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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 22)

Harshamara Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aisha.Vashishth

beautiful update...

poor Riya...

gosh...bacche hai ya terrorist...shaitani ideas ka to pitara hai ye dono...

ab pata nahi bechari Aisha ko kaise drug peddlar banaya hoga...

continue soon...

PS:i hav a doubt yarr...i dnt think 3 yrs old children can do so much...u mst atleast keep their age 5-6...

pls dnt mind...i jst told u wat i felt...

I know dear bt story plot k hisab se unki age 3 saal ka hona hai.
But dont worry unke itne mature hone ka reason bhi bata dungi.
Just wait 4 some time.
These kids r most imp part of ff.
And i dont mind at all.
Thnk u.

Harshamara Goldie

Joined: 29 June 2013
Posts: 1224

Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
PART : 9 (c)


After hearing Riya's story all r hving tough tym to control thier laugh bt Riya sees dis n pouted her face.
Shree controls his laugh n turn to Aisha n asked.
Shree- Aisha tumhare bacho ne kya kia.
Aisha- Shree??Wo meri bachi nhi hai. Aur waisi chahiye bhi nhi. Pata nhi usk parents use kaise jhelte hai.
Chotu- Toh tumhari wali akeli thi.
Aisha- Us akeli ladki ne akele hi pure mall ko sar par utha lia tha. Kisi toofan se kam nhi thi.
Sirf us chuhiya ke karan mera sara mission kharab ho gaya.
Riya- Mission???
Aisha- Ha. Mujhe mere informer Shakil ka phone aaya tha ki Mumbai me kuch illegal activity hone ke chances hai to usne mujhe milne bulaya.

Scene- Alveraz Shopping Mall

Aisha is waiting 4 her informer Shakil and pretending to buy sumthing. But soon her eyes caught a beautiful black knee legnth dress. And being a girl she cant stop herself frm picking it up. Suddenly she heared a girl's voice calling her name. She turned n found a lil girl.

Lil girl- Ye dleess meli hai.
Aisha (showing her dress)- Ye tumhare liye thoda bada nhi hai.
Lil girl- Usse aap ko kya. (n tried to snatch d dress bt Aisha took d advantage of her height).
Lil girl- Aap ye dless mujhe de do walna bahut bula hoga.
Aisha- Pehle to socha de do bt mujhe dhamki de rahi ho. Ab to bilkul nhi dungi.
Lil girl- Dont tly to mess with me.
Aisha- Huh! Watever.

Saying so she moved to otherside to talk with Shakil who entered d mall. But unknown to her a same lil girl followed her.
Aisha was talking to Shakil when dey heard d crying of a lil girl. For a while Aisha didnt think n started her talk with Shakil. But later realised dt d same lil girl crying next to her n all ppl at mall luking at her with suspicious eyes.
Aisha to lil girl- Kya hua tum ro kyun rhi ho. Dress chahiye to le jao bt rona band karo. Aur apni mumma k paas jao.
Lil girl (taking dress)- Mumma k pass to hu.
Aisha- What! Main tumhari mumma nhi hu.
Lil girl again started cryiing dt too bit loudly. All gathered around her.
One lady- Na jane kaise maa baap hai. Bache paida karke chod dete hai.
Aisha to lil girl- Dekho chup ho jao aur apni mumma ke paas jao.
Lil girl- Yeh aap kya bol lahi hai mumma. Aap hi meli mumma ho. Plz aap in uncle (showing shakil) k liye Papa ko mat choliye.
Wo aap se bahut pyal kalte hai.
Aisha spotted one goon who was dere to deal abt next attack on mumbai. So she was trying her best not to cme in goons eyes. But goon saw Aisha n tried to run frm dere bt She catched him. Soon police arrived dere arrest all including Aisha.

When Aisha spotted goon she ran to catch a hold on him. They did fight n aftr sum tym police cme nd found some drugs pkt at floor. Police asked dt to whon drugs belong to. Before Aisha can reply lil girl jump in thier conveo.

Lil girl- Police uncle ye pkt in aunty ka hai. (showing Aisha)

Aisha- No insp. Its not mine ye jhooth bol rhi hai.

Police- Jhoot or sach ka pata hum laga lenge. Chalo yaha se.

And dts how Aisha ended up dere.

Shree- Wakiya main manana padega accha phasaya hum sab ko.
Chotu- Dushman ki tarif karte acha nhi lag rha bt shree tu sahi haii.

Seeing a tensed Aisha Riya asked her d matter.

Riya- Aisha kya baat hai tum itni pareshan kyun lag rahi ho.
Aisha- Riya us bachi ki shararat aur gunde se fight k karan mera info wali CD kahi gir gayi. Hope wo kisi or k hath na lage. Main yaha se nikalte hi mall wapas jaa ka check karungi.

Bas Arjun sir or Rathod sir jaldi ya jaye aur bell kara de.


AANE WALE NHI AA GAYE HAI, Arjun informed frm behind.
All stand n lowered thier head as thier senior finds dem behind bars.
Rathod signed d bail paper. And all moved out of police station.
Aisha nd Arjun moves to mall to find CD of attack plan on mumbai.
And here trio tried to explain d situation bt one glare frm Rathod shut dere mouth. Rathod dropped all at dere respective home. Than headed back to home.

While Rathod is driving he gets a call frm Maya. He stopped d car n recieve phone.

Maya- Main kal Pune jaa rhi hu. Ek undercover mission hak. 3 din baad aaungi. Dont try to contact me.

And line went dead. He just composed himself n figure out what happened few time ago.

Suddenly he sees two lil kid struggling hard to lift dere some pkt n lil girl fell on ground. She started crying nd lil boy telling her nt to cry. Rathod approach to dem n made d lil girl stand. He sees some cut marks in her hand nd legs. He goes to his suv nd bring bandages her.
At 1st lil boy hesitate 2 tke help frm him bt 1 luk at his lil sis mellowed him.
Rathod asked dem- kaha rehte ho. Aur is tarah itne sare shoping bag lekar akele rehna thik nhi. Ghar jao.

Lil girl- Aap police wale ho.
Rathod- ha par tumhe kaise pata.
Lil boy- Aap tv pal aate ho na. She lespect u.
Rathod- thnk u. Ab aap ghar jao.
Lil girl- main chal nhi paungi.
Rathod- Main chod du.
Both kids nods dere head n Rathod moved to drop dem.
Rathod- Tum dono ka naam kya hai?

(To be cont)

Edited by Samara92 - 04 September 2013 at 12:58pm

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Harshamara Goldie

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Posts: 1224

Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Ye updt jaldi me diya hai.
Utna accha nhi hai.
Sorry to disappoint u guys.
Bt my health is not gud at all.
So plz frgv me 4 any mistake.
And also sorry 4 not pming.
Now i m not feeling well so i m going to rest.
It may happen dt i wont b online bt dont stop loving my story.
Luv Samara.
Snehajain IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 8:26am | IP Logged
Awesome update...SmileSmile
Continue soon...SmileSmile
rizwanaa IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3107

Posted: 05 September 2013 at 8:46am | IP Logged
amazing part
the kids are really cute
but can be dangerous if someone
messes with themLOL
sameer also met them
eager fornxt update
cont soon
saritak IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 9:07am | IP Logged
Shanafr IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Super mez update
Cont soon
saritak IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 9:22am | IP Logged

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