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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 7)

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Awesome update dr.

Yayyy Aisha also joins ETF.

Glaring session was funny.

Loved trio convo about the new acp.

FB was amazing.

Continue soon.

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 5:26am | IP Logged
awesome yar...!!
wow so aisha and maya going to join etf..
and maya as same rank as rathore...
ab kya hogaLOL
aur trio ka pov un teeno ke sath kaam karne kaROFL
fb was amazing...!!
arjun ne apni hi behen ko ussi kis hadi se bhagaya LOL
aur ye sam maya ka kya chakkar hai? and arjun helped sam in case of rosh?Shocked
continue soon...

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
superb updates
aisha n acp maya are new members of etf
the fb was awesome n funny
wondering what went wrong
which caused rift between these friends
maya n sameer convo was interesting
n what promise they were talking off??
eager to know abt it
2nd fb was nice with samar n sameer
thanks for pm
update soon
 
Amritamalhotra Goldie
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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Wow..nice update...
Something fishy. ...
Whats that???
Nice equation between Arjun and Maya...
Plz update soon..
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Sorry guys for late updt. Now enjoy ur next part. PART: 4 ~ KISSA KURSI KAA ~ Giving her piece of mind to Rathod, Maya stormed out of his cabin. She directly goes to cafeteria n order her mood controller. Maya- One hard black coffee with minimum sugar and do u hv dairymilk silk. Pantry boy- No ma'am. Maya- Its ok. She goes to seat. Soon she finds a big dairymilk silk infront of her eyes. She luks at d person and finds his new team mates standing thier with mixed expression of fear n excitement. She takes d chocolate n ask dem to join her. All join her bt they r tensed how to start thier convo. She sensed it n take d lead. Maya- Guys agar mere sath baithana hai na to apna yeh dara hua chehra thik karo coz i dont like sad faces. Its enough for our chattering club memmber( Shree, Riya, Chotu). Shree- Ma'am whe do u work before. Maya- First stop calling me ma'am. I m young like u guys. So u can call me Maya. Got it. All- Yes! Riya- Amm! Maya wats d matter with chocolate. Maya- Oh! Actually its my mood controller. Chotu- mood controller???? Maya- yeap! Jab bhi main koi fight ya tensed hoti hu to i eat chocolate to calm myself. Maya- BTW Thank u for chocolate. Riya- oh! Its all right. No need to thank. Waise Maya how u cme to know Rathod sir. Maya- Guys let me clear one thing never i said never ask me abt Rathod or Arjun. It vl b better for u. Trio nodded thier head. After dt all hv thier coffee. Soon all called for a new case.Trio along with Aisha n Arjun were present at conference room waiting for thier chief... Oh CHIEFS.Both Maya n Rathod enter cabin at a time n directly goes to grab thier seat. But oops both grabbed d same head chairs. Shree- ye to hona hi tha. Ab do do same rank k officer ek hi team me to aisa hi hona tha.As he turned to luk at Riya bt find a glaring Arjun. Chotu- dhire shree yaha Maya ka bhai Arjun sir hai. Both Ramaya( rathod n maya) still standing n glaring each other. Arjun snapped dem- Ab kadhe reh kar case solve karna hai to we dont mind. Soon Ramaya realised it n both leave d chair. Maya luk at Rathod n make herself seated next to Rathod. Soon all discussed d case n moved to crime area.Rathod, Aisha, shree in one suv n Arjun, Riya n chotu in one. Maya in one as she hates both Rawte n Rathod. So she decided to go all alone.All solved d case n Maya- Aisha proves as a gud asset to ETF. All headed back to office.Maya ask Riya to cme in her n meet her in cabin. Maya- Riya mere cabin me aao. Riya- yes! Maya already gone to her cabin. And as Riya moved to go Arjun calls her.( u guys all know ki jab Arjun bulaye to humari riya doudi chali jaye.)So she change her track frm Maya's cabin to Arjun's. Riya totaly forget abt maya. And here Maya is waiting for her. Soon she heard d door get open. Her back was facing d door so she cant she d person. She thought its Riya. Maya- Hey Riya thnk u for cming now help me. Actually mere back pe ek wound hai n mere hath nahi pahunch rahe hai. Can u apply it there. I m not Riya- a man voice cme frm behind.Maya turned n find Rathod. Maya- Wat r u doing here? Rathod- Main bas ye puchne aaya tha ki tum kab jaa rahi ho as baki sab jaa chuke hai. Maya- Why sud i tell u. U r nothing to me. Rathod is now totaly irritated with her behaviour. And her acts n taunts r only increasing his anger. Now he cant take anymore. Rathod- Stop it Maya. Ye sab acting kahi aur dikhana. Samjhii tum. Aur mujhe ye batane par majboor mat karo ki who m i of urs. And he leaves frm there leaving a shocked Maya.After some time Rathod cme back n held Maya frm back, keep aside her hair to front n opened d zip of her dress n applied ointment on her wound n leave frm there not before closing d zip.Maya stands there more shocked dan before. Maya- how?? How dare he touch me? U vl pay for it. She also moves back to her home whr two person must b waiting for her no matter wat is the time.As soon as she stepped inside, two little kid cme with angry faces. Now both r roaming around her. Lil girl- Aap kaha thi. Pata hai wa...wat...s... ( turns to her lil bro)..Bhai sa cmplt my wold na. Lil boy- she is asking wats...wats...d time. Is it d time to cme home.( now he turns to a girl standing at a corner n smiling at d 2 cutipie) lil boy- Bubu stop smiling n help us at scolding. Maya- ya! u guys r right. She must help u na! how bad is she na? Girl- Arre wah bhabhi! Inki daant se bachne k liye kya track change kiya hai. Maya- Ab isme mene kya kiya liza.Galti to tumhhari hai na tum kyu inki help nhi karti. Liza- fine.Let do it my lil officer.Lets scold ur Mumma. Lil boy- u al vely bad Bubu. Lil girl- aap chahhte ho ki hum mumma ko scold kare. liza- u both lil devils mumma ko dekha nhi ki sides change. Abhi batati hu. Both lil children ran to Maya n hide demselve behind her frm thier Bubu (Bua).After thier swt scolding all had thier dinner. Kids goes to sleep n ladies moved to kitchen. Inside kitchen~ Liza-Bhabhi aaj bacho ne phir bhai saab k bare me pucha.

