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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 26)

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
nice part... finally the mystery is opening up a bitSmile

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
Preist- Aap ka naam???

Maya- Maya!! MAYA RAWTE RATHOD!!!

Priest- Aap ka mritak k sath rista???

Maya- Ji wo mere... Pati...



Scene shifts to ETF office whr evryone except thier chiefs were present nd preparing a surprise party for Maya along with kids.

Chotu- Shree sab ready hai na. I mean tune slide show k liye photos wagera to check kar liya tha na???

Shree- Chotu main kisi aise waise insaan ka id hack nhi kar raha tha. The great Maya ka id hack karna tha.badi muskilo bad kuch hath mila. Kuch pics mile. But sab check karne ka time nhi mila.

Samar- Uncle sab leady na??

Aisha- Sab ready hai Samar. Dont panick. Bus ab appki mumma ka wait hai.

Samar- I hope wo jaldi aaye. Waise kya me aaj aapse kuch puch sakta hu.

Aisha- Kya???

Samar (shyly)- Will u b my GIRLFRND. I LOVE U AISHA AUNTY.

All laughed out loud hearing his cute confession.

Riya (teasing tone)- Koi baat nhi Aisha Rathod Sirr na sahhi to Rathod baby ne to propose kiya.
And all laughed again.

Samaya who was decorating cake nd continuously lukingg at Arjun's cabin. Riya noticed it n went to ask her.

Riya- Kya hua samaya? Ye bar bar Arjun sir k cabin ki taraf kya dekh rahi ho??

Samaya- wo aaj Aljun uncle nhi aaye.

Riya- wo DIG sir k office gaye hai. Kuch kaam tha tumhe unse.

Samaya- Amm haa. Aaj me unse puchne wali hu?

Riya- kya??
Samaya- Yahi ki kya wo mujhse shadi kalenge. Kyunki meri shadi ke bad hi to bhai sa bhabhi sa ko la paenge.

Choree heard it all nd laughed at Riyaisha. Suddenly dey heard liza's voice frm behind.

Liza- hey guys yeh sab kya hai. Ye party n all. Kis liye.

Shree- tum cake khane se matlab rakho na cake ke uper lage candles kyun gin rahi ho.

Liza- Shree... (Bt she cutted by sumone's voice which froze her at her place. She turned n found Samar nd Samaya)

Scene shifts to ETF Parking lot.

Maya nd Rathod reached at parking area at d same time. Both got down frm thier cars. Thier eyes showing different feelings.
Where Rathod eyes was filled with tear of guilt nd there Maya's eye filled with tears flowing down her cheeks showing hatered increased after each tear drop.

Both entered d etf premises at d same time n shocked to see d surroundings.

Few minutes before
back at inside etf premises

Liza cme to know abt all plan to celebrerate Maya's anniversary. Liza tried to stop dem bt no one listened her.

Liza- GUYS. Stop all di. I m 100% sure she wont like anything.

Shree- Liza agar help nhi kar sakti to bura bhi mat bolo n plz let us do our work.

Liza- guys meri baat mano...

Shree just keep his hand on her mouth nd covers preventing her to speak. Soon dey got news of Maya'a arrival. All switch off d lights nd only d source of light was candles burned dere 4 decoration.
All made hide demselves. Shree dragged Liza in a corner 4 hide out. Liza was struglling hard under his hold bt shree was just lost in her serene beauty dt too in candle light.

Just when chotu sensed dt Maya is inside he swith on d light nd by dt time liza bite shree's hand to get out of his hold n shree screamed in pain. All heads turnes to him. Soon Liza reached to shocked Maya nd asked her to walk out of office. Bt shree was in so much anger just pushes liza a bit nd drag Maya to a table where a cake was settled nd beside dt her kids were standing with smily see face. She too smiled a bit bt soon her smile faded nd anger started to build over her face after seeing wats written on cake.

Its written HAPPY 4TH WEDDING ANNIVERSARY. Chotu handed her a cake knife to cut d cake.

Bt what she did next shocked d all.

When Maya read d each words on Cake she loosed all her control nd throws d cake frm table. Now she started to remove all d decoration.
All got shocked to see her nd no one dare to stop her. Even kids also got scared seeing her. They clutch liza's hand tightly. Rathod saw den nd decided to stop her. He held her by shoulder.
Maya when felt his touch shge jerked his hand off n turned n slap Rathod vry hard.
All gasped at her act. Bt to they got more shocked when Maya started to blame.

Maya- DONT! DONT U DARE!!
DONT U DARE TO TOUCH ME... TOUCH ME WITH UR SINFUL HAND.
INHI... INHI HATHO SE MARA THA NA USE... YAHI WO KATIL HATH HAI NA JINSE...
JINSE TUMNE MERE SAMAR KI HATYA KI THI. INHI HATHO SE GOLI MARI.
HOW CUD U MR SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHOD.
KAISE TUMNE MERE SAMAR KO MARA. MARNE SE PEHLE YE BHI NHI SOCHA JISE TUM MAAR RAHE HO WO MERA PYAR TUMHARA APNA BHAI HAI.
KAISE???? HOW CUD U????

Rathod again tried to calm Maya bt again he got a tight slap bt not frm Maya.
He turned to see n found an middle aged lady was standing dere.
His lips just mummbled "MAA SA"
Rathod's Maa- Mat kehiye hume maa ye haq aap bahut pehle kho chuke hai.
Dulhan ko kam chot diya hai jo ab unhe sambhalne chle hai.

Rathod- Aisa na boliye Maa sa. Plz aap to hume samajhiye.

Rathod's Maa- Kya samjhe Sameer?Kya?Samar ka khoon aap aise hi kar diya.

Rathod (with teary eyes)- Maa sa hume maf kr dijye.

Rathod's Maa- Mafi galti ki hoti hai. Gunag ki hai.

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jia03

nice part... finally the mystery is opening up a bitSmile
thnks jia.
And it seem u r cming out of ur shell.
Liked d change.
Keep it up.

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
Nice update
Cont soon
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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
Nice update
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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 6:05pm | IP Logged
amazing update

cont soon!
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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 6:11pm | IP Logged
i don't get who is maya's husband? samar ya sameer???

eagerly waiting for next part

cont soon!
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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
Super update

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