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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 29)

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Posted: 30 September 2013 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Plzzz update soon

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Posted: 30 September 2013 at 9:03am | IP Logged
pls update
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Plz update soon dear...

Eagerly waiting for next update...
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Posted: 30 September 2013 at 11:12am | IP Logged
First of all vry vry sorry guys to make u all wait so long.
Kya karu ye kitabe thoda pareshan kar rahi thi isliye inhe pehle nipta diya.
And samajh nhi aa raha ki CVs chahte kya hai.
I mean whr is our Rathod???
Sab kuch kitna suna suna lag raha hai...
Hope he vl come back soon.
So now coming back to my story, from next part all d mistries vl unfold.
It vl take time as dere r lots of thing hidden.
As u all r still confuse what relationship shares Rathod n Maya.
Nd most of d person might b disappointed as i m not giving attention on ariya. So guys dont feel low as soon u vl get Ariya n dere new born relation.
Last but not d least i want to tell u dt i m not gud at cases so compromise with my writing as to unfold secrets its necessary.
I vl try to gve u 1 updt as again i wont come online for few days.
I m going my home town with my family. So pls forgive me for not cmmnting on ur works as well as for ur last updts.
But i m promising u all dt wenever i vl b back nd get time i vl read n cmmnt on all ur works.
So enough of my bakwas n wait for next updt.

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Recape: Maya knows something abt Samar's death n changed her view abt Sameer.All ETF members reached Rampur for dere new case.
And a new entry named SAMRAT.

CHAPTER: 11

MAIN TERE SATH HOON

Once all reached dere dey directly goes to meet d owner of Rampur mines Anil Singh Zaveri.

Anil- So Mr Rathod kahiye kaisi madad kar sakta hu aapki.

Rathod- Bas itna bata dihiye ki yaha chal kya raha hai.
Aisa kya karan hai ki in last two weeks me aapke mines k 5 logon ki maut ho gayi.

Anil- Oh cmmon Rathod sahab aap to baccho jaisi baat kar rahe hai. Kya aapko pata nhi ki its an underground coal mines. Yaha par karna zokhim se bhara rehta hai.
Workers coal extract karne k liye ghanto zameen ki ander bani tunnels me jate hai aur sab is kaam k khatro ko bhi jante hai. Ab jo log mare hai woh savdhani nhi bartenge to main kya kar sakta hu.

Arjun- Ab kisne savdhani barti hai aur kisne nhi ye jald hi pata chal jaaega. Filhal aap marne walo ki details hume de dijiye.

Soon all left frm his cabin nd goes back to companies guest house.

Rathod- Team hv some rest dinner ke bad hum case discuss karenge. Ok.

All noded in yes.

After some time choree goes to girls' room to call dem for dinner. All had thier dinner nd resumed to discuss d case.

In hall-

Shree on d projector nd Riya started to brief all abt case.

Riya- Rampur mines. One of d biggest coal extract mine, owned by Black Diamond Group of Companies.
Is company k owner Mr Anil Singh Zaveri. Inke past k bare me koi kuch nhi janta. Kaun hai kaha se aaya kuch nhi.
Sab kuch thik chal raha tha but last two weeks se mines k 5 workers ki death ho gayi. Jagan, suresh, Babu, Nanda aur Ramesh in pancho ki maut mine k ander hui. Sabhi ko ye accident laga but Ramesh ki wife Vaishali ko lagta hai ki uske pati ki hatya hui hai. Isliye usne minister ko bol kar is case ki investigation ki maang ki.

Arjun- In sabki maut kaise hui??

Riya- Jagan nashe ki halat me mine k ander gaya aur koyle se takra kar balance bigda. Jisse wo sidhe garam hawa ko bahar nikalne wale pankhe pe gira or usse kat kar uski maut ho gayi.

Rathod- Suresh ki maut kaise hui??

Riya- Report kk hissab se jab suresh mines ke bahar aaya tab conveyor belt achanak se toot gaya aur us belt ke jariye ek jagah se dusre jagah jane wale coals usper gir gaye or woh almost 1 ton coal k niche dab kar mar gaya.

Riya- Next death Babu ki hui. Uski death bhi usi din hui jis din suresh ki death hui thi but pata ek din bad.

Aisha- matlab??

Riya- Matlab Babu mines k ander kaam kar raha tha or ussi dauran wo ek tunnel me phas gaya and kuch time bad us tunnel me pani bhar gaya. Jisse woh doob kar mar gaya.

Liza- Sir yeh sab hadse to har coal mines me hote rehte hai. I dont think so ki koi murder hua hoga.

Shree- Liza conclusion bad me dena pehle case pura to sunlo Ramesh ki death reason jaan le kyunki case file uski death k baad hua hai.

Liza just glared shree nd look at riya to brief further.

Riya- Thn Ramesh ki death hui. Uski maut lift ke achanak toot kar niche girne ke wajah se hui hai.

Aisha- Ha kyunki lift kharab thi isliye woh toot gaya.

Maya- Lift thik thi.

All look at her.

Rathod- Ye tum kaise keh sakti ho.

Maya- Kyunki maine crime spot visit kiya hai. Aur meri ek baat mano to pls is report ko phad kar phek do. Kyunki isme wahi likha hai jo wo batana chahte hai.

Riya- kya kehna chahti ho Maya?

Maya- Hume abhi iss waqt crime spot par jana chahiye. Sab pata chal jaaega. I m sure agar kal hum waha gaye to hume kuch nhi milega. Sab kuch saaf ho jaaega.

Arjun- To nek kaam me deri kis baat ki.lets go.

