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me on first page...
For the first Time, I've got an opportunity to res on First Page
Sorry For editing it Late🤢
Teaser Told Very Much Tina Dear... It says that they have to fight with their FATE to be together forever...N I loved the teaser😳
Coming to the First Chap:
This chap reminded me THE CONJURING movie
I don't know why, bt the way Payal was reacting n answering all the questions reminded me that... Even Payal said that Sheesh Mahal was a haunted house!!! What more do I require to be scared!!!!
Shashi is new Caretaker of Shhesh Mahal, then how come Arnav still stays there? I'm suspecting Khushi's words now, IS HE GHOST!!!! Bt Khushi checked Arnav's heart beat which says that he's a human being... I think I shud wait for U to disclose abt this😛😉
Besides, Khushi is so so so so cute... This Khushi reminded me the Khushi in Mind Games( Gosh!!! I miss that) She's so lively girl... She feels that Sheesh mahal is her home, thats coz of Arnie😳
Arnav is also cute... Their first meet was so adorable
Arnav was GAYAB in the morning!!!! Where did he go?!!!! Again Payal's words are ringing to my ears
P.s:
Khushi in this story is unique becoz she sleeps at night alone😆😆
Is this mysterious story dear?
I wud be the happiest person if the answer is YES😃
Coz except the OS FULL MOON, I've not read any of ur mysterious stories😊
Well, Loved the way U wrote this chap... The descriptions were beautiful
Loved the chap
Edited by MahimaMV - 10 years ago
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