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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 50)

rizwanaa IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 January 2014 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
awesome updates
had missed part 15 n read it now
it was awesome as well
Mr.Rawte came to know abt his grand children
n was angry on Maya for hiding this truth
Sameer meeting the kids was nice
n finally the kids got to meet their dad
the family time was superb
the fb was scary
there are chances that Maya can have breast cancer
n now Sameer too knows abt it
n he don't wanna loose her
n his words reflected his concern
Sameer-Maya moments were lovely
eager to know who was the person at door
and why they got shocked
interesting precap
eagerly waiting for the confession
thanks for update
cont soon

ashmifebaa IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 3:58am | IP Logged
thanks for the updating 
next update plz send pm to me 
i am a regular reader of this story...
plz 15 and 16 part comment badme karoonga
zubiya92 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Awesome update
Cont soon
Snehajain IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10063

Posted: 11 January 2014 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Who is at door???AngryAngryAngry
Continue soon...Plz plz plz plz send me PM of next update...
& TAKE CARE...Big smileBig smileBig smile
Harshamara Goldie

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Posted: 12 January 2014 at 6:37am | IP Logged
PART: 17

Sameer opened the door and shocked to see the person at his doorstep.
Maya also cme downstairs to see the untimely guest.

Maya: Sameer kaun aaya hai?

He moved aside to let the person enter. Maya shocked to see him standing at her doorstep. Her eyes filled with tear and in no time hugged him.

Maya: I cant believe dt u r here. I really miss u dad.

Yes the person at d door is Mr Suryakanta Rawte.

Mr. Rawte: Isliye Dad se milne ek baar bhi nahi aayi. Main itna bura hu kya?

Maya: No... Dad its not like dt. I thought u r still angry with me.

Mr. Rawte: No beta. U r my princess. And i only love u.

Sameer: Maya let him cme inside first.

All moved inside ans settled in couch. Sameer is quitly watching the father daughter convo only when he heard his daughter's cry.

Mr. Rawte: Ye bacche ki awaaz.

Sameer: Aap ke grand daughter hai. Sayad koi bura sapna dekh liya hoga. Aap dono bate kariye main dekhta hu.

Mr. Rawte: Maya why didnt u tell me abt kids. Okay let it be. Suno main kuch dino ke liye mumbai main hu and i want u to spend some time with me.

Maya: Dad i hv to ask Sameer first. Than i vl tell u.

Mr. Rawte: okay. Accha to ab main chalta hu.

Maya: Dad baccho se nahi milenge.

Mr. Rawte: Its quite late now. I hv to go. Next time i vl.

Soon Maya bid bye to her dad and went to check on kids. Sameer made them sleep again and coming out of room when he noticed her smiling with teary eyes. Sameer neared her nd wipe her tears. In return she hugged him nd he also hug her back.

Maya: Sameer today i get all what i want. Dad is back in my life. Bhai is also settled with Riya. Our liza is going to marry very soon. And now i also had u. My family is complete.
Sameer caressed her cheek and wipe the tears.

" I love u." finally he said.

She looked in his eyes and lost in dt. And in a moment she bridge the gap between them. Now they are so close dt they can feel their hot breath.

Maya (seductively): Sameer i want u today. Make me urs. I want u in me.

And that is what he is waiting for. He pushed her out of kids room, locked the door carefully and block her nearby wall.

Sameer: Are u sure?

She just nodded her head nd soon finds his rough lips on her. He is sucking, kissing and biting her lips and she is moaning under his passion. He parts from her and scoop her in his strong arms nd lead to their bedroom. He placed her in middle of bed and then sit near her.

Sameer: Maya i want u always by my side. And whatever i hv done in past plz forgive me for dt. I dont want to hurt you.

Maya: Sameer dont u think ki its the wrong time to explain all this.

Sameer smirked at her egearness and resumed to his work.

After sometime...

Maya and Sameer is sleeping peacefully in each other's arm after their tiring lovemaking. Whole room was messed up after their fight of love. Maya's saree is thrown near door, Sameer's shirt is beneath bedside. Some of her broken bangles are lying either on floor or on bed. Sameer is sleeping hugging her near his heart while she was holding his like teddy bear and almost putting her whole weight on him. And a thin sheet is covering them.
Both are sleeping like baby unknown to one person who jumped inside their bedroom and shocked to see both in such form.
Maya shift a bit in her sleep and the intruder hide behind curtains. While Maya shift a little Sameer gets irritated and again holds her tightly and started to kiss her in sleepy mode. Maya too responded him. And seeing them like this the intruder left from their angrily.

Next day they woke up from their dreamland with the continuos door bell ring.

Sameer: Ahhh... Kaun kamina hai jisse subah subah chain nahi hai.

Maya: Jayiye dekhiye na kaun hai. Mujhe mere kapde nahi dikh rahe hai. Kaha pheke aapne.

Sameer: Hoga koi bhi. Darwaja na khulne par khud hi chala jaega.

Maya: Sameer jayiye warna baccho ki nind toot jaegi aur phir unhe samnhalna muskil ho jaega.

Hearing abt kids. Sameer sprinted out to open the door. He opened the door and finds four angry birds standing at doorstep ready to kill with glares.
Arjun, Riya, Liza and Shree stormed inside his house and once again started their fight.

Riya: Arjun aap chahe jo bhi kaho par main ye karungi.

Arjun: tum aisa kuch nahi karogi. Sys.

Shree: Liza dont you dare to think ki main ye karunga.

Liza: agar main ye karungi to u also hv to do this.

Maya: Arre bas karo. Subah subah kis baat pe lad rahe ho.

All: Karwachauth par.

Sameer: Karwachauth??

Riya: Maa sa ka phone aaya tha or wo chahti hai ki main brat karu.

Arjun: Or main nahi chahta.

Riya: Lekin Maa sa ko bura lagega.

Arjun: Tumhe mere liye ye sab karne ki jarurat nahi hai.

Maya: Enough. Riya tum ye brat karna chahti ho ya nahi.

Riya look at Arjun.

Maya: Dont look at him. U want or not.

She nods her head in yes.

Maya: So its final and Arjun u wont say a word. And Liza u r also keeping fast for shree.

Liza: But Bhabhi we are not married.

Maya: So then its perfect time to tell. Ur marriege date is fixed.

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rinku95 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 January 2014 at 8:19am | IP Logged
Loved four fight
Who was that stranger who jumped into their room
rimi_invisible IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6416

Posted: 12 January 2014 at 8:19am | IP Logged
amazing it was maya's dad...he wants to spent time with maya...sounds fishy..ConfusedConfusedConfusedConfused

sameer and maya's love making superb...who came in their room??was it one of their children??who else can??

omg fir jhagda suru?ria and liza keeping fast...i wonder what will happen next...

continue soon plzz...

Snehajain IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 01 January 2013
Posts: 10063

Posted: 12 January 2014 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
So it was Mr. Rawte...inko aur koi time nahi aane ke liye...LOLLOLLOL
Room mein kaun aaya tha????ConfusedConfusedConfused
Loved the four fights...
What about Aisha????Where is she????Where is Samrat????
Plzz plzz plzz plzz Continue soon...

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