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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 18)

Harshamara Goldie

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 2:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SAKSHI..

Wow amazing update...!!! really enjoyed it..
KIDNAPPER and TERRORIST !! hheheehee...
Shree was talking to his LAPTOP !! but totally acceptable of him !!!
I really want to know about these kids..their parent is an ACP ?? wanna know who...
but ye bachhe hai ya afat...jinpe smile kar de unki hi band baja rae hai..( like dat kali billi..hehehe jise dekh le bs..)
update soon ..wanna know wat happens nxt..
thanx for the pm Smile

thnks Sakshi 4 such a luvly cmmnt.
Awwe Sakshi bacho ko afat keh kar beizzat mat karo.

Arre bacho ki nai re baba,

main to afat sabd ki baat kar rhi hu. LOL

Harshamara Goldie

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 2:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aisha.Vashishth

aww...poor shree

he too became a prey to these evil kids...

awsm update dear...

continue soon

PS: can u plz post th pics of these Rathod twins

thnks 4 luvly cmmnts.
Here is d link of Maya's Twin kid's pic :

I know dey dont lyk indians but sochne me kya jata hai.
Waise kuch indians foreigner types to hote hai na
to Samar aur Samaya kyun nhi.
Payal_156 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 3:01am | IP Logged
lol awesome choree
ps. wat happen in d past waiting to knw

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Harshamara Goldie

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 3:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Payal_156

lol awesome choree
ps. wat happen in d past waiting to knw
Sabra karo balike ATEET namak fruit abhi kacha hai.
Fruit ko pakne do. Sahi samay par phal todenge.
Tab tak sabra.
Kyunki sabra ka phal meetha hota hai.
Jai ho Arjun & Rathod Baba ki!!
Big smile

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Amritamalhotra Goldie

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
Funny and interesting...
Plz continue soon..
Harshamara Goldie

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Posts: 1224

Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:50am | IP Logged
So frnds in previous part we cme to know dt Choree r declared as kidnapper and terrorist nd soon Riya joined dem as a thief. Lets see what happened with her.

PART :9 (c)


When Choree was sharing thier beautiful time at policestation. Few lanes away frm dere a bubly n hygeine freak girl is buying some necessary things for her house n talking to herself.

Girl- Chal Riya aaj lagta hai god tujh par meharbaan hai. Aaj kitne time bad us Sys ki dant se chutti mili hai. Chalo ghar ke liye kuch le aati hu.

Par aaj ka pura din arjun sir ko dekhe bina kaise katega. Huhh!!!

So She decided to go nearby super market for shopping.
She buys some needful thing. While she was cming out of store she noticed a icecream van nd goes to buy some 4 her. She order 4 her fav.

Riya- 1 death by chocolate cone with dry fruits.

Bt at d same time a lil boy order 4 same. Riya luked at him nd passe smile.

Ice cream man handed d last peice of dt flavour to Riya nd said sorry to boy.

Boy bcme sad hearing dt n turned to leave bt being a nice person n hving soft corner for kids she forwarded her ice cream to lil boy.

Lil boy- Mujhe nhi chahiye. Aul mumma ne bola hai ki kisi se kuch nhi lena chahiye.
Aur aap ko bhi to ye khana hai.

Riya- khana to hai. Idea!! tum ye kho aur main bhi ice cream enjoy kar lungi.

Lil boy- Wo kaise??? Main joothi ice cream nhi khata.

Riya handed him her ice cream to him n bent a little to his height.

Riya- Aur khani bhi nhi chahiye. N kissed her chick.

Dt kiss gave 440 volt jhatka to him n gave shocked to weired expression to riya. Riya smiled at his reaction n went away not b4 ruffling his hair. Dt angered him more.

And in anger he throw away ice cream. And luked at his left n finds his a shocked lil girl standing dere with hand in her mouth nt showing her o shaped open mouth n big eyes ready to pop out.

Lil girl went to him and examine d red lipstick mark on his chick nd gve her view.

Lil girl- Awwe bhai! Bahot bada malk hai.

Lil girl- kya wo meli hone wali bhabhi hai???

Lil boy glared her n turn to go bt saw Riya who was smiling at dem hearing thier swt innocent talk.

Suddenly Riya's dukhbhari katha was stopped by Shree.

Shree- Chalo tum jin baccho se mili wo to acche the. Warna humare wale to shaitaan bhi unke samne baccha lage.

Riya- Ek min shree dont get any wrong idea. Mujhe bhi laga ki wo bahut swt hai bt he is... Dont find any word 4 him.

Choree (smiling)- Chal aage bata kya hua.

Riya- Theek hai!!

As she ws going to continue her story. They she a girl being pushed forcefully inside by lady constable.

Girl screaming on top of her voice dt she is innocent.

Girl- Listen insp u r mistaken me wrong. I m not a drug paddler. I m...
(she didnt complt her word as she heard her name being called frm behind.)

Choreeya- AISHA !!!!

Yes d girl was Aisha. Seeing her they understand what must b happened with her. Bt they wanted to b confirmed.

Shree- Aisha kya tum aaj kisi bache se mili thi.

Aisha- Haa! Par tumhe kaise pata.

All smiled hearing her. Aisha was now more confused seeing thier smile.

Aisha- Tum sab is tarah kyun has rahe ho.

Chotu- Kuch nhi hum bhi yaha kuch bacho ki wajah se picnic mana rahe hai.

Aisha- Kya!!!

Shree- Ha! Bt abhi Riya ka turn hai. Tum iske bad apni story batana.

Aisha also joined dem n Riya continued her story.

Riya- Phir main waha se flower shop gayi.
Main ghum hi rahi thi ki mujhe laga ki koi mujhe ghur raha hai. Main turn huyi to same bache ko paya.
Wo mere paas aaya aur bola.
Lil boy- Tumne jo kiya uska anjaam bura hoga.
Riya- Maine usk baat ko serious nhi liya or again kissed him on his chick.

Lil boy didnt tell anythng n went to his sis. Riya went to counter 4 payment. He noticed duo kid stairing at her bt she ignored. Soon a lady constable cme n asked her to show her bag. Riya showed it n dt lady constable pick out a credit card frm bag n asked d duo.

LC- Bacho kya yahi tumhara card hai.

Kids nodded thier head n lady constable arrest her.

Riya- Listen main koi chor nhi hu.

Lil boy- Har chol yahi kehta hai ki wo chol nhi hai.

Now riya understand who is behind all dis.

Riya- To ye tumne kiya. Bt KAB?? KAISE?? KAHA.??

Lil boy went to flashback to remind his masterplan.
" Swt revenge"

Both lil kids were buying flower just den boy noticed Riya. He clutch his hand in fist. Lil Girl saw him nd asked him d matter.

Lil girl- Bhai kya hua.
Lil boy- Baby Bubu ka cledit cald to dena.
Lil girl handed him card n he moved to Riya. When she kissed him again he drop dt card in her bag. N went back to his sis.

Lil girl- Bhai apne cald unk bag me kyu dala.
Lil boy- Baby call moon moonn aunty n bolo ki humala cald choli ho gaya hai.

Lil girl- Wo police wali na?
Lil boy nodded his head.
Soon a lady constable cme n they lied abt thier card.
Lil boy cme to reality.


N Riya ws taken by lady constable.
Lil boy- Bhai Mothel's day ke liye sab le liya.
Pal ye kya hai( pick a CD)

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zubiya92 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 3:26am | IP Logged
awesome update
Cont soon
ashmifebaa IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2538

Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:23am | IP Logged

super duper update 

poor etf members...ROFL

update soon...

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