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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 18)

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Me again 4 d promised back to back updt treat. So chotu ki fooltu wat lag gai. Bechara kaha Departmental Store me AC ke maje le raha tha or next moment Jail ki hawa kha raha hoga. Ab chotu ki not so happy sunday aisi rahi. Dekhte hai baki apni sundays kaise enjoy kar rahe hai.

PART: 9 (b)

~ I M NOT A TERRORIST ~

Today someone is vry happy as after such a long tym a boy get his pvt tym for his adorable darling. He is saying all d lovey dovey things to his girlfrnd.

Boy- Finally baby kitne dino k bad hum ek dusre ke sath aise pvt tym spend kar rahe hai.

I know baby ki mujhe tum pare thoda harsh hona padta hai ( dont tk any wrong idea guys.) bt karu kya ek taraf wo DAMN IT DANAW to dusri taraf wo SYS STALKER. Huh! Dono humare pyar k dusman hai.
Jab dekho tab kaam kaam or kaam.
Par baby janti ho tumhare liye ek khushkhabri hai. Maine tumhe jo naya gift dene ke liye promise kiya tha na uske liye Rathod sir ne Amt. sanctioned kar diya hai. Gr8 na... Ab bas ja ke usse purchase karna reh jaaega.
My daling baby...

Soon his pvt. moment get disturbed by d ringing of his cell phone. He luks at caller id n curshed him.

Boy- Ek aur pyar ka dushman. Na jane ab kya ho gaya.

Saying dis he recieves phone.

Boy- Kya chotu ab kaun maar raha hai jo mujhe disturb kiya. U know na ye mera pvt tym hai. ( Yes d caller is chotu)
Chotu- Shree Pvt tym jaye tel lene jaldi se Ramnagar area ke police station aa.
Shree- Kyun??? Kya hua????
Chotu- Sawal bad me karna pehle yaha aa ja.
Shree- Theek hai main jaldi waha pahunchata hu.

And Shree ends d call n again resume to talk with his darling girlfrnd.

(guys ab sabko to pata hi hoga ki Shree ka pyar uski darling girlfrnd koi or nhi balki uski Lappy hai. Loll)

Shree- Sorry baby jana hoga. Gada dhari bheem ko meri jarurat pad gayi hai. Lets go.

Aftet dt he get ready n put necesary thing in bag n goes to help chotu.

AFTER ONE HOUR ~

RAMNAGAR POLICE STATION

Chotu is locked inside cell nd pacing one place to another.

Chotu- Yeh Shree ko itna tym kyun lag raha hai. Uske ghar se yaha aane me to sirf 20 min. lagega. Kaha reh gaya.

Suddenly he sees dt some police officer cming with Shree. Seeing him he exclaimed in happiness.

Chotu- Yaar Shree kaha reh gaya tu. Main kab se tera intezaar kar raha tha. Chal jaldi se meri bail kara.

1 Officer- Oh!! To ye tera dost hai. Chal koi nhi dono ko sath mil jaega.
Shinde dal isse bhi ander.

At 1st seeing Chotu behind baar Shree get confused dt wat went wrong with him. His trance broke when Shinde push him in cell.

Shree- Iske liye tum pachtaoge. Main keh raha hu na ki I M NOT A TERRORIST.

Shinde- Chup ho ja nahi to bolne layak nhi rahoge.

Chotu- Dekho tum galat kar rahe ho. tum jante nhi hum kaun hai.

Shinde- Chup ek dum chup. Ek kidnapper to dusra terrorrist.

Chotu- TERRORIST!!!!
SHREE- KIDNAPPER!!!!

Shree- Dekho na to ye kidnapper hai or na main koi terrorist.

Sr Insp- Arre shinde kya unke piche laga hai chod na. Warna kuch der me bolenge ki yeh ETF OFFICERS hai.

Shree & Chotu (in unison)- HUM SACH ME ETF HI HAI.

Every1 present dere except both laugh loudly. Seeing dis both understand dt no one is going to believe dem. So silently they go to corner to sit n share thier Sunday ki dukhbhari kahani.

Shree- Chotu tu kidnapper!!Ye kab hua.

Chotu- Meri chod tu terrorist. Tujhe meri help ke liye bulaya par lagta hai tujhe help ki jarurat hai.

Shree- Na jane kis manhus ghadi me tera phone uthaya or teri help ke liye nikla. (chotu glared him).
Teri help ke liye aa hi raha tha ki raste me Rathod sir ka phone aa gaya.

FEW HOURS BEFORE ~

Shree was on his way to help Chotu. Suddenly his phone started to ring. He stopped his bike n received d call.

