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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 5)

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 5:25am | IP Logged
conti nue soon samara...

i'll miss ur old story too...itws going fab...

bt nw atleast continue this one nd update regularly...

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 8:43am | IP Logged
superb start
both parts were amazing
arjun n maya twins n
maya hates sameer
n sameer slapped her
nadiya was amazing as well
thanks for pm
u[date soon

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 8:54am | IP Logged
nice one
arjun's twin sister amazing
sam ne slap kiya
nadiya entry wow

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aisha.Vashishth

conti nue soon samara...

i'll miss ur old story too...itws going fab...

bt nw atleast continue this one nd update regularly...


sorry dear bt i lost d track f my story dts why i discontinued my work. Bt dont worry i m back.
Here u wont b disappoint by me.
A special THNK U for always following my boring story.
Luv Samara.
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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 11:34am | IP Logged
PART: 3

~ ATEET KE PANNE ~

SCENE- ETF Introgation room~

Rathod n Arjun r not beliving Nadiya is an undercover cop. They r asking d same question again n again and she is repeating her words.

Rathod- Nadiya sach sach batao tumhare gang k barein me.

Nadiya- U fools! Main kitni bar kahu ki i m a cop.

Arjun- Than why we dont hv any record f urs.

Nadiya- As its deleted.

Arjun- Is there any person who can take ur side.

Nadiya- Why dont u call ur DIG. He knows me vry well.

Rathod to shree- Shree call DIG sir.

Shree- Sir dere is no need to call as he is here.

DIG Coehlo enters ETF Office.All greeted him.

DIG- Rathod hv u arrested any girl named Nadiya.

Rathod- Yes Sir!

DIG- Leave her as she is an undercover cop.

Rathod orderd chotu to bring Nadiya. She cme n meet DIG.

Nadiya- Thnk u so much sir for being here for me.

DIG- Its ok n sorry ki hamare wajah se tumhara mission fail ho gaya.

Nadiya- Why r u sorry sir. Jinhe sorry kehna chahiye wo to... Khair leave it.

Rathod n Arjun glared her n than thier glare turned to choree as they were smiling at Nadiya's direct taunt.

DIG- Anyway officers meet AISHA KAPOOR, AMMUNITION EXPERT N UNDERCOVER SPECIALIST. Ur new team mates.


Choree now silently smiling n luking at thier chiefs.

Aisha- Sir where is she ? She is also going to join nah.

DIG- YES! She vl b here at any moment. She is bringing ur proofs.

SCROLL DOWN~

Edited by Samara92 - 16 August 2013 at 11:45am

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
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SCENE- ETF Conference room

DIG- TEAM! u r going to hv one more member. She vl b here at any time.

Scene shifts to ETF hall.

A girl wearing a short dress enters in office premises. Evryone eyeing her frm top to bottom n she grins at thier act. She marched to reception area n ask abt DIG.

GIRL- DIG Coehlo. He called me.

Receptionist- Wait a min ma'am. I'll ask him.

Receptionist goes to DIG n inform abt her. He tell her to guide her in conference room.

Receptionist to girl- Ma'am evry1 is waiting for u at conference room.
Girl moved to conference room.
She enters room n all except Aisha n DIG get d shock f thier life.

DIG to all- Here she is. Ur 2nd new member ACP MAYA RAWTE...( Bt she snapped him by saying)

Maya- Its Maya...ACP MAYA!

Shree to Riya- Ri! Yeh definately Arjun sir ki hi behen hai. Dono ek jaise akdu n full f ego.
Riya glared him.

DIG- Maya is f same rank f Rathod. So she can also take d decision f ETF bt only with d consent f Rathod.
(luking at Rathod) Bt final decision vl b always f Rathod.

As DIG disclose d news dere r three persons r hell worried for d future f ETF... No...no... Thier future. They r our Shree, Riya n Chotu. Sumtime later DIG Coehlo leaves frm dere.

Scene- Etf cafetaria

All r sitting silently. Shree breaks d silence.

Shree- yaar pichale janam me kaun se paap kiye the humne jo hume aisi saza mil rahi hai.

Chotu- sahi kaha tune. Pehle Rathod sir than unko join kiya Arjun sir ne. Badi muskil se dono ne ek sath kaaam karna suru kiya tha. Bt ye DIG Sir ne ek aur ACP bhej diya.
Riya- wo bhi Rathod sir ki rank ka. God ab humara kya
hoga.
Shree- wahi hoga jo manjure MAYA RAWTE RATHOD hoga.

