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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 6)

Christeee IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
omg moustach man wow
arjun ne aapni behen ko shadi se bhagaye 

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fly.high IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
beautiful update...

they hav such a cute thn wat went wrong...

why did these frndz fell apart...

continue soon dear...


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IshitaRocks015 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
arjun  apni behen ko bhagaying frm shadi??
lol..moustache man..hehehLOLLOLLOL
flashback was awsome!!!
haila...maya in ETF!!
pata nai kya hoga!!!!
sachi..kya tension hai inke bich...
bechare baki sab!!!!!

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Harshamara Goldie

Joined: 29 June 2013
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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Thnk u so much guys for ur luvly cmmnts.
And i know u guys thinking wat went wrong btwn dem. Dont worry guys u vl get all ur ans as story will proceed.
And i m sure u guys vl witness craziest thought f mine. And u vl like it too.
Anyway lets move to next part.



Rathod snapped out f his thought by d opening f his cabin's door. He luk at door n finds Maya is standing at door.
He signal her to cme in.
Rathod- What???
Maya- I just cme here to gve d Aisha's report.
Rathod- hmmm!!!
Maya put d file on desk n turned to leave bt Rathod stops her.
Rathod- Ammm! Maya... I... I m sorry for last night. I dont know dt it was u. Otherwise i sud nt attack u.
Rathod- Hows ur wound now.
Maya- kis chot ki baat kar rahe ho Sameer. Bahari chot ki baat kar rahe ho to wo kuch dino me chala jaega. Magar jo chot tumne mere dil ko pahunchai hai na wo sayad hi kabhi thik ho.

Rathod- Luk Maya i dont hv choice dt time. Why dont u understands.???
Maya- Now i also dont hv choice Sameer.
And dont ever think dt i vl forgive u for ur sin.
In my life i never thought dt u vl do like dis. Not even in my dreams.

(Now tear r flowing continuously frm her her eyes.)

She composed herself n turn to face him. Now Rathod clearly sees her tearfull eyes.
She continues.
Maya- And Mr Sameer i vl make sure to turn ur life into hell.

Rathod- I m already in hell.

Maya- Thann get ready for d worst. I vl snatch everything wat u hv.
Rathod- Agar itni nafrat hai to maar kyun nahi deti mujhe.
Maya- I wish!!! Bt i cant!!! I m bound by someones wish.
And also i m not like u.
Rathod- If u think its bcoz f dt relation dan i tell u r free frm dt relation.
Maya- I too dont want to b in dis. Bt i hv to as its sumones dying wish. F whom i luv most.
Maya- Anyways why we r talking abt dis as Ristey nate, Kasme wade tumhare liye to koi mayne nahi rakhte. So plz its better ki hum or tum professionalism maintain kare.
Otherwise agar mera muh khul gaye na to jo log tumhari respect karte hai na wo tumhare uper thukenge.

Giving her peace f mind to Rathod, Maya goes out f cabin. Rathod once again slumped on his chair. Tears r cming out f his eyes. His eyes shows d lot f expression. N again he goes to one f d painfull past.


Rathod holding a man in his arms n dt man with teary eyes pleading to him.
Man- plz dont tell her abt me. She vl shatter. She luvs me.
She wont b able to accept my face. Plz promise me u wont tell her.
Rathod- I... I promise u... I promise u i wont tell her.
Man- Mera ek aur kaam karenge.
Rathod- bol chote... I vl...
Man- Bad me piche to nahi hatoge na.
Rathod- Nahi.
Man- Maine usse ek promise kiya tha us promise ko pura kar dena.
Rathod- I vl... I vl my bhai.


Now Rathod broke down n talk to himself.

Rathod to himself- Kash mujhe pata hota ki tum kis promise ki baat kar rahe the.
Agar malum hota to main kabhi haan nahi karta.
Iss promise ko humne pura to kar diya par sayad kabhi nibha na paenge.
Why! U did dis to me.
WHY!!!! SAMAR! WHY!!!!


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ll_megha_ll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 2:51am | IP Logged
awesome update dear.
continue soon.
Aks13 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 28 December 2012
Posts: 9971

Posted: 17 August 2013 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Awesome update dr.

Yayyy Aisha also joins ETF.

Glaring session was funny.

Loved trio convo about the new acp.

FB was amazing.

Continue soon.
devildiva21 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 26 December 2012
Posts: 14072

Posted: 17 August 2013 at 5:26am | IP Logged
awesome yar...!!
wow so aisha and maya going to join etf..
and maya as same rank as rathore...
ab kya hogaLOL
aur trio ka pov un teeno ke sath kaam karne kaROFL
fb was amazing...!!
arjun ne apni hi behen ko ussi kis hadi se bhagaya LOL
aur ye sam maya ka kya chakkar hai? and arjun helped sam in case of rosh?Shocked
continue soon...

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rizwanaa IF-Dazzler

Joined: 26 December 2012
Posts: 3107

Posted: 17 August 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
superb updates
aisha n acp maya are new members of etf
the fb was awesome n funny
wondering what went wrong
which caused rift between these friends
maya n sameer convo was interesting
n what promise they were talking off??
eager to know abt it
2nd fb was nice with samar n sameer
thanks for pm
update soon

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