Shree- Gud mrng sir.Anythng urgent?

Rathod(phone)- Yes Shree abhi mujhe dealer ka phone aaya tha.Tumne jo software mangaya tha wo aa gaya hai. Usse abhi jake collect karlo.
Shree- Sir abhi?
Rathod- Ha abhi. Ye software limited stock me aaye hai. Aur jald hi khatm ho jaaega. So go n collect dem now. Bad me mat rona.
Shree- Ok sir!!And thnk u apki wajah se mujhe ye jaldi mil raha hai.
Rathod- Ok n go now.

Shree get excited dt his dream software is now in market. And in dt excitement he forgot dt Chotu called him for help n take a u turn to Software store.

AT-Maneek Software Store

Shree- Hello my order JAMBIA SX 4 N462 Software.

Salesman- wait a min, Sir!!
Amm... U r lucky sir ye last piece hai. Aap wait karo main store room se aata hu.

Shree- Hmmm!!!

Salesman goes to store room to bring software n here Shree exploring some pc games n also playing.

While he was playing he noticed two kids cme inside hand in hand n asked something on counter. Seeing thier frndly chit chat with staff members its confirmed dt they r local kids.

Shree (in mind)- Awe kitne cute hai. Par dono yaha kr kya rahe hai.Shree aaj ke bache hai kitabo se jyada technical chije ink dimag me ghumti rehti hai.

He saw lil girl stairing at him who is wid lil boy. He smiled at her.Bt soon dis smile vl cost him more.

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Shree noticed two kids hand in hand cme inside store n asked sumthng at counter.

Lil girl who is with a lil boy noticed a curly hair guy (he was shree) luking towards dem. Shree also noticed her stairing at him so he passes smile to her. Bt in return she gave weird expression to him n clutch lil boys hand tightly.
Lil boy sensed dt sumthng wrong with her n asked abt her worriness.
Lil boy- Baby kya hua?? Tum inni dali hui kyu ho??
Lil girl (pointing to shree)- Wo mujhe dekh kal smile kal laha hai.
Lil boy got angry n marched towards him bt stopped when he saw store owner cming out of his cabin.

Lil boy- Baby chalo pehle Maneek uncle se wo softwale le le bad me use dekhenge.
Lil girl- ok!!
Both kids went to meet Store owner. Maneek also saw d kids n went to ask dem thier purpose of visit.

Maneek(store owner)- Arre zara dekho to kaun aaya hai..
(To lil girl) Hi my princess kaisi ho??
Lil girl- Acchi hu uncle?? Aul aap.
Maneek- main bhi accha hu. (now to lil boy) So gentleboy tum kaise ho.
Lil boy (forwarding his lil hand 4 handshake)- fine Maneek uncle.
Maneek- To tum dono yaha?? Mumma ko koi software chahiye tha kya??
Lil boy- Yes. Hum yaha JAMBIA SX 4 N462 Softwale chahiye.
Maneek- Beta phone kar dete main bhej deta. Yaha aane ki kya jarurat thi.
Lil boy- Uncle hum lazy kids nhi hai. Hum apna kam khud kalte hai.
Lil girl- Aul waise bhi mumma kehti hai apna kam kalne se hum fit leh sakte hai. Mujhe moti nhi hoga.
Maneek in mind- Baap re hai 3 saal ki par batein to 18 yrs ki teenager ki tarah. Abhi se itni health concious to bade hoke kya hoga (now luking at boy) aur inka to kya kehna...
hai to chota par baton me hume fail kar de.
Bhagwan hi bachaye aaj kal k bacho se.
Lil boy- uncle softwale??
Maneek to his staff- Arre Rajan wo zara JAMBIA SX 4 N462 lana to wo inki maa ne mangwaya hai.
Rajan- Sir abhi kuch der pehle hi wo sir( pointing to shree) ne isse manga hai.
Maneek to kids- Sorry bacho par ye last piece tha aur isse us uncle (showing shree) ne kharid liya. Par jaise hi stock aaega to me khud ghar bhej dunga. Promise.

Seeing Shree lil boy's anger reached on top coz 1st he smile at his baby dan 2nd he purchased wat he want 4 his mom. Bt he cant do anythng.

Lil boy- Theek hai uncle.
Lil girl- No uncle kuch theek nhi hai.
Lil boy- Kya hua baby???
Lil girl- Alle aap bhul gaye. Mumma phone pe kisi ko kya bol li thi.
Lil boy- kya???
Lil girl- Maneek uncle kya hum aap ke cabin me baat kal sakte hai. Its top sec... Sec.. Let..
Maneek- Top secret.
Lil girl nodded her head n all 3 went to his cabin for thier top secret talk.

