k it wasnt Arhi. Lol now loved Khushi's inner fight n confusion at certain discoveries her inner self was bringing in her knowledge. Totally agree to Khushi abt being in love n how can u tell whether the said person is in love or not. payal n her love for books lol. So Garima has a doubt now on Khushi as in y she sleeps exactly at the same time as she does in childhood. Arey yaar u wont understand.   So now Khushi knew tht pillows and doll wont do good to b hide the fact of her nightly visits.aweer the way Arnav placed his hands on her eyes. Aweee he didn't like the thought of her having another frnd. how can he she iis his only his haan haan we know FRND JUST FRND *rolling eyes* its not like tht reality will change by saying frnd again n again. It will soon b clear to u both well to u mr.Asr tht she is now not only ur best frnd but so much more. aweee how shwert Khushi wished him happy Valentine's day in such simple way. How they became the most important part of each othet's life. aweee both of them wished to b together even in day light. The most cute partcwhich brought tears in my eyes was ASR's way of wishing her.

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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
it's so wonderful!...loved it!!loved it!!loved it!!...

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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
This feeling of love when you are a teenager before confession is so beautiful filled with excitement n anxiousness. Falling in love is just the best feeling ever n you have beautifully expressed in this update
Loved the falling star part when both make the same wish but they knw it is next to impossible . N the engraving part too amazed me . Does  khushi hallucinate about Arnav this secret still confuses me but still love the beautiful bond that they share

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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
Doc ji Hug

Looks like I'm falling deeply in love with this ArHi.

Their inner turmoils and confused thought processes were described beautifully.

Her gift to him and his return gift, gosh!!
And their wishes, how much more cuter these two can get?!!

And about the engraving & the feather; I think their love and connection just crossed all the boundaries of time, fate..whatever comes in their way Heart

GOSH I SO ENVY THEIR BOND LOL

Waiting for the next chapter.

Love
Friedrice Ji

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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
this story reminds of the movie "traveler's wife" i believe..i love the concept...continue soon

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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
amazing work
awesome updateTongue
engraving proves that they r entwined/does it signify that their love won't be bound by time?
is it anjalis wedding?

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Posted: 23 September 2013 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
teenage!... the most beautiful period in everybodys life.. and I loved how you wrote this update showing their teenage..
 
loved how Khuhsi tried to trouble him by calling him Raj... How Arnav caught her lie.. How they laughed and was comfortable with each other, yet not so comfortable.. this period has changed both of them.. they are not childrens any more..
 
Loved the gift given by khuhsi and how they both wished the same...even I am wishing the same for tboth of them.. Let them hold their hands and be with each other in lights also...
 
and the return gift by Arnav was awesome...Smile... the best gift anyone can get,..
 
Couldn't solve the feather mystery or any other.. please help me out with the new update soon...
 
Thank you for the PM... Wink

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