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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 39)


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Update kab milega dear ?CryCry
jaldi likh ke PM Kar dena Smile

Harshamara Goldie

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PART: 15

When all the couples are busy in their nok jhok love far from them a man was living his life with his principles and his huge business empire.
A old age man reading newspaper and smiled at his achievement. Few men came to congratulate him.
Man1- Congratulation Sir. Aap ek bar phir se India ke no 1 indrustrial ban gaye.
Man2- Arre sir to humesha se hi no 1 the, hai...
"Par humesha nahi rahenge." another man came to scene.
He is 2nd best industrialist Mr. Gupta.
Mr. Gupta- Sahi suna aap ne aakhir kab tak ye empire rahega i mean ab aap budhe ho rahe hai Mr. Suryakant Rawte. Har ek powerful empire ka aant hota hai aur Rawte empire bhi apne aant ki or badh raha hai.
Mr. Rawte- Mujhe kam na samajhana Mr. Gupta. Kahi aisa na ho ki meri chinta karte karte apki chita ka waqt na aa jaye. Or ek bad jarur yaad rakhna Rawte empire ka kabhi aant nahi hoga. Kabhi nahi.
Sometimes later...
Mr. Rawte- Suresh Wo kaha hai?
Suresh (PA)- Sir wo sab Mumbai main hai. Aur...
Mr. Rawte- Aur?
Suresh- Arjun baba ne dusri shadi kar li. Aur Maya baby Damad ji ke sath wapas rehne lagi hai. Kuch dino mein bacche bhi unke sath rehne aa jayenge.
Mr. Rawte- Bacche?
Suresh- Ji sir aapke grand childs aur Maya baby ke bacche.
Mr. Rawte- Baccho ke bare mein Maya ne hume batane ki zarurat nahi samjhi. Maya ne yeh bahut galat kiya.
Suresh Mumbai ki tickets book karwao.
2 days later...
All the couples are doing breakfast at Ramaya's house but dinning table is seemed that soon it vl turn into battlefield.
Shriza as usal is in their fighting mode abt some silly issues. But two couples r vry welly ready to kill each other.
Ariya r sitting opposite of each other. Arjun is fuming at Riya seeing her maang filled with sindoor and Mangalsutra around her neck whereas Riya is angry on him for hurting her forhead. Same is the case with Ramaya but a cute one. They are fighting just like married couples do. Whenever Sameer was going to take anything to eat Maya passed it to other before him. This angered him more and he angrily leave dinning table and moved out for office.
Later at office all of them are hell busy in solving a case that time Maya get a call from Her Mother in law.
Maya- Hello Maa sa... Ha... Thik hai... Ok... Main chali jaungi.
Later in evening time...
Maya- Sameer bacche aa rahe hai madhav ji ke sath main unhe pick karne jaa rahi hu.
Hearing abt kids arrival Sameer's eyes filled with tear of happiness. Maya noticed it and asked him to join her.
Maya- Kya tum aana chahoge?
Sameer happily nodded his head nd both moved to airport.
All saw them going out happily.
Riya- Aisa kya ho gaya ki jo subah se ek dusre par bhadak rahe the ab sath sath bahar ja rahe hai.
Liza- Samar or Samaya aa rahe hai.
Arjun- Unke bich ki yahi kadi unhe ek din ek kar ke rehegi.
Shree- hope so...
Scene shifts to airport.. ..
Sameer is waiting anxiously waiting for his kids. First time he is going to meet his kids. Thats when he saw his royal guard Madhav coming out of terminal with two kids. Samaya is in Madhav's arm playing with her doll and Samar is walking in his side just like a Rathod full of attitude just like his dad or u can say little Sameer himself. He chuckled at them. Kids saw their mumma and came to her runningly.
Samar& Samaya- Mumma...
Maya get on her knees and hugged her kids. Both kids also noticed him. Sameer is waiting patiencely for his turn to hug his kid but when he heard what they called him couldn't hold more and hugged them. For the first time they called him Dad.
Maya- Tumhe kisne kaha ki he is ur Dad?
Samaya- Dadisa...told us.
All happily came out of airport and kids starts thier wish list to their dad. Sameer is driving and Maya is sitting next to him and kids at back seat.
Samar- Dad bhookh lagi hai.
Sameer- Ok resturant chalte hai.
Samaya- Pal mujhe abhi zor ki bhookh lagi hai (turns to her mumma) mumma doodh...
Now maya in a fixed state what to say her.
Maya- beta not here...
Samaya- No i want... Mujhe bhookh lag rahi hai.
Sameer- But beta doodh nahi hai abhi.
Samaya- Hai mumma ke paas..
At first Sameer didn't understand what she said but later it hit his mind nd he applied break suddenly at roadside.
Sameer- Ammm... Main gadi se bahar jaa raha hu.. U...can feed her..
Saying so he get out of car leaving her with kids.
(Note- Maya still breastfeed them.)
When she is done with feeding she called him and he take his seat. After feeding both has a habbit of little nap. Sameer enqired abt it.
May- Wo dono ko sone ki aadat hai.
Soon all reached at resturant nd have their quick dinner and all this was noticed by two pair of eyes unknown to them.
At Ramaya's house ...

Maya- Samar Samaya yeh hai aapke Arjun mama and Riya mami.
Both kids hugged dem.
Samar- mumma nind aa lahi hai. Dad chalo na sone.
Now Sameer is on bed playing with kids while maya is reading fairy tell story. Later she found all of three dozed off even Sameer. She smiled at them and drifted in sleep too hugging her kids by both sides.

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Posted: 23 December 2013 at 10:28am | IP Logged
awesome update
love it
ZaBeerHolic IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 December 2013 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Lovely update.
Finally,Sameer bhai gets to meet his kids.
Lovely names of the kids.
Loved the cute nokjhok moments of the couples.
Continue sooonish.
Please,mujhe pm karna.

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Posted: 23 December 2013 at 10:35am | IP Logged
rathod itna sarma kiyu raha hai?Confused

but a beautiful back i am so happy...update soon...plz
Harshamara Goldie

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Posted: 23 December 2013 at 10:37am | IP Logged
So friends here i made entry of Suryakant Rawte. He is a selfish man. Nothing matter to him. He only wants power and power. He wished to rule the business world with his Son but he has another plan. Which he dont like. Arjun chased his dream and Mr Rawte distanced himself from him for not listening him. Once he was also living happily with his Daughter but she also choose the path of her own. But he accept her decision of marrying her with Samar. But destiny had stored sumthing else for her nd she distanced herself frm all. Now Mr Rawte is alone with his huge empire with no heir. Due to his ego he vl never bowed infront of his son. So he is planning something vry big. And he is determined to play the game of life according to his will. After his entry all the lives are going to change and here after the actual story starts. To know more abt it stay tuned to story. ""RISTEY... NAYE YA PURANE"" PS:- KEEP COMMENTING. AND I VL GIVE U FREQUENT UPDTS.

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Harshamara Goldie

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Posted: 23 December 2013 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by khemanisarita

awesome update
love it

thnks dear.
Harshamara Goldie

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Posted: 23 December 2013 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zebbie0504

Lovely update.
Finally,Sameer bhai gets to meet his kids.
Lovely names of the kids.
Loved the cute nokjhok moments of the couples.
Continue sooonish.
Please,mujhe pm karna.

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