AFTER SOMETIME-

Lil boy approach to Shree who was enjoying his game forgetting dt chotu must b waiting for him. He sensed dt sum1 is luking at him n find same lil boy.
Shree- Hey u wanna play.
Lil boy- Accha khel leto ho. Aap ko dekh kal lagta hai u al tech expert.
Shree feel proud n nodded his head. And after dt lil boy asked him lots of tech terms. Shree also get amused at his knowledge.
After dt lil boy went to Maneek n Shree to counter.
Lil boy to maneek- Suna uncle. Its confirmed na.
Maneek- Hmm!! (n make a call to some1).
Shree- Excuse me mera order!
Order to ab hum tumhara lenge, a man,s voice cme frm behind. He turn n found some police officer standing nd shooting glares at him.
Shree- What happened officers any problem??
Officer- Problem to tujhe hogi. Bol kaun kaun hai tere sath? Kaha blast karne ka plan hai. Kis terrorist group se hai tu bata?
Shree at 1st dont understand thier talk dan realised dt they must b mistaken him as a terrorist.
Shree- Excuse me! I m Shreekant sen nd I M NOT A TERRORIST.
Officer- Chal yaha se tu kaun hai ye hum pata laga lenge. Chal.
Officer took him out of store almost dragging him by his collor.

Maneek- Thnks bacho aaj tumhari wajah se ek terrorist pakda gaya.

Lil girl- Its ok uncle. Uncle softwale.

Both cme out n finds shree arguing with police.

Lil boy to girl- Baby wait main abhi aata hu.
Lil boy went to police n asked dem dt he want to talk to him.
Lil boy- Police uncle mujhe iss terrorist se baat karni hai.
Shree shot glare at him n said- I M NOT TERRORIST!!!
Officer- Aye chup. (Now to lil boy) beta ye khatarnak hai or ye lato k bhut hai baat karne layak nhi.
Lil boy- Its ok uncle. (turning to shree) sukra manao ki police uncle tumhe le jaa lahe hai warna me tumhe chalne layak nhi rakhta.
Shree- To ye tumne kiya hai. Main nhi chodunga.
Lil boy- Dekha uncle kaise dhamki de laha hai.
Shree- tumne aisa kiya kyun.
Lil boy- bula kaloge to bula hi hoga. Tumne baby se flilt(flirt) kiya.
Shree- maine?? Maine kb flirt kia??
Lil boy (pointng to lil girl)- Use dekh kal smile nhi kia tha tumne.
Shree- Smile. Maine socha nai tha 1 simple smile flirt kehlata hai. Main tumhari gf se flirt nhi kar raha tha.
Hearing word gf raised his anger.
Lil boy- she's my sis nt gf.Police uncle le jao ise n ladki ke 7 flirt krne k chrge bhi lagana.
Shree- To ye sab tumne jaan kar kia.Officers main terrorist nhi balki 1 officer hu. U can check my id. Its in my bag.

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nice update
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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Shree- Officer u can check my id its in bag.
Officer- Shinde dekho koi id hai.
Shide searched bag bt found nothind.
Shinde- koi id nhi hai sir.
Shree- WHAT! Aisa kaise ho sakta hai. Kahi gir to nhi gayi.
Just dan lil girl standing far away cme to add salt on burn area.
Lil girl- Police uncle mujhe na inki bag se ye gun mila tha.
Shree- What! My gun ye tumhare paas kaise aayi.
Officer- To ye teri hai.
Shinde- matlab ki tu terrorist hai. Sir isse le chalte hai sab bak dega a.
Shree (While sitting at police van)- Bhagwan se tum pray karna ki kabhi tum dono mere samne maat aana or i vl kill u.
Police took Shree with dem leaving d two master mind kid with evil grin on thier faces.
Lil boy- Softwale kiya???
Lil girl- (showing it) yes!!
Lil boy- Plan accha tha? U al improving. Hmm good.
Lil girl- Mumma ki talah ACP jo banana hai.

Saying dt both started to recollect thier victory to get Software n also a plan to get revenge of smile wala flirt.

