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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 43)

rizwanaa IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 01 December 2013 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
awesome teaser
plz do cont soon

fly.high IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 09 December 2013 at 5:02am | IP Logged
c'on samara
update fast
waiting!
waiting!!
waiting!!!


update?
update??
update???
update????
update?????

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Posted: 09 December 2013 at 5:18am | IP Logged
beautiful teaser 
Plz update Soon 
Cant wait to read more Smile
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Posted: 09 December 2013 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Part 14:
Maya left the new couples at their love nest nd went to join Sameer who was busy in glaring other tom n jerry couples talking at roadside. Maya noticed it nd smiled at possessive brother.
Maya- Itna ghuroge to ankhe bahar aa jaaegi.
Sameer came out of his trance nd looked back nd found Maya with 2 cups of coffee.
Sameer- I m just affraid. Wo bacchi hai.
Maya- She is not a kid. She is grown up girl.
Sameer- I knw but cant help it. Wo mere apne bacho ki tarah hi hai.
Bacho se yaad aaya Samar aur Samaya ne bahut pareshan kiya hoga na.
Maya- U knw main kabhi kabhi doubt kaarti hu ki wo kab jyada badmash the.
Jab mere pet me the ya phir ab.
Sameer- I dont knw as u didnt tell me abt their existance.
Maya- I m sorry for dt. But u can relive dt moment.
Sameer- How?
Maya- cme...
And she lead him to her room where all wall were filled with kids pic frm birth to till now. Sameer's eyes get filled with tears.
Maya handled him some CDs.
Maya- Yeh kuch videos hai jab me pregnant thi aur kuch after delivery ki. Now u can also knw abt our kids' birth.
Sameer greedily snatched all CDs nd played it.
He settled himself on big bed. Maya smiled at him nd also joined him on bed. Now they are going to rejoice their kid's childhood nd dt too together.

Ariya ~

When Maya lead Arjun to his room, he literally locked d door angrily. Once he was inside he was on search of his prey i.e. RIYA.
Arjun- Riya... Riya jaha kahi ho chup chap bahar aa jao.
When he didnt get any ans he shouts her name more in anger.
Arjun- RIYA... Chup chap bahar aa jao warna main bhul jaaunga ki tum kaun ho.
Riya- To bhul jaiye... Par main bahar nhi aaungi.
Arjun- R...I...Y...A...
Riya again heared his roaring voice which made her bhigi billi nd she cme out of her hide out.
Seeing her clad in beautiful green navari saree made him to open his mouth in O shape. In a moment he forgot he was angry on Riya or she is Riya. Riya in saree made Arjun to hallucinate abt Roshni in her place.
He walked slowly to her nd grabbed her by waist nd pull her to him.
Arjun- U r looking irresistable.
Riya- Excuse me. Dhekhiye door rahiye mujhse.
Arjun (lost)- How can i?
Riya- what? Aap pagal ho gaye hai. Aur main to aapke kehne par bahar bhi aa gayi.
Arjun- Oh plz stop ir rantting nd cme in my arms.
Riya- No way...
Arjun- Mujhse jitna mehnat karwaogi utna pachtana padega.
Riya- Hv u lost ur mind anywhere?
Arjun- stop it yaar. (holds her hand) I love u Roshni.
(And hugged her)
Now Riya realised abt his weird behaviour nd wishper slowly.
Riya- Sir... Arjun sir main riya hu Roshni nahi.
Than Arjun cme out of his dreamland nd pushed her so hard dt she directly hit her head on bedside. Arjun didnt bother to look at her and cme out of room.

Shriza ~

Liza who was forcelly sent by Maya to bid bye to Shree, is now having a verble fight with him at d roadside in midnight.
Shree to liza- Jai ho Liza maiya ki... Kya plan tha tumhare bhaiya bhabhi ke divorce ko rokne ka.
Liza- Dhire bolo shree... Koi sun lega.
Shree- Main kyun dhire bolu. Ek baat kaan khol kar sun lo liza main tum jaisi chuhiya se bilkul bhi shadi nhi karne wale.
Liza- What? Tumne mujhe chuhiya bulaya. How dare u?
Shree- Tumhe chuhiya na bulau to kya karu. Musibat me daal kar khud bill me jaa kar chup gayi.
Liza- Main chupi nhi thi. Wo to bas bhai ko humara relation genuine lage isliye sharmane ki acting kar rhi thi.
"kya tum log acting kar rahe the"- they heared a knwn voice of arjun, who cme to find some peace but get shocked abt shriza.
Later shriza explained whole matter to him.
Arjun- To ab humare paas sirf 6 months hai inke dil me pyar jagane ke liye. We have to work hard.
Shriza- yes sir...

Far from these couples there is one more couples having good time.

Aisha- So Samrat mission kaisa tha. Jiski talash thi mila ya nhi.
Samrat- Mission successful bhu tha or nhi bhi.
Aisha- matlab?
Samrat- matlab kuch bade naam bahar to aaye lekin jis bande k liye maine apna sab kuch daav par laga diya wohi nhi mila. Mano ki he never exist.
Aisha- Kya tumhe nhi pata wo kaun hai.
Samrat- janta to hu but i need strong proof. Kyunki us insaan se bahuto ki zindagi judi hai or bigadi bhii.
Aisha- Anyway ye sab chodo. Lets talk abt us.
Samrat- ok. But pehle ye batao ki tumhare chief ka divorce hone wala tha kya hua.
Aisha- Nahi hua... Arjun sir or liza k karan nhi hua.
Samrat- abhi Naam kya liya. Arjun.
Aisha- Haa...
Samrat- Ek min Arjun... Arjun Rawte... The ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE.
Aisha- Ha but tum kyun ARJUN JAAP kar rahe ho.
Samrat- Tumne bataya kyun nhi ki Arjun Ki team mate ho tum. Wait a min dt means Sameer Rathod tumhara chief. Right.
Aisha- Yes...
Samrat- Means Maya nd he is getting divorce.
Aisha- Why r u so shocked? Anyway u love me nah?
Samrat (lostly)- yes..
Aisha- Thn prove it. I want 2 meet ur parents. Mke me urs.
Samrat- What? Wait.. Aisha listen i dont luv u. I luv some1 else. I needed u for my mission nd its over now. I dont want to hurt u but its true. I m here to clr all. Plz frgv me. I m sorry.

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Awesome updt. So Sam- Maya watching kids videos. Ariya kheling chuppan chupai. Awwe Arjun lost in riya's beauty nd remembers Roshni. Feeling bad for Ariya. And Shriza koi kaam nhi hai kya raat ko lad rahe hai. Hooo... Arjun cme to knw abt their plan. And i dont knw whats wrong with Samrat. Poor Aisha... He used her for his mission. And dil k tookde kar Sorry bolta hai. I hate Samrat. Cont soon
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Posted: 09 December 2013 at 11:04am | IP Logged
super update
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Posted: 09 December 2013 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Awesome di...
Reading ur story after such a long time.
U made my night.
Whenever i read ur ff i imagined myself.
Thnk god... Ramaya ka divorce nhi hua.
Luv it.
Cont soon.
fly.high IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 09 December 2013 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
wow after such a long time ur updating...
pls update frequently dear...

wat a beautiful update...
Sam and Maya together watching kids childhood picsm..so cute!

Ariya part was so nice...bt poor riya...

Shriza was as usual fighting...lolz
now this samrat is being too much mysterious...

continue soon...plz

love
Aisha

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