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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 8)

DivineDarkness IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Nice part

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
awesome update
so dairy milk silk act as maya's mood controllerLOL
trio convo with maya was nice
but maya injured n sameer
applied ointment
n ramaya convo was
full of suspense
loved the kids
n way they interrogated maya
so samaya n samar are maya kids...
n liza is maya sis-in-law
n whom liza was talking of??
the song was amazing
lots of suspense
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
awesome update.
continue soon.
and please pm me when you update
Harshamara Goldie
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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 6:35am | IP Logged
PART: 5

~ A NIGHT WITH PAINFULL PAST ~

Maya sings for her twins n hearing thier mumma's song both Samar and Samaya goes to thier dreamland leaving thier mumma in a lonely night full of pain, she gets in her past.
For once Maya checked the two n silently move out of bed n goes to balcony.
Once she gets out she closes d balcony door n tear started to flow down frm her beautifull eyes.
She goes to d memory lane of her past life.

~ FLASHBACK STARTS ~

Sameer takes Maya to his mansion n all d way to home Maya fully irritated Sameer. Once they reached Rathod mansion he speaks.
Sameer- Now not a single word. Take ur laugage n go to guest room n hv ur sleep.
Maya- To tumhe kya lagta hai main tumhari bakwas k liye apni beauty sleep kharab karungi. Huh!! Gud nyt.
Sameer- What!!! Just impossible.
After there swt convo both went to thier respective room.

Time- 3:20 am.
Sameer's bedroom ~

Sameer is sleeping peacefully bt it seems both Rawte bro- sis r in full mood to destroy his night.
Sameer hears a crying sound. He wakes up and find a tearfull Maya standing at his bedroom door.
Sameer switch on d light n ask her to cme in. She cme n sat besides him. He asked her abt her visit.
Sameer- What happened Maya?? Why r u crying???
Maya (crying)- Am I a bad girl, sameer???
Sameer in mind- Sach bolunga to yeh aur royegi aur
meri nind puri hi haram ho jaegi. Isliye beta jhooth bol de..
Maya- Sameer bolo na. Main buri hu.
Sameer- Na Maya aisa nhi hai. Ha tum bhale hi apni shadi se bhag aayi bt iska matlab yeh nhi hai ki tum buri ho.
Maya- tum mujhe taunt kar rahe ho. Oh god main yaha aayi hi kyun. (again she started to cry)
Sameer- I m sorry. Mera wo matlab nhi tha.
Maya- To kya matlab tha ha. Arjun ko phon karo mujhe usse abhi baat karni hai.
Sameer didnt argue further n dialed Arjun's no. as he also cant tolerate her.
Sameer on phone- Arjun tu apni behen ko mere ghar se le ja warna main pagal ho jaunga.
Arjun- What happen Sam?? Maya thik to hai na???
Sameer- Use kya hog. Pehle mujhe doubt tha bt ab yakeen ho gaya hai ki tum Rawtes pure mad ho. Ye le baat kar apni pagal behen se. (loll sam sayad bhul gaya ki Maya uske bagal me hi hai. And ladki ki burayi usi k samne. Sam ko bad me pachtana padega. He...he...he...)
Maya on phone- Arjun mujhe is chidiya ghar se le jao plz. Ek to yaha har taraf books dekhh kar mera sar ghum raha hai. Dusra yaha kitni darawni interior hai. Mujhe nind nhi aa rhi hai. Aur daddy ki yaad bhi aa rahi hai.
Arjun- Maya ye tumhara hi faisala tha na aur ab tum guilty feel kar rahi ho.
Maya- to kya karti main Arjun. Mujhe Mrs. Maya kakoria nhi banana tha.
Ewwe kitna tacky hai mrs kakoria. Yuck!!!
Arjun- Wait!! To tumhe surname se problem thi or mujhe laga ki dad forcefully marriage karwa rahe hai. God maya.
Maya- sorry Arjun!!!
Arjun- What sorry. Tum kal hi wapas ghar jaa rahi ho. No more discussion.
Maya- but Arjun...
Arjun- Sam ko phon do.
She handed d phone to Sameer.
Sam and Arjun talked for a while dan he cut d call.
Maya- Arjun ne kya kaha??
Sameer- Tum kal ghar jaa rahi ho. Aur usne tumhe chocolate dene ko bola hai.
Maya (angrily)- mujhe koi chocolate nhi chahiye aur na hi main ghar wapas jaa rahi hu. Bol dena apne frnd se.
Sameer- thiik hai. Lekin chocolate chahiiye to fridge me hai.
Maya angrily left for her room not before taking d chocolate frm fridge.
Sameer just smiled at her antics n goes to sleep.

Time- 7:45 am

Sameer's sleep break by continuous ringing of doorbell. He opens d door n found an impatience Arjun.
Arjun- Maya ghar par to hai na??
Sam- ghar par hi hogi aur kaha jaaegi.
Arjun- mujhe doubt hai. Lets check.
Sam- what!!! Ok!!!

And as expected Maya is not in her room. There they find a letter for Arjun. Arjun opens it n read it loudly.

Dear Bro,
sorry 4 all trouble. Me wapas ghar nahi jana chahti. As dad phir se uss gadhe se meri shadi k liye mujhe force karenge. And i dont want to. Arjun i want to live my life just like u do. Aur main mera life partner khud choose karna chahti. I hope u vl understand me n forgive me.

And ha apne us dost ko thnk u bol dena n samjha bhi dena ki kisi bhi ladki ki burayi uske samne na kare.
Bye,
Love Maya.

Arjun- ye ladki puri pagal hai.
Sameer- main to starting se bol raha tha.
Arjun glared him.
Sameer- ok ghurna band kar. Ab bata kya kare.
Arjun- Ab kya kuch nhi. Let her live her life. She vl cme back soon.

After 2 months ~
Time flews n now Arjun confessed his feeling for Roshni n as a result both r going to get marry. And u all know before marriage wat happens. Its a BACHELOR PARTY for Arjun.

Arjun- Sam r u sure ki Rosh ko kuch pata nhi chalega.
Sam- Dont worry bhai kuch nhi hoga.
Arjun- fine. Lekin girls ka arrangement kaise hoga.
Sam- oh Arjun relax.Akhir mera casanova bhai SAMAR DAMSINGH RATHOD kab kaam aaega.
Arjun- oh dt means he is here. Tab to aur maza aaega. Uski choice kamal ki hoti hai.
Sam- jyada hawa me mat ud zameen par aa ja. Warna Rosh ko sab pata chal jaega.

Somwhre else
Girl on phone- If he do dis dan he vl b dead.

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 6:45am | IP Logged
great update

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Harshamara

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Super update
Cont soon

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 9:18am | IP Logged
awesome update



so chocolate is maya's mood controller...hmmm...


trio convo with maya was nice


sameer applied ointment on maya's wound..




loved the kids



n way they interrogated maya


so samaya n samar are maya kids...



n liza is maya sis-in-law



n whom liza was talking of??



the song was amazing



lots of suspense 




thanks for pm

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Superb update.
Loved the flashback.

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