What happened few minute before ~

Lil girl- Uncle its top seclet. Chalo hum ander chal kal baat kalte hai.
Maneek 1st went to his cabin followed by lil kids.
Lil boy- Tum kya kalna chahti ho. Aul kis seclet baat ki baat kal rahi ho.
Lil girl- Bhai hume muma ko ye softwale sulplise gift kalna hai na.
Lil boy- Ha to?
Lil girl- To bhai ye last piece hai hum hal nai maan sakte na!! Hum mumma ke evil bache hai nah?? To chalo aap bas maneek uncle ke samne meli baat me haa kehna. Ok!
Lil boy- ok!
Both went inside n grabbed chairs.
Maneek- To princess aap kis top secret ki baat kal rahi thi?
Lil girl- Uncle aap ko pata hai ye noodle baal wale uncle na tellolist hai.
At 1st he didnt get her point dan realising her problem of saying L instead of R. He inquired further.
Maneek- U mean to say Terrorist.
Lil boy- yes!!
Maneek smiled at d duo- Beta ye tum kaise keh sakti ho. Lagta hai aaj kal kitabo ke badle mumma ki case file padh rahi ho.
Lil girl (tell lie)- Uncle mumma khud yaha aati but suddenly unki health khalab ho gayi aul wo doctel aunty ke pass gayi hai. Aur Bubu bhi nhi thi to ye kaam mumma ne hume ye kaam karne ko kaha.
Lil boy- yes!
Maneek (not believing)- To mumma ne terrorist ke bare main kaha.
Lil girl realised dt he is not believing dem dan she start to use her daily soap serial skill (as she watch so much daily soap).
Lil girl- Alle uncle koi mumma thodi na aisi baat apne baby ko bolegi( twinkling her eyelashes)
lil boy- yes!
Lil girl (remembering sumthng)- Wo to main jab mumma ke pass apne doll ke liye naya doll house mangne gayi thi tab maine suna.. Maine suna

" Nahi main un dono ko kaise bata sakti hu. Wo abhi chote hai. Par usse pehle mujhe wo lana hoga. Agar uske hath lag gaya to problem ho jaaegi"

uske baad mumma ki tabiyat khalab ho gayi aul wo hospital gayi aul hum yaha.

Lil boy- yes!

Maneek- Lekin isse ye sabit nhi hota ki bahar jo hai wo terrorist hai.

Lil girl- Bhai can prove.
Lil boy- yes! Wait kya??
Lil girl- Bhai just go n do what u al gud at.
Lil boy- Hmm!!

After thier talk 3 cme out of cabin nd Lil boy went to Shree to prove him a terrorist.
He went to Shree nd ask some technical term bt all related to bomb, hacking device, preparing virus etc etc.
Shree also didnt think nd blurt out his knowledge to built impression on lil boy. Bt to hiis badluck today his knowledge turning him as a terrorist.
And to add charm to his badluck lil girl saw shree's bag placed at counter. She went nd tried to hold his bag bt dt was too heavy 4 her soft hand n bag fell on ground making thud noise nd his gun cme out.
Maneek saw dt nd he beieved at kids nt without more delay called police.
Than police cme n drag him out. Shree grabbed his bag nd didnt noticed dt its open n when police dragged him out his Id fell out of store.
Which is only to ne found by lil girl when her brother moved to give his piece of mind to shree.

Both kids cme out of thier victorious plan.
Lil boy- Next place.
Lil girl- Its Rose aunty's flower shop.
Lil boy- Lets go!!!

And here Shree completed his story how he ended up dere.

Shree- I swear Chotu agar wo dono mujhe kabhi mile na to main unhe virus ki tarah delet kar dunga.

Chotu- Sahi me Shree. Maine to kasam kha li ki main kisi bhi bache ki help nhi karunga. Kabhi nhi.

Shree- kyun tere sath kya hua???
Than Chotu also narrates his story. Soon thier convo hearing a known girly voice.

Just den dey finished dere talk outside a women constable brings a girl.
And girl yelling at her defence bt lady constable seems to be deaf.

Chotu nd Shree hear known voice yelling.

Girl- Main chor nhi hu. Chodo mujhe.

Lady constable just pushes her inside cell next to choree's cell.

Though dey r in different cell. They can see prisoners in next cell. And choree get shocked to see to whom lady constable pushes inside.

Choree exchanged thier shocked luk n shouts- RI, TU YAHA.

Yes d girl is our Research Specialist Miss Riya Mukherjee. But now mistaken as a thief.
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Guys enough 4 2day evry part of my body is aching.
Now its cmmnt tym.

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
awesome update
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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
Cont soon
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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
superb update
the  l'll girl referred shree as noodle baal wale uncleLOL
poor shree
also got arrested because of those 2 kids
n both shree n chotu sharing their piece of stories
abt kids
n now its riya
eager to know what the kids did to prove her
thief
thanks for pm
cont soon

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