Rathod- Ha ha jao. Jaise hi tum waha jaoge to workers kehenge
Aaiye Arjun ji ye hai crime spot aur ye hai evidence.
Paglo jaisi batein band karo aur koi plan socho jisse ki hum unki nazar me aaye bina apna kaam kar sake.
Chotu- Ager hum me se koi worker ban kar jaae to sayad kaam ban jaega.

After one hour all 4 etf males are dressed up in coal mine workers. Rathod in white vest nd normal black pant, Arjun in black vest n faded loose jeans, shree in t-shirt n pant nd chotu also in t-shirt nd pant. All put some coal dust on thier faces so dt no one can recognise dem.
But thier main test was on mine entrance where dey hv to sign in register.

Shree- Sir ab kya kare? Kahi isne hume pehchan liya to.

Arjun- kuch nhi hoga shree tum chalo.

When chotu was signing at register dt time gatekeeper noticed dem. So he asked dem.
Gatekeeper- Aae tum charo ko pehle kabhi nhi dekha. Kaun ho tum.

Chotu (in an impulsive moment)- Sir main Dhinu aur ye mera chota bhai (to shree) Shinu, aur ye mere bade bhai (to rathod) Rinu, (to arjun) Anu hai.

Gatekeepar- pura khandan yaha hai kya? Aur naam bhi ajeeb hai. Lekin pehle tumko nhi dekha or na hi koi naya aadmi ko rakkha gaya hai.

Rathod- Dusre unit se aaye hai. Malik ne bola tha.

Gatekeeper- par humko koi info nhi mila hai.

Arjun- par humko to bheja hai. Doubt hai to confirm kar le.

Gatekeeper (thinks 4awhile)- thik hai jaao. Par bad me apne unit se baat karwana.

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All sighed in relief when gatekeeper gave dem permission to enter mine.
Now all r inside nd as per Riya's guidence dey reached d 1st death spot. Arjun nd Rathod observe d surroundings whreas Choree r discussing abt d working condition of workers.
Shree- yaar chotu mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai yaar. Kahi hum is tunnel me dab kar mar gaye to.
Chotu- Sahi keh raha hai tu. Pata nhii ye workers kaise 8-8 hhrs yaha ander reh kar kaam kar lete hai. Mujhe to lag raha hai ki ye accident hi hai.

Arjun- Nahi chotu its a murder nd i m sude ki baki sab ka bhi murder hua hai.

Shree- Sir how can u say dt its murder.

Rathod- Shree dhyan se dekhk kya dikh raha hai tumhe.
Shree- Fans, light, tools.

Arjun- par kya tumhhe is area me aate waqt ya yaha koi koyla dikha.

Choree- nhi!!!

Arjun- Ab report me likhi baat yaad karo ki Jagan ki maut kaise hui.

Chotu- Jagan nashe me is area me aaya aur koyle se takra kar uska balance bigda or woh fan se cut kar mar gaya.

Rathod- Exactly par hume yaha koi koyla nhi dikha not even a single piece.

Shree type something on his tab nd share his info.
Shree- Sir mines ka ye area band ho chuka hai. Yaha se sare coal nikal diye taki fans install kiye jaa sake. Yaha se garam hawa bahar nikali jati hai. Aur is area me bahut kam log hi aate hai.

Arjun- Shree baat yahi nhi khatma hoti hai is area se coal bahut pehle extract ho chuka hai aur bahar jane ke raste se bhi alag hai.

Rathod- isliye koyle ka yaha rehna aur usse takrakar jagan ka fan se cut kar marne ka sawal nhi hota.

Rathod- ok to its confirm ki Jagan ka murder hua hai. Arjun tum Chotu ko lekar Suresh ki death spot check karo. Main aur Shree wo lift dekhane jaa rahe hai.
All left for dere respective investigation area wheras outside mine tunnel Riya n Aisha was showing paths to Arjun n Rathod respectively.

Rathod- Aisha, Maya ko bolo ki dulhe ki barat niklne ki taiyari kare i think we find out ki yeh sab kaun or kyun kar raha hai.

Aisha- Sir but Maya to aap logo ke sath gayi thi na.

Shree- Maya aayi to thi but gadgets dene ke bad chali gayi.

Riya- But sir she is not here. Hume laga ki wo aapke sath hai.

Arjun- But she is not.

Rathod- Arjun tum ek kaam karo katil ko pakdo isse pehle ki woh bhag jaae. Aur Main Maya ko doondhta hoon.

Arjun along with all etf except Rathod goes to Anil singh's house and here Rathod searching for Maya.

After searching for hrs Rathod cant trace Maya.

Rathod (frustedly)- kaha ho tum????
Pls jaha bhi raho dont loose ur hope i vl find u at any cost.
Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye main har pal tumhare sath rahoonga.
MAIN TUMHARE SATH HOON.

Somewhere in underground mine tunnel.

Maya is lying dere unconciously nd few mens r talking.
Man1- kya karna hai iske sath?

Man2- Boss se baat hui hai. Wo aa rahe hai.

Man3- lekin unke aane se pehle thoda maja kar lete hai.
Waise bhi marne to wali hai.

Man1- Jate Jate humare kam aa jaaegi. (lauughed evily)

Man2- Pagal mat bano tum log ye police wali hai. Inke sathiyo ko pata lag gaya to chodenge nhi.

Man3- Unhe kuch nhi pata chalega. Jab yaha rehne walao ko kuuch nhhi paata chala ki yaha sirrf 5 logo ki nhhi balki 80 logo ki jaan gai to bahar se aaye logo ko kya pata chalega.

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Posted: 30 September 2013 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
cont soon
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Posted: 30 September 2013 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
awesome update
the case proceedings went off well
n the team went as undercover
n finally they recognized  the culprit
maya is in danger
hope sameer reaches there on time
n teach a good lesson to those men
thanks for update
cont soon

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