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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 22)

ashmifebaa IF-Dazzler

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wow,,, super update dear...
i want  the father - children's relation and much more scenes.
pls update soon dear...
and ppls send pm to me...

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PART: 10 (a)



All staff luking at thier seniors nd before there anyone can digest the word of Maya. All get surprised by A sound of tight slap.

Now there is pin drop silence. ETf members r now seeing a totally broken Sameer with guilty eyes, Arjun full of anger nd ready to destroy each thing, Maya with no emotion, A mother holding her grandchildren who r now in fear seeing d elders.

Seeing d condition Liza takes d initiative to hold d situation. She goes to a middle age woman nd asked her to cme with her.

Liza to old lady- Maa sa aap chaliye yaha se. Samar, Samaya aap bhi chaliye.

Samar n Samaya didnt say anything n just clutch thier grand ma nd bua's hand n goes out of d etf.

Arjun to all- kya kisi ko koi kaam nhi hai. Get back to work NOW!!!!!

And all sprintted towards thier work bt keeping an eye on Arjun who is dragging Maya to his cabin. Bt at doorstep he stops nd asked Riya.

Arjun- Riya!! Take care of Rathod.

Riya just nodded her head n goes to Rathod. She helps him n take him to his cabin. Than she cme out of cabin n directly goes to conference room whr her choreeaisha must b waiting 4 her. N as expected wen she enters all started to remember d things happened just few hrs ago.
Chotu was d one who didnt digest d fact n spoke.

Chotu- Guys yeh Samar kaun hai??? Kya sach me Rathod sir ne uska murder kiya or sare evidence mitane ki koshish ki thi.

Riya- I dont think guys Rathod sir aisa kar bhi sakte hai. Isme agar galti hogi to us Samar naam k bande ki hogi ya Maya ne galat samjha hoga.
Shree- May b but jo bhi hua wo thik nhi tha. Guys hum sach nhi jante or sach janne se pehle inka rista kya hai.

Aisha- Maya or Arjun sir bro sis hai bt Rathod sir k sath kya cnnection hai usse jyada Samar k sath.

Shree- Wait a min Maya k bacche Samar n Samaya hai or unka surname Rathod hai. Aur Maya bar bar mera Samar keh rhi thi.Right??

All- Right??

Shree- Iska matlab Maya ka pura naam Mrs Maya Samar Damsingh Rathod hai.

All- What??

Than all dotted d missing points n resumed to discussion.

Chotu- Yaar sayad in sab ka karan hum sab hi hai. Agar hum bacho ki baat me aakar Maya ki wedding aniversary celebrate karne ka plan na banate to ye sab hota hi nhi.


Rathod brought the two kids to etf office after so much fight at thier house. Both of dem cluddled vry close to Rathod dts wen all member entered at conference room n witness d cute side of thier chief. ChoReeYaiSha didnt get d chance to see d face of duo kids. Both kids shifted a bit in Rathod's arm and all get to shocked to see who d kids r.
Samaya's sleep broke n she saw some known faces n screamed at her top of her voice.

Samaya- BHAI SA, BHAGO!!!!

Samar who was sleeping in Rathods arm wake up n luked at her n dan follow her gaze. There he found ChoReeYaSha glarring at dem and ready to take revenge. One person was amused to see all dis n before he could ask anything all started to run. Actualy ChoReeYaSha tried to catch a hold on Samar nd Samaya. They're following kids bt cant as using dere short hight sumtime dey ran inside table or other places. Getting d chance kids cme out of conference room to main hall n there dey got d big place 4 tom nd jerry game. All staff also get involved at choreeyasha's order. All well established office turned into totak messed up room.

Now ChoReeYaSha got dem. Kids were caught n all 4 moving around dem. Suddenly dey heard d roaring voice at d same time. And dey're Rawte nd Rathod.


All alternated dere luk btwn duo den realised dere mistake bt its too late.
Arjun- Ye ETF office hai koi playground nhi jaha tum sab pakadam pakdai khel rahe ho.
Rathod- Aur tum charo ye kya tarika hai kids se behave karne ka. Tum sab jante ho na ink sath kya hua hai.

Shree didnt realised wat he was saying replied to Rathod.

Shree- Sir ye bechare nhi Sayane hai. I m sure inke sath jo hua 100% inhi ka dosh hoga.
Riya- yes sir. Ye to shaitaan hai.
Chotu- Riya kyun bechare Shaitaano ko badnaam kar rhi ho yeh to unse bhi mahan hai.
Both kids were now at d verge of crying nd hearing d angry voices of RR, duo kids started to cry uncontrolablily.

Arjun nd Rathod at d same time went to kids nd picked Samaya nd Samar respectively not b4 ordering dem to clean all nd den cme to conference room.

Back to conference room both kids hving dere best time with rowdy rathod nd akdu arjun. All four entered nd stood in line ready to get punishment frm chiefs. Rathod nd Rawte by d time cme to know evrything frm kids. Both RR Duo looked at kids nd dey understand what dey hv to do.
Both climed down frm table n stood at front of dem.

Samar nd Samaya- We ale vly solly. Humne jo kia usk liye we ale solly.

ChoReeYaSha 1st get shocked bt den smiled at kids.

Rathod- Smile mat do or jo karna hai karo.
Arjun- I hope samajh gaye hoge ya samjhun.
Chgoreeyasha got dere seniors an do d same.

Choreeyasha- We r also sorry.
Kids- ok. Friends?
Choreeyasha- friends!!
All smiled at d end.

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saritak IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 4:35am | IP Logged
great part
cont soon
Payal_156 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 5:00am | IP Logged
nyc part
whoa revelation time
cont soon
fly.high IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 6:33am | IP Logged
beautiful kisne kisko slap kiya?

nd samar's death...

so many mysteries nd no answers...

continue soon...

it ie getting very much interestin...
Shanafr IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Nice update
Cont soon

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