Edited by Samara92 - 22 August 2013 at 10:56am

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 11:14am | IP Logged
wow
amazing update
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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Inside kitchen- Both girls r cleaning kitchen. Maya sees dt Liza is tensed abt sumthing so she asked her. Maya- kya baat hai liza tum itni tensed lag rahi ho. Agar kal k liye tensed ho to evrythng vl b fine. So relax n go to sleep warna kal office k 1st day par sote hue nazar aaogi. Liza- Bhabhi aaj bacho ne phir se bade bhai sa k bare me puchha. Maya stopped her work. A tear drop rolled down her eyes. Liza- Bhabhi ab to app bacho k sath yahi sift ho gayi hai. Aur unse ye baat aap jyada din tak chupa nhi sakti. Maya- Liza ja kar so jao. Kal office k liye late ho jaaega. Liza didnt say anything n goes to her room. Cmplting her work Maya goes to her devils room. She luked at dem n smile crept on her face. She goes n sit next to dem. Maya- kash Samar aap humare sath hote. Magar us Sameer ki wajah se aap humare sath nhi hai. She wiped her tears n goes to her room. She take a quick bath. When she cme out of bathroom she finds her twins r waiting for her at bed. Maya- Samaya Samar aap dono yaha. Samaya- mumma samar bhai sa ko ninni nai aa lahi hhai. Samar- na mumma main to so lahha tha. Isi ne kaha ki mumma ka gana sunna hai. Maya- Oh to yeh bat hai. Chalo aap ki pharmaise puri ki jaae. Maya placed samar n samaya both her sides n started to sing. Do naina aur ek kahani do naina aur ek kahani thoda sa badal thoda sa pani aur ek kahani do naina aur ek kahani. Choti si do jhilo me wo behti rehti hai. Koi sune ya na sune kehti rehti hai. Kuch likh k aur kuch jubani thoda sa badal thoda sa pani aur ek kahani. Do naina aur ek kahani. So dts it for now. I know i m adding lots of twist n suspense bt believe me wen mistries vl unfold u vl get ur bonanza.

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 11:39am | IP Logged
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