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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 37)

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nice teaser.. Continue soon..
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Posted: 27 November 2013 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Part: 13 (a)
Jhooth aur Sach ka Parda.

Liza who was tensed frm docter's advice nd thinking how to tell all abt to Maya bumped with Shree. Shree looked at Maya nd asked d matter.

Shree- kya hua tum itni pasina pasina kyun ho gayi hai.

Liza tell him everything.

Shree- Its really serious matter but yeh zaroori bhi to hai. Mere khayal se Arjun sir hi hai jo Maya ko 2nd marriage ke liye mana sakte hai.

Liza- what? Sameer bhai ke hote 2nd marriage.

Shree- What? Sameer sir? Par kya Maya sir ke liye razi hogi. I mean she widow of ur Samar bhai na?
Liza- kisne kaha? Maya Bhabhi ka pura naam Mrs. Maya Sameer Damsingh Rathod hai. Aur woh Sameer bhai ki legally wedded wife hai.
Shree- What? But we thought ki sir is becholer. Aisha tera pata to cut hai.
Aisha- Shree i m already engaged so stop match making.
Shree- what?
Aisha- yes n his name is Samrat.
Liza- Shree yeh what what chodo plz. And help me.
Riya- I think shree is right. Tumhe Arjun sir se baat karni chahiye.
Liza also thinks d same nd goes to meet Arjun.
After awhile... ..

Arjun- thik hai liza main Maya se baat karunga. I hope wo meri baat maan jaye but usse pehle tumhare bhai se baat karna padega.

Arjun after talking with liza goes to Sameer.

Arjun- Rathod tumse ek baat karni hai.

Rathod- Hmm bolo...

Arjun- Rathod as u knw ki Samar nd Samara Maya or tumhare kids hai. But u dont knw ki they r born b4 time.

Rathod- matlab?
Arjun- matlab dono baccho ka birth 8 months me hua hai. Aur uper se twins bhi to Maya ko thodi complication hui thi but after dt maya ke health me kuch problem hone lagi. And her doc advise her something bt she refuse to follow dt nd started to take some high power medicines aware of d fact ki one day it vl harm her.
But still dere is hope ki uski health thik ho jaye but she has to follow d same advise.
Rathod- and what's dt?
Arjun- You guys hv to think abt another...
Rathod- another what.. Rawte?
Arjun- Another baby...
Rathod- What? Last time it happened with flow of time. We both were not in senses. And jab realise hua it was too late.
And u know she still love Samar.
Arjun (angrily)- to main kya karu Rathod... Its happening only bcoz of ur damn brother. Thank god u kill him or else i would be d one to kill him.
Suddenly they heard Maya's voice
Maya- Arjun how dare u to lie me. Tumne mujhse jhoot bola ki to save u Sameer shot samar as goon said to choose btwn u nd samar. And he choose u nd fired at Samar (guys remember Maya nd Arjun's cabin talk after which she get soft on sameer)
Maya- But u lied to me. Main to yaha baccho ko unke pita se baat karwane aayi thi but yaha to ek katil khada hai. Aur me nhi chahti hu ki kisi katil ka saya unpe pade.
Arjun- Maya jis bare me nhi janti uske bare me na bolo to hi behtar hai. Samar ko tum nhi janti...
Before he can say anything Rathod stops him nd maya cont.
Maya- Aur sayad aap Sameer ko nhi jante. He killed my love nd u want me to expect once again with his child. No way main mar jaaungi but iske saath kabhi ek nhi hongi.
Never...
Arjun who seemed to control his anger burst on Maya.
Arjun- Sam... (Yes sam) chahe jaise bhi hai kam se kam wo gaddar to nhi hai. Yes Maya tum jis Samar ke liye Sameer ko thukra rhi ho wo aur koi nhi balki ek gaddar hai.
Jab hum shadi wale raat ko drug deal raid k liye gaye the. Samar bhi wahi tha. At first we thought ki he was also dere to nab criminals nd was on under cover but he was not.

Flashback~

Sameer nd Arjun was all set up to grab smugler but Arjun sees Samar dere.

Arjun- Yeh Samar bhi same case par kaam kar raha haii kya?

