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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 13)

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Loved it...SmileSmileFlashback was niceSmileSmileaur mujhe aise big wale update bahut bahut bahut pasand hai...SmileSmile
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awesome update
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Hey frnds bck again bt iu prmse dis tym i wont eat ur brain lyk last tym. So get ready for some dhisum dhisum arre not hath pair wala its ankho wala fight.

Here u vl get some family part along with some Ariya, Raisha nd Ramaya, Armaya also. So presenting u guys a new part.

PART- 8

~ WE ARE FAMILY ~

Evry1 is sitting at Conference table bt today sitting arrangement is changed a bit. As Maya cme before Rathod so she grabbed d head chair n another was previously reserved by Arjun. Thts why Rathod has to seat at side chairs beside Maya. (poor chiefs they r fighting for chairs dt too silently.)

All were busy in their work soon dey hear a girls voice.

Girl- Excuse me. ETF CHIEF ACP RATHOD IS HERE????

Rathod- Without looking at her tell her to cme in.

Girl approach to him n Both get shocked to see each other. Bt soon composed demselves.

Girl- Gud mrng sir. I m ur new teammate LIZA... LIZA DAMSINGH RATHOD.

All exchanged luk at each other bt dere r 3 more person shocked to see her.

Rathod smiled nd introduced her with team.
Rathod- Team meet ur new teammate Liza Damsingh Rathod our forensic expert. And u guessed it ryt she is my younger sister.

Liza- Hi guys!!! (Soon she sensed dt 3 person eyeing her with different expression)

Arjun feels proud to see her bt also bad a he build a wall btwm thier relationship.

He just smile at Liza dan resume to his work. Due to dis Liza feels hurt bt composed her.

2nd person is non other dan Maya who is angrily looking at her.So to escape frm her glares she turns her head to another side n in a moment shouts.

Liza- Ahhh!!! Omg Specky Sen u r here. I cant believe u r here. Finally meri mehnat kaam aayi aur tum yaha pahunch gaye. ( without bothering abt anyone she is ranting abt her n her specky sen.)
Shree (angrily)- I m not Specky sen. Its Shreekant Sen. S...H...R...E...E...K...A...N...T S...E...N. Got it.

Liza- Got it Specky sen.!!!

All r smiling at the new tom n jerry of ETF.
So to cntrol dem Rathod cme in btwn dem.

Rathod- Shree nd Liza behave urself. Ye mat bhulo ki u r both etf officers not any college students.

Shree & Liza- Sorry Sir!!

Than Maya asked Liza to meet her.

Maya- Liza zara mere cabin me aana to mujhe tumse kaam hai.

Rathod in mind- Lagta hai isne Maya ko joining ke bare me nhi bataya.

Liza does a silent prayer to god n goes to Maya's cabin.

Inside Maya's cabin ~

Liza knocked at door n cme inside. Bt b4 Maya speak sumthng Liza starts her part.

Liza- Sorry Sorry Bhabhi i knw ki mujhe pehle hi bata dena chahiye tha bt i wnt to surprise u n nothng else.

Maya- Its ok Liza. Bt remember here i m ur senior nt bhabhi.

Liza- yes ma'am.

Maya- So enjoy ur 1st day.

Liza- Sorry to say bt bhabi apko nhi lagta ki bhai ko bacho ke bare me janne ka haq hai. After all wo unke..

Maya cuts her- Koi nhi hai wo unke samjhi tum. Main Sameer ka saya bhi un dono par padne nhi dungi.

Liza- Lekin bhabi bhai ko kabhi na kabhi pata to chal hi jaega aur ab to app unk sath kaam kar rahi hai. Yeh sach unse jyada din tak chup nhi sakta.

Maya- Isliye main bacho ko Jaipur Maa sa ke pass bhej rahi hu.

Liza- WHAT BHABHI!! R U SERIOUS.I MEAN yeh janne ke baad bhi unka app k pass rehna kitna jaruri hai. U need dem 4 ur health. And wo sirf 3 yrs ke hai. Dey need ur breast feeding as doc said to u.

Maya- I cnt risk to keep dem with me. If he cmes to know he vl take dem away frm me. So its final n dont worry abt me i vl talk to doc.

Liza- BUT!!!

Maya- No more discussion go back to ur work.

Liza- Yes ma'am. Bt think once.

Maya- Its decided. Now u can go.

Soon a case arrived and all get busy in dt.
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All sitting around conference table n discussing d case.

Riya- Sir Malad area ke Raisheena pariwar ke bade bete Anup Raisheena ki maut hui hai.
Maya- Aur maut ki wajah??
Liza- Poison. Anup ke pet se mujhe poison ke traces mile hai.
Rathod- Dt means usk khane me kisi ne poison dala hoga. Par kyun.
Arjun- Rathod kyu dala se important kisne dala hai. Katil mik jaega to murder ka motive bhi pata chal jaega.
Maya- Tumne khane ke sample kiye the na. Poison kisme mila.
Liza- Sweets me.
Arjun- Mithai!! Matlab koi khusi ka mahol tha. Par aisa kya tha jo kisi ko uski khusi bardast nhi hui aur usne mithai me zeher mila diya.
Liza nd Maya together- Aaj RAKSHABANDHAN HAI!!

