ArHi SS: Fateful Love *Ch 4, pg 1 NOW* (New Thread Link pg 139) - Page 86

i loved the carving on wooden door n their confession n the moment he kissed her with disappearance..the longing of kushi...and i actually thought abt the wedding that wat wud hapn when they had to marry in their time..omg i was surprised with the thought becomes the next chappy..wonderful..

u r a genius di

Superb Update...
Amazing...
Really Loved It?

ths was an awesum update di

8 yrs. hv been passed
teenager arshi was a treat to read

khushi thnkng of real luv
nd thnkng about her true frnd arnav

vow its valentines day
thats gr8

khushi eagerly waitng fr night to come so that she can meet arnav
nd she teasng hm 😉

arnav caught her though.

aww she gv hm that red rose nd heart shapd card

that happy brush ur teeth day was too funny😊

they both hv a great bonding
hw khushi understood he was worried fr hs di
that only a true frndshp can bring

they both wshd d same frm shooting star
to be wth each other
all d tym

ths shows they both hv some feeling fr each other


arshi sleepin wth each other on same bed
i can imagine arnav situation

their entwined hands reminded me of DH
aww hw much i luv that scene

nd then he kissd her

hs surprise to her d next morning was voww
their name together

that means
sumthng frm past can still be felt by khushi in future
nt arnav
but hs gft

lyk khushi can travel in past among arnavs famly member without anyone notice
can arnav do d same
coming to future , to khushi's present

lukng forward to d next part

loved it an awesome update...keep it up

Their 1st valentine day!!...n kushi gave the rose to him...how lovely n its touchg wen arnav engraved her name beside his...
Both r in their teens n startg to have that feelings which tey couldnt define...garima cld b e one to find out...she been suspicious but couldnt juz have a clue...
They made e same wish on e shootg star...to b together alwaz...v sweet indeed...

.love e update!!!!

wonderful update dear...!

loved d update...our khushi has gown into a very mature girl shez giving love lessons 2 payal...hehehe n dey both realizes dat their hearts flutter at each other thoughts n also they feel sum thng 4 each other n most of all dey mean d word 2 each other...um jus loving dem...d way both of dem wished 4 d same thng was wonderful...dat really touched my heart...but d thng which confuses me is how cum d feather n d engraving remains but not their times...umn't able 2 get d significance of it...i guess d futute updates wud clear it...well will b waiting 4 d next update...

Tina di seriously tell me how can sum1 always get such mindblowing plots for one's stories each and everytime be it mind games or ongoing fateful love. Each time u write jus to leave a everlasting image for ur story on ur readers. I was so overwhemled after reading such an amazing story that i cudn't hlp but compare u with amish tripathi the writer of shiva triology sorry for dis stupidness of doing so coz i find u as the best writer not jus of IF but as an indian writer if i can benchmark den for me ur as good as ruskin bond . Ur stories are so realistic i feel as if everything is happening jus before my eyes a 10 minute movie going im enjoying. Itz not jus some words im winding up di itz wat i truly felt aftr reading dis story. Im happy that i came to IF and came across u coz i feel realy happy dat im a reader of ur stories.
Plz nvr give up writing coz itz wat which bring the real u packed up wid such an awesome quality of writing wich is hidden behind a pretty doc.
Luv u di.
Hats down to ur writing and u.:)

So beautiful...full of surprises ...loving how with time...they are so into each other...