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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 9)

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Superb part... FB wad nice...

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
awesome update
fb was amazing
thanks
cont soon

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
nice update
cont soon

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 1:24am | IP Logged
nice update...

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 2:00am | IP Logged
haila!!
ye maya...
sachi me pagal hai..
i mean...sirf surname k wajah se bhag gyi!!
heheheh...
hillarious...
oh gosh!! sam-maya ka yudh jari hai!!
awwiie...chocolate..dimag shant karne k liye!!
grt!!

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Nice Samara...
Maya is so crazy...
Loved the update...
And waiting for next..
Donno what twist u are going to give...
Waiting. .

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Hey guys back with next part.
Sorry for late updt bt kya karu iss part k liye Bijli, Billo, Munni, Sheela, Razia, Chameli, Radha ko jo invite karna tha. Nahi samjhe to main samjha deti hu. Wo kya hai na humara Arjun Shadi k bandhan me bandhne ja raha hai to humare dulhe k dost yani Sameer ne bachelor party rakhi hai. Ab isme kya hota hai janne ke liye humare sath bane rahiye.

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Sometimes it happens dt some beautifull memories turns into d worst nightmare of our life. And ACP Arjun Rawte is leaving d same life.
So frnds in dis part flashback part will cont frm Arjun's point of view. So dont get confused.

So enough of my bakwas lets move towards my story.
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PART: 6

~ A NIGHT WITH PAINFULL PAST- II ~

{ ARJUN'S POINT OF VIEW}

A girl is talking on phone with her frnd.

Girl- Are u sure abt it. I mean i dont believe yaar. He is my man.

Frnd on phone- Dear my man ho ya ur man. All r same. They think shadi is like phasi to dem. So dey plan a bachelor party and enjoy with another girl.
Girl- No way dear my baby is not like dt.
Frnd on phone- ok may b u r right bt un kameene dosto ka kya karogi jo tumhare baby ko dusre baby se mingle k liye force karenge.
U shud check on dem.
Girl- May b u r right.
Frnd on phone- yes dear!! Ok main phone rakhti hu. Jaise hi i vl get info i vl forward it to u.
Bye.
Girl- No he cant cheat me.
Bt if he does dan.
I swear if he does dan he vl b dead for sure.

Scene shifts to an underground club area. There are all boys waiting for d new bakra who is going to halal.

A man cme to d centre of stage. All luked at him n he hold a mic and says.

Man- Gentleman n gentleman welcme to d shradhanjli day of a new bakra Arjun suryakanta Rawte. As tomorow he is going to b halal by my dearest frnd Roshni.(Arjun who was standing at far glared at his frnd.)
he contnues- Arjun plz ab na apna sada sa look dena band kar kyunki ab ye kissi kam ki nhi rahi.
Arjun- Sale maje le le jab tera tym aaega na to hum dekh lenge.
Arooj- Arjun sahi keh raha hai sam. Ek din tu bhi humari tarah hi halal hoga.
Man on stage is non other dan our Sameer.
Sam- Aree meri chodo main jis bhi ladki se shadi karunga wo gaay ki tarah hogi. Puri traditional jo pati k samne aawaj na uthha paye.
Harman( frnd)- Arre kaha hum isse behes kar rahe hai. Bandar kya jane adarak ka swad.
All laughed at sameer.
Aman(frnd)- Sahi kaha. Sam tu hume tab lecture dena jab tu dubti ganga me hath dhoega.
Vihan- Sam tu Samar ka bhai kehlane layak nhi hai. Kaha tera bhai hot chicks ke sath laga rehta hai aur ek tu hai ki ek desi chicken tak nhi doondh pa raha hai.
Sam- Sale kamino yeh Arjun ki bachelor party hai to tum log mujhe chod kar us par dhyan do.
Arjun- Kyun tera tano se pet bhar gaya??
Aman- Arjun dal le adat in tano ki kyunki aage khane me tujhe yahi serve honge.
Sam- Aman aaj dinner me tanne kha kar aaya hai kya???
All laughed at Aman.
Aman- Yaar sach me main tang aa gaya hu meri bibi ek to dhang ko khana banana janti nhi aur jab dekho tab tana marti rehti hai.
Like dis all man shared thier tragic marriage life except sameer as he is still single waiting for his gaay.
Arooj- yaar sam yaha bate karne ko hi bulaya hai ya koi bijli bhi mangai hai.
As soon as he takes d name of Bijli all light goes off n a spotlight falls on a girl. Her face is covered by dupatta. Song starts n she danced on tune.

Babu ji zara dhire chalo
Bijli khadi yaha bijli khadi
naino me chingariya
shola badan sholo ki ladi

(Arooj joins her)
ho giri giri giri
bijli giri
ispe giri uspe giri
lo gir padi.
Soon song get finished and soon Bijli get replaced by another girl.

All boys luked at her revealing back. She turns. Her face is also covered n they started singing d song played next.

All- ishq tujhse karke
dewana dil betaab hua barbaad hua
bhul gaya apna bhi naam
jab naam tera isse yaad hua
girl- yeh jo hai majnu
all boys- haa ji
girl- inhe kya main samjhoo
all boys- ho ji
girl- kya thikana hai inka ki kab ho jaye lapata

ho inki mohabat resham
ka jal hai.
Deewangi bhi inki ek chal hai

(Aman jumped in front of her n sings)

Aman- ho Billo rani...
Ho billo rani kaho to abhi jaan de du
ho billo rani kaho to abhi jaan de du.

She also left without showing her face bt vihaan holds a chunni which is left there.
Vihaan wears dt around his neck.
Vihaan- Arre Munni chunni to leti jao.
And again a new girl cme in veil.

Vihaan danced with her on munni badnaam hui song n she also left all boys like other two.

Harman- Yaar Sam ye Samar ne kaisi girls ka arrangement kiya hai yaar. I mean koi bhi apna chehra dikhaye bina chali jaa rahi hai.
Vihaan- Ya Harman is right.
Kaha hai wo.
Sam- Guys relax!! Dont b impatience.
Arjun- Guys sharam nhi aati tum logo ko. Kya kabhi tum apni wifes ko dekhane k liye desperate hote ho.
Harman- Arjun in ladkiyo ki chikni kamar ko unke kamra jaise kamar se compare mat karo.
Kaha ye chikni chameli n kaha wo chikhati chudaile.

N again to grab d attention f boys a girl cme.

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 6:52am | IP Logged
nic update...bt samar ki entry isme bhi nahi hui...

continue soon

love
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