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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 2)

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
Another girl attacked him bt he was quick enough to tackle her. He holds her by her wrist. A known feeling build up n he lose for sumtym bt cme back. She try to kick her nt he stop her n pushed her. She cant balance herself n fall on ground n get hurt.Rathod finds d switches n on it. Now he can see d girl on floor lying unconcious. Wen Rathod pushed her she get hurt by a table on her forhead. He goes to her n shocked to see her face.Only one word cme out frm her mouth is "MAYA".

Here outside Arjun get d hold f Nadiya. All f dem get arrested.


Nadiya- ACP tumne galat insaan ko pakda hai.

Arjun- kaun sahi hai ya galat iska phesala tum hum par chod do.

Arjun- Shree Rathod ka pata hai.

Shree- yes sir! Rathod Mansion, 32west road, sector A.

Arjun- Shree me address nahi puch raha hu. Maine pucha Rathod kaha hai.

Riya spotted Rathod cming down holding a girl clad in beautiful dress in his strong arms. Riya signal Arjun to luk back.

Riya- sir Rathod sir.Arjun luk back n asked abt d girl.

Arjun- Rathod yeh ladki...

Rathod- Maya! ( n he shows her face to him.)

Arjun also get shocked to see her.

Dts it for now. Bye guyys. Pls give ur feedback.

Edited by Samara92 - 15 August 2013 at 3:16pm

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
Samara...
Wow...
Superb story...
Glad u started the story again.
Yay...
It was a beautiful start.
Charecter sketch was superb.
Loved it.
Starting was superb.
Just loved it.
Jab agli part update karogi,mujhe pm zarur karna.

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 3:27pm | IP Logged
How is Maya related to Sameer bhai and Arjun?
Why does Maya hate Sameer bhai?
Kuch toh bohut bada chhut raha hai????
Update soon.

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Nice plz cont soon

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zebbie0504

Samara...
Wow...
Superb story...
Glad u started the story again.
Yay...
It was a beautiful start.
Charecter sketch was superb.
Loved it.
Starting was superb.
Just loved it.
Jab agli part update karogi,mujhe pm zarur karna.
thnks dear. I vl pm u.
Harshamara Goldie
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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 3:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zebbie0504

How is Maya related to Sameer bhai and Arjun?
Why does Maya hate Sameer bhai?
Kuch toh bohut bada chhut raha hai????
Update soon.
wait for d ryt time dear.
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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
very interesting story..


waiting to know who is maya..????/


please iss baar dnt lose ur focus on the story...

dnt want to miss a fab idea..

thanks for the pms..dear continue soon..

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
Awesome and interesting start...
I think lot of mystery is there...
Looking forward to read more...
Cont soon...
Do PM me while updating ur updates...

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