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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 33)

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Then Arjun went to maya to explain the complexity of situation.
Inside Maya's room-
Arjun- Um.. Maya actually dere is a problem.
Maya- what problem?
Arjun- I hv to go out for a case. Its important.
Maya- Not u too Arjun.
Arjun- too means?
Maya- Samar is also going for some case. He called me to tell dt barat vl come on time bt he wont b with dem. He vl cme a little late.
Arjun- what how can he do dis. I vl talk to him.
Maya- No Arjun. Dont call him. He is doing his duty just like u. Now go n dont make me wait.
Roshni- oh god i dont believe it. Tum sab ek jaise ho.
Arjun and Maya smiled at frusteted Roshni.
Arjun- I vl try to cme asap.
Maya- aana to hai but sath me us stupid ko bhi lete aana.
Now go!
Arjun pecked maya's forehead nd went to change in formals.
Inside Arjun-Roshni's room-
Roshni- Arjun tum logo ka abhi jana jaroori hai kya. I mean todha wait kar lete. Shadi complt hone k bad chale jana.
Arjun- Rosh criminal maya ki shadi end hone tak intezar nhi karega. Wo jald se jald apne kaam ko pura kark bhagne ki koshish karega.Sys.
Roshni- Tum jaa rahe ho koi baat nhi hai but Samar i m not feeling well.
Arjun- i know dear but its our duty. Like u Maya wont b feeling well. Go to maya she needs ur help.
After consoling Roshni he went to crime spot. And Roshni made her way towards Maya's room.

Inside Maya's room-
Maya was crying very badly nd Roshni was trying her best to stop her. Thats when Mrs Rathod entered her room. Maya composed herself a bit.
Mrs Rathod- Are ye kya meri bahu ke ankhon me itne mote mote ansu. Ane do Samar ko acche se khabar lungi.
Maya- sab ki khabar lena. Arjun nd Sameer bhi chale gaye.
Mrs Rathod- ok teeno ko dantungi. Now smile. Ab jab tak wo log aate hai hum shadi ke pehli wali kuch rasma kar lete hai.
Maya- hmm!!
Rawte house was decorated very beautiful just like a bride. As Maya was cming down with Mrs Rathod nd Roshni, Maya saw Arjun and Sameer at entrance.
Roshni also noticed dem.
Roshni- Aunty ji wo dekhiye Sameer aur Arjun aa gaye.
Mrs Rathod- Matlab Samar bhi aa gaya. Chalo accha hai. Rasme bhi jaldi ho jaengi. Phir shadi.
Maya was now facing at entrance to see her groom but the next sight shook everyone from core.
Maya saw a motionless body of Samar at wheel chair who is counting his last breath.
All except Maya rushed to him.
Mrs Rathod- Samar yeh sab kya hai. Agar ye koi majak hai to ise abhi isi waqt band kariye.
Samar (breathing heavily)- I m sorry mom but its not a joke. I m here to fulfill my last wish nd promise.
Mrs Rathod- what r u talking abt samar?
Samar- Mom maine Maya se ek promise kiya tha ki woh ek din Rathod khandan ki bahu banegi aur wish ye hai ki main Maya ko hamesha Suhagan dekhna chahta hun.
Hamesha.
But as u know ki mere sare promises bhai pure karte hai isliye ab bhai meri wish nd promise puri karenge.
Mrs Rathod- Samar pagal mat bano kuch nhi hoga tumhe. Sameer kuch kahiye inhe.
Ye kaisi batein kar raha hai.

Maya who was standind there as a statue cme to reality when Maya heard him saying abt his wish n promise ans ran upstair to her room and locked it from inside.
Soon Roshni panicked not seeing Maya dere Arjun and Roshni rushed to her room.
Arjun- Maya open d door.
Maya plz dont try to do something foolish. For Samar's sake open it.
Inside room Maya was going to cut her nerves bt hearing abt samar she openwd d door. Arjun and Roshni cme inside nd make her understand abt her n Sameer's wedding. Finally she agreed but not heartly.
Maya- I m ready Arjun tell Samar dt i vl marry his brother but wont accept him as my husband. I vl b daughter i law of Rathod's but not soulmate of Sameer.
I vl b suhagan but vl live d life of widow.
Hearing her each word Arjun n Roshni's heart sank. Arjun came to downstairs n informed all abt maya's decision. Sameer also agreed for marriage only for his dying brother's wish.