Rathod and Arjun just luk at thier sisters. And realises dt how thier bro-sis eqation is changed. Riya sensed dt there is sum tension btwn them. So she ease d moment resume discussion.

Riya- So dt means Rakshi bandhane ke bad jab Anup ki behen Soniya Bihul ne mithai khilai tab Anup mar gaya.

Aisha- In dt case Soniya humari prime suspect hai.
Rathod- Suspect nhi killer Aisha.
Arjun- Wo killer nhi ho sakti.
Aisha- wo kyun sir??
Maya- Wo khud ke hato bani mithai main zeher dekar Anup ko maregi. Isse saq to us par hi jaega na. Isliye katil koi aur hi hai.
Shree- Par kaun.
Arjun- Wahi to pata lagana hai.
Rathod- Hume Raisheena pariwar se milna hoga. Lets go.
All moved to Raisheena house.

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New CHARACTER SKETCH:-




Uploaded with ImageShack.us LIZA DAMSINGH RATHOD ~Liza is d adopted daughter of Mr Damsingh Rathod. After d death of Mr Rathod's bestfrnd Albert D'Souza he adopted his frnd's only daughter n also give her his name. So dt she wont feel different. She is d apple of Rathod family. She is staying with her bhabhi Maya along with Maya's kid Samar n Samaya. She loves dem bt dey dont leave any chances to irritate thier BUBU( BUA).Liza misses her both brother Samar is dead n Sameer is assumed to b dead (tell u later why). She joined ETF as a Forensic Expert. Her equation with each member is different. She respects Maya as her mother.

Now frm above u guys guessed it right dt d Maya is related to Rathod Family. And her two devils r d next generation of Rathods.




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PIC OF SAMAR & SAMAYA

Samar Rathod- Samar is named after d younger son of Rathods Samar damsingh Rathod, in his loving memory. He is 3 yrs old. Loves his mom n baby sister Samaya. He misses his dad bt never shows before his mom.

Samaya Rathod- She is 3 yrs old.The name given her is d mixture of her mom n dad's name. She is cute n adorable doll of maya. She loves her mom a lot. Always follow her twin brother or u can say Crime partner in stealing Chocolates. Both kids luv eating chocolate like thier mother.

So these r Characters sketch. Vl Rathod be able to know abt Samar n Samaya. Why Maya dont want Rathod n her kids face off. To know more SCROLL DOWN.

Edited by Samara92 - 03 September 2013 at 2:49am

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Back to story frnds...
All discussed d case n moved to Raisheena house.

Scene- Raisheena house...

Rathod questions Soniya- Apke aur apke bhai ke relation theek the na??

Soniya- Ji humare sath sab normal tha even will ko padhne k bad wo khush the.

Arjun- Will??? Kaisi will.

Anuj Bihul( Soniya' husband)- Daddy ji ne Apne property me Soniya ko bahut bada hissa diya tha. Pehle mujhe laga Anup bhaiya is baat se react karenge but unhone kuch nhi kaha.

Shree- Apko aisa kyun laga ki wo is baat se khush nhi honge. I mean Soniya is ghar ki beti hai. Property me uska haq banta hai.

Soniya- Ji par daddy ne mujhe adopt kiya tha. Main unki adopted beti hu.

Riya asked Mrs kajal Anup Raisheena- Aur aap ko bhi koi problem nhi thi.

Soniya- Nhi bhabhi ne hi to khud ye suggestion diya tha.

Kajal- Ji maine hi daddy ji ko kaha tha Soniya ko property main hissa dene k liye kaha tha.

Kajal- Daddy ji ne socha tha ki aaj Rakshabandhan ke din sare details pure karke Soniya ko uska share de denge.

Mr pitamber Raisheena (Anup's dad)- Sab kitne khush the. Soniya ne Anup ki fav mithai bhi banai thi. Aur Anup bhi uski help kar raha tha. Wo chahta tha ki Soniya ki fav Barfi bane par Soniya ne mana kar diya.

Rathod- Theek hai hume jaise hi kuch pata chalega hum aap ko bata denge.

All stated to move out bt Rathod sensed dt Maya is still at kitchen inspecting for any clue. He goes to call her. Bt stop to see her. Her eyes r full of tears rolling down. He followed her gaza n finds she is luking at Arti thal. He snapped her out.

Few tym before ~

ETF team cmes to ask some question to Raisheena family. Entering house Maya directly goes to kitchen. As she ws inspecting everything. Her eyes caught Arti thal n went to flashback.

Flashback ~

Arjun- Maya kitna late karegi chal aa aur rakhi bandh.

Maya- Main bilkul nhi bandhungi. Tu mera fav mithai nhi laya na.

Arjun- Arre mata main kya karta kisi gadhe ne teri fav swts kharid li. Pure area me kahi nhi mil rahi hai.