Sameer- lagta to hai. Chal jaa kr milte hai.

Arjun- pagal hai kya sayad undercover hai pass gaye to gadbad ho jaaegi. Kuch der rukte hai zarurat padi to lenge hero wali entry.
After some time Samar while talking with few man came to d same place where samjun were hiding unkwn to dem.

One man- kamal hai sahab din me imandaar police wale aur raat k kale andhere me drugs ke saudagar.
Sikander sahab aap se bahut khus honge.
Last time bhi to aapne unka itna bada maal paas karwa diya aur dusmano ke pakad liye.
Wah sahab.
On the other both Samjun cant hear anymore nd cme out of dere hide out.
Samar got shocked to see dem.
Sameer holding Samar's collor.
Sameer- Samar i cant believe u r behind all dis. Che...
But suddenly firing started and all were busy in firing. Only den Sameer saw Samar aiming at Arjun nd to save him he shot back at Samar.

Flashback ends~

Arjun- Aur tum is baat se hurt na ho isliye wo wish nd promise wala part maine hi Samar se karwaya tha. Kyunki main tumhe dukhi nhi dekh sakta tha.
Arjun- Aur Sameer bhi tumse bahut pyar karta tha jo ise bhi nhi pata tha.
Maya is now in total shock nd Sameer's eyes full of tears.
Arjun- Sameer ne wahi kiya jo kanoonan sahi tha. Gunehgar ko saza di. Bas aur kuch nhi.
Isliye main humesha se Sam ke sath khada raha. Wo aaj tak sirf aur sirf mere promise ki wajah se chup tha. Main nhi chahta tha ki ye baat tum jano but Holi ke agle din tumne humari sari batein sun li.

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Posted: 27 November 2013 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
read it in one go.!!!! its really diff story!!!!
soo finalyy maya comes to know the truth!! wat will happen now??

who is the man talked to aisha???!! is samrat is samar??? or i missed any link???

update soon and pm me
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Posted: 27 November 2013 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
PART: 13 (b)

Maya's heart broke into pieces after knowing truth. To whom she loved beyoned anything was a traitor. In shock mode she goes to her room nd cried her heart out. All team cme to abt it nd Liza was feeling vry guilty to misbehave with Sameer as she also dont know anything abt truth.
Liza to Sameer- Bhai sa i m really vry sorry. But bhai plz help bhabhi. She needs another baby.
Sameer- Liza i cant do anything abt it. I cant force her. It vl be her decision.
Arjun- I vl talk to her.
Saying so he moved inside Maya's room who is staring out of window.
Arjun moves 2ward her nd place his hand on her shoulder. She turns to him nd as expected she is crying.
Arjun- Maya plz dont cry. Just forget everything nd move on.
Maya- Bhai (4 d 1st time she called him bhai) kya life me move on karna itna easy hai. Agar aisa hai to aap kyun nhi aage badhe.
Bhai Maine Samar ko accha insaan soch kar pyar kiya par wo gaddar nikla. Aur sach janne ke bad mere dil me jo pyar tha wo bhi mar gaya. Aur na hi main Sameer ko apna paungi. Isliye maine ek faisala liya hai.
Arjun- Kaisa faishla?
Maya- To divorce him. Maine lawyer ko bol diya hai aur humare mumbai pahunchte hi i vl divorced him.
Arjun- Maya pagal mat bano. Sameer ek acha life partner hai.
Maya- But not i m. Meri wajah se usne bahut kuch khoya hai ab waqt aa gaya hai sab kuch pane ka.
Arjun- Use apna sath aur pyar bhi do.
Maya- Bhai kehna bahut aasan hai but karna muskil. Aap ko bhi sath aur pyar ki zarurat hai.
And plz main apna irada nhi badalne wali. Main Sameer ko is riste ke bandhan se mukt kar dungi.
Arjun listening all dis cme out of room nd inform all abt her decision.
Sameer also agreed on it nd goes out of hospital to get some alone time. Arjun also goes to hospital terrace to calm himself followed by riya. But all r thinking how to stop there divorce.
Aisha nd Chotu goes inside to change maya's decision but they cant.
Liza expect d same.
Shree- Ye Maya na pagal ho gayi. God ne second chance diya hai jo ki uske paas 1st chance tha use gawana chah rahi hai.
Liza- what r u saying?
Shree- Arre Sameer sir uske 1st chance jo ab 2nd chance bhi hai.
Liza- specky stop talking non sense thing. Nd think to stop divorce. Mumbai jate hi ye dono divorce paper par sign karenge.
Shree- Mumbai jane se rok de.
Aisha- shut up shree. Umm... Let me think... Ya kyun na hum inhe ehsaas dila de ki they r in love with each other nd atleat give a chance to their marrige.
Chotu- Par Aisha 1 din me pyar nhi jaga sakte na as we r leaving 2morrow 4 Mumbai.
Shree- Kash aisa kuch hota ki we can stop dere divorce.
All once again goes to thinking mode.