Soon Sameer came to mandap in groom's outfit n took his place at mandap bedi. Now Pandit asked for bride. Then Roshni brought Maya n her face is covered with veil. But she froze at d stairs when her eyes met with Samar's.
She came back to her sense due to loud sound of sehnai.
Ahhh...ahhh...
Sehnaiyo ki sada keh rhi hai
kushi ki mubarak ghadi aa gyi
Sazi surkh jode me chand si dulhan
zameen pe phalak se pari aa gayi hai.
( Roshni shook Maya n motion her to take steps toward mandap. )
aaa...aa...aaa...aa...aa
Dulhe ka sehra suhana lagta hai X2
Dulhan ka to dil dewana lagta hai.
Dulhe ka sehra suhana lagta hai
Dulhan ka to dil dewana lagta hai (Maya cme to mandap n seat beside Sameer bt luking at samar)
pal bhar me kaise badalte hai risteX2
ab to har apna begana lagta hai (both remember their fight)
Dulhe ka sehra suhana lagta hai
Dulhan ka to dil dewana lagta hai
sath phero se bandha janmo ka ye bandhan
pyar se joda hai rab ne preet ka daman (stads 4 feras)
sath phero se bandha janmo ka ye bandhan
pyar se joda hai rab ne preet ka daman
Hai nai kasme,nai rasme nai uljhan
hoth hai khamosh magar keh rhi dhadkan
(now Sameer put sindoor)



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Itne dino main update di 
but it was worth waiting dear 
Padh ke maza aa gaya 
Plz Pm me next time n if not completed 
to when u complete PM Me '
Love U n update soon Smile
Laast part awesome 
What happend  to maya?what is wrong with her 
I am sure some thing fishy update soon Smile


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As when Maya wore sindoor in the name of Sameer, she is coming into her senses n feel a known shadow taking her in her arms nd shouting for her help. She knows who is he. She slightly wishpers his name.
Maya- Sameer...( and again goes to her unconcious mode)

few hours back...

Sameer was searching Maya each n every corner of mine bt didnt get any traces of her.

Rathod (frustedly)- Na jane kaha chali gayi. Zameen me dab gayi ya aasman ne nigal liya. God where is she..? Help me.
He thought for awhile then he realised dt he didn't searched her in old mine area. So he asap left for there.
When he reached their his blood started to boil as some men were trying to force Maya and she is unconcious.
He went to them nd beat all black n blue.
Sameer to one goon- tumhari himmat kaise huyi isse hath lagane ki.
Tumne galat ladki ko chuna hai.
Tumne meri patni ko hath lagaya hai aur ab ye hath khane to kya dhone ke layak bhi nhi rahenge.
He broke d hands of goon. Than approch to Maya. At first he called for help bt den he held her in his arms and rush to nearby hospital as she was bleeding very much.

At Hospital-
Liza- Maya Rathod?
Receptionist- She is in OT.
All rushed to OT area nd there they found their chief Rathod Sir pacing from one place to other. Arjun put his one hand oin his shoulder n Rathod huged him back.
All get amused at their seniors behavior.
Shree- chotu tujhe nhi lagta situation thodi ulti hai. I mean Rathod sir ki jagah Arjun sir ko rona chahiye.
Riya- shut up guys aisi situation me bhi tum sab apni bakwas band nhi karoge.
All waited till operation is over.
Dr cme out of ot.
Rathod- Doc how is she?
Doc- Dekhiye humne puri koshish ki hai. Unke sar par chot aayi hai. Hum unke hosh me aane k bad hi kuch keh sakte hai.
And one more thing wo kisi medicine pe thi kya?
Rathod looked at Liza.
Liza- yes doc she is taking some medicines.
Doc- Than i must say tell her to stop dt. It vl effect her future pregnancy.
Rathod- What r u saying doc?
Doc- If i m not wrong she has a baby.
Rathod and Arjun looked at Liza blankly.
Liza- Yes doc she has twins.
But what happened.
Doc- Come to my cabin. I think u know abt her past medical history.
Liza- yes doc.
And Liza goes to meet doc nd discuss abt her health.
And here Rathod cant believe what he heard just ryt now.
Rathod- I cant believe dt she kept me in darkness for so long.
Rawte do u know abt children.
Arjun- I dont know anything abt dem. But how is it possible... When..she..
Then Arjun realised when it must be happened. Rathod also came to know how it happened (I vl tell u later abt it)
Rathod- I cant believe ki usne ye baat chupayi ki uske bacche hai.
Shree- Sir isme chupane wali koun si baatt hai. Bache to etf office bhi aaye the.
Rathod- kab??
Chotu- Anniversay wale din?
Arjun- It means Samar nd Samara r...( luk at Rathod)
Rathod (in mind)- my kids. Kitne paas the wo mere bt me bewkoof unhe pehchan nhi paya. Us din in sabhi jhamelo me baccho ke uper dyan hi nhi gaya.

Soon Maya shifted to ICU. Arjun goes to complete d left procedure of case nd Rathod goes to meet her. There She was sleeping peacefully nd he was admiring her.
But outside one person was very much tensed. After coming out of doc's cabin Liza is in his own world.
Liza (in mind)- How am i going to tell her. She wont be agree for this.
But i hv to talk to her. But there is one person who need to know it first. I hv to talk to bhai.

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really awesome update...it was worth the wait...what was the deat samar had with Mr. Rawte??? is sameer's wedding all planned by samar???
plz continue soon and plz pm me...

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