Maya- Main kuch nhi janti.

Roshni- Maya bandh do rakshi.Samar tumhe lene aata hi hoga. Phir Baba ne tum dono ko milne bulaya hai na. Jaldi karo.

Samar- Aate honge nhi aa gaye.

Rawtes turned to gate n found Rathods dere.

Liza- Bhabhi apne rakshi bandh diya.

Maya- Nhi.
Liza- Chalo sath me bandhate hai.
Maya- Main nhi bandhungi.
Liza- Kyun???
Roshni- Coz Arjun ne Maya ki fav swt nhi laye.
Samar- Koi baat nhi yeh lo tumhari fav swts jitna khana hai kha lo. All for u.
(Seeing her fav swt she get happy n tied rakshi)
Arjun- Samar tujhe kaise ye swt mil gayi jabki sare area k market me kahi nhi mil rahe.

Sameer- Uska karan bhi ye Samar hai.
Arjun- Matlab issi ne sare swts karide hai.
Sameer- Ha!! Maya thoda kam meetha khao warna grihpravesh ke tym tumhe uthane k chakkar me mera bhai hospital bad par pada milega.

All smilled at dt.

FLASHBACK END ~

She cme out f her memories hearing Rathod's voice.

Rathod- Tumne Rawte ko rakhi nhi bandhi???
Maya- Mujhe kya karna chahiye ye tum mujhe mat batao.
Rathod- Tum meri wajah se Rawte se kyun dur jaa rhi hai.
Maya- Wo kehte hai na ki gunah karna aur us gunah ko chupane wala bhi ek gunehgar hota hai. So he is also culprit.


Saying dis she moved out of kitchen. Soon he also joined his team.

Back at ETF once again all r analysing each clue dt dey hv bt nothing seems to work out.

Arjun- Kuch to choot raha hai Rathod par kya...

Rathod- Team yaad karne ki koshish karo waha kuch unusual dekha ho tumne.

All recollecting thier visit.

Aisha- Sir aisa kuch to nhi yaad aa raha.

Chotu- yes sir! Waha to sab theek tha. Soniya ke kehne ke hissab se usne Anup ko apna banaya hua kalakand khilaya aur use khate hi wo mar gaya.
Shree- Kya bol rahe ho chotu report dhayan se padbo. Usme usne kalakand nhi khaai thi.

Arjun- Shree kalakand nhi khilalaya to kya barfi khilaya.

Maya- YES! KAJU KI BARFI!!
Rathod- What!!!!
Maya- Aarti ki thal me kalakand waise ka waisa rakha tha magar juthi kaju ki barfi thi.

Arjun- Riya Soniyo ko pucho ki kya usne Anup ko barfi khilaya tha.

Riya- Ji sir! (After talking on phone) Yes sir barfi khaya tha. Anup ne kaha tha ki aaj wo uski fav swt khayega jabki use barfi bilkul pasand nhi hai.

Arjun (thinking for a while)- Shree mujhe sab k call records dikhana.( after checking) Hume katil mil gaya aur uska target bhi.

Scene shifts to Raisheena house-
Arjun- Kajal ji aap ke Anuj se kaise relation the.
Kajal- Yeh kaisa sawal hai.
Arjun- Sawal maine pucha hai aap bas jawab de.
Kajal- Sab thik tha.
Maya- Aur Anuj ke sath.
Anuj- Aap kehna kya chahte hai.
Arjun- Wahi jo aap jaan gaye.
Rathod- Aap aur kajal ki pehle shadi hone wali thi bt mandap me Soniya k zidd ke karan aap ko usse shadi karni padi.Kyunki soniya tumse pyar karti thi aur usse uska pariwar.Kajal tum bhi Anuj se pyar karti thi magar sab k manane par soniya aur anuj ki shadi ho gayi.Aur tumhari family or apne behen k liye Anup ne tumse ki.Bt kai sal bad bhi tum Anup ko apna nhi payi.Aur ek din Anuj wapas tumhare pas aa gaya. Or sath rehne k liye ye kia.

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wow...beautiful update samara...

i m enjoying this story very much...

would b glad if u provide a face for maya nd samar...as they r th parallel leads of th story
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Rathod- Aap aur kajal ki pehle shadi hone wali thi bt mandap me Soniya k zidd ke karan aap ko usse shadi karni padi.Kyunki soniya tumse pyar karti thi aur usse uska pariwar.Kajal tum bhi Anuj se pyar karti thi magar sab k manane par soniya aur anuj ki shadi ho gayi.Aur tumhari family or apne behen k liye Anup ne tumse ki.Bt kai sal bad bhi tum Anup ko apna nhi payi.Aur ek din Anuj wapas tumhare pas aa gaya. Or sath rehne k liye ye kia.

Rathod- Tumne Anup ko marna chaha. Sahi hai na.

Kajal- Ha yeh sach hai ki main aaj bhi Anuj ko chahti hu. Aur jab Anuj wapas aaya to main khushi se pagal ho gayi. Anuj Soniya se shadi karke khush nhi tha or main