All chuckled at dt.

Riya- Bt guys Rathod sir or Maya ka tension to Arjun or Rathod sir k bich k tension se bhi jyada danger lagta hai.

Shree- ye ek dusre k sath kaise kaam karenge.

Chotu- Arjun sir ko bhul gaye kya. yeh teeno ek sath kaise kaam karenge.
Riya- ummhu... Inke sath hum kaise kaam karenge.

All again goes to thier thoughts.

Here Arjun n Rathod r sitting at thier cabin n thinking abt thier old time.

FLASHBACK~

Rathod Mansion~
At- 10 pm.

Loud soud f phone ringtone disturb d sleep f d great Sameer damsingh Rathod.

Ringtone is "HAR EK FRND KAMINA HOTA HAI."

He sees d caller id n mutters.
Sameer- maine sahi ringtone rakha hai ki "HAR EK FRND KAMINA HOTA HAI."

He recieves phone. Before he says sumthing caller starts his part.
Caller- Sam bina kuch bole tu chup chap mere ghar aa ja.
Sameer- Arjun main nahi aa raha hu. Ek to aaj kitne tym bad chain se sone ko mila hai or tu chahta hai ki main tere ghar aau. No way. Gud nyt.
He cut d call n goes to sleep.
Few hrs later~
Arjun is waiting for Sam. He arrives there at around 11 pm.

Arjun- mujhe pata tha ki tu aaega.

Sam- just shut up. Aur bol kyun bulaya.

Arjun- Chup chap bike me baith.

Sam- par hum ja kaha rahe hai.

Arjun- Ek shadi attend karni hai.

Sam- WHAT!!!!!!

SOMETIME LATER~

Both f dem r outside a big bunglow.
Arjun handed him a wedding card n instructs him.

Arjun- Tu shadi me jaa...
Sam- n couples ko wish karke aau.
Arjun- pehle puri baat sun.. Waha main entrance ke right side k 4 bade windows chod k sath wale balcony k niche khada ho jana.
Sam- aur waha karunga kya?

Arjun- dont worry tu bas waha pahunch. Rest wo dekh legi.
Sam- kaun???

Arjun- tu sawal bahut puchta hai. Tu jaa to.

Sameer goes to where he is ask to stand.

He luk at d wedding card n read it.

Sameer- Maya weds Ajay.

Suddenly sumthng hit his head. He luk at ground n found a back bag. Again sumthing fall on him. This time it was a pointed heel. He luk up to enquire who d hell is throwing all stuffs n found a girl beautifully dressed in bridal dress is trying to jump frm balcony.
She cme down n asked him.
Girl- where is Arjun?
Sameer- outside.
Girl- ok lets go.
Both goes outside. Girl hugs Arjun.
Girl- Thnk u so much, Arjun.
Arjun- Anythng for u dear.
Sam- Ahem... Ahem. Arjun ab bataega kuch.
Arjun- Oh sorry!!! Sam meet my lil sister Maya.
Maya- I m not liltle. We r twins.
Arjun- bt i m 1 min older dan u. So basicaly i m ur big brother.
Sam- Ek min. Maya ye naam kahi suna suna lag rahga hai.
Maya- Mr moustach man aap k hath me jo card hai. Usi me padha hoga.

Sam- WHAT!!! U MEAN TO SAY U D BRIDE.
Maya- yep!!!!!
Sam- Arjun matlab tune mujhe teri behen ko usi ki shadi se bhagane ko bulaya tha.
Arjun- yep!!!!!
Sam- stop u to saying yep!!! Yep!!!!! Mujhe pata hota to main kabhi teri help nhi karta.
Arjun isliye to nahi bataya.
Sam- WHAT!!!!!
Arjun- now u stop saying WHAT!!!! And take her to ur home.
Sam- WHY MINE...
Maya- As i cant goes to his house. Dad vl search me thier first.
Sam- I m not taking her.
Arjun- Sam help me as i help u in case f Roshni.
Sam- ok fine. Bt tell her not to call me moustach man.

Maya- Than wat vl i call u MOUSTACH MAN.

Sameer- call me by my name. SAMEER!!!!
ALL BID BYE!!!

FLASHBACK END.

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
hoon .. interesting..maya and sameer kuch scene hai pakka..

thanks for the pms

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