Ariya at hospital terrace-

Riya- Is everything all right?
Arjun- Dont know Riya yeh Maya kyun nhi samajh rahi hai. Use Sameer k sath uske riste ko ek mauka dena chahiye.
Riya- Wo zarur degi bas use samjhana hoga.
Arjun- Samjhaya maine par usne Rathod ko divorce dene ka faisala kar liya hai.
Riye- Aap ne gusse me samjhaya hoga.
Arjun- matlab?
Riya- I dont knw ki aap logo ki kya problem hai but Jo baat aap ne gusse me kahi wahi baat aap pyar se bhi samjha sakte the na.
Arjun- Tumne suna nhi usne kya kaha.
Riya- Sir ek baat kahu hum logo ko rai to badi aasani se de dete hai but jab khud ko unpe amal karne ki bari aati hai to piche hatne lagte hai.
Arjun- Matlab tum kehna chahti ho ki main dubara shadi kar lu.
Riya- maine aisa kab kaha.
Arjun- Maya aisa chahti hai ki pehle me apni zindagi me aage badhu dan wo uske riste ke bare me sochegi.
Riya- to agar maya ko samjhane ka yahi tarika hai to yahi sahi.
Arjun- Riya tumhe pata bhi hai ki tum kya bol rahi ho.
Riya- I knw sir. Main jaanti hu ki u cant marry but acting to kar sakte ho na.
Nxt day all headed 2wards Mumbai. On their way RaMaya inform every1 dt 2day dey vl go to magistrat office. Ariya nd shriza luked at each other. Sameer dropped all at etf headquarter nd along with Maya goes to court.
Here at conference room shriza and chotu, Aisha thinking something.
Liza- Specky agar tum mujhse ek wish mangte to kya mangte.
Shree- Yahi ki tum mujhe specky na bulao.
Liza- okay. Ur wish is granted but u hv to do somethng in return.
Shree- my wish ur command. I m ready 4 everythng.
Liza- what? Any way lets go we dont hv time.
Shree- for what?
Liza- to stop divorce.

Inside Magistrat office,
Family court

Magistrate- To yeh aap logo ka final decision hai. Ek bar phir se soch lijiye.
Maya- Yes its our final decision.
As magistrat was going to speak d door of office get open with a bang.
And there is our shriza to stop divorce.
Sameer- Liza tum dono yaha. Is evrythng alright.
Liza- No bhaiya nothing is alright.
Maya- kya hualiza?
Liza- bhaiya & bhabhi meri ek wish thi ki jab meri shadi ho to aap 2no mera kanyadan karo. Kya aap divorce meri shadi ke baad nhi le sakte. I luv some1 nd want to marry him.
Ramaya- kaun?
Liza ([email protected])- Shree.
Shree- yes.
Liza- i luv shree.
Rathod- kya? Tum aur shree pyar?
But suddenly he get shockd to see ariya who r dere to stop divorce in their own style.

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Posted: 27 November 2013 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
superb update
feeling sad for Maya
she's totally heartbroken after knowing the truth abt Samar
Arjun-Maya n Ariya convo as nice
Shree-Liza's plan to stop the divorce of Sameer-Maya is nice
eager to know what Ariya will be doing to stop the same
thanks for update
cont soon

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