ArHi SS: Fateful Love *Ch 4, pg 1 NOW* (New Thread Link pg 139) - Page 12

So its not a ghost story thn what? Was Khushi dreaming or something else.. Whatever it is, I am sure we will know in upcoming chapters. But it looks like an amazing concept and whole chapter was written beautifully. Loved the way you introduced an over excited Khushi and apprehensive Payal. And the Arnav Khushi part was excellent, loved the way you showed two kids who was understanding each other as if they know each other from so long, I thinks that why you named it "Fateful Love", may be its all in their fate. Brilliant chapter Tina, super excited to see how this story will shape up in future 👏 

These kids r cute...kushi v bubbly n rite frm.e start u can feel e bubbliness n positiveness of tis gal...while payal was skeptical, she was juz bouncing w joy...love it...i thought arnav was a ghost whose spirit roam sheesh mahal w anjali...but then u sd its not a ghost story...
V intrigued n would love to read more...
Any story frm you is greatly appreciated...i'm loving each n everyone of it!!!!

its unique and interesting
i am very confuse
u say that arnav is not ghost that how he came their
is khushi imagining him
in next we are going to meet asr means leap
i am just waiting for next updt to know whats going on
after reading updt my brain stop working
i must say its awesome
thnx for pm
updt soon

great start...

"confusion hai confusion hai,
solution kuch pata nahi"
u said tht itz nt a ghost story.
May b arnav live near there.
Sum mysteries to find.
Awesome updt.
Con: sn.
Thx 4 the pm.

He's a vampire .. Or a paranormal story

WHY HE IS NOT STAYING IN SHEESH MAHAL AT MORNING

I wonder if this is a realm or time-travelling story much like The Lake House? Interesting concept indeed!

Interestinggg...that's what comes to mind after reading 1st chapter and the precap!

loved reading it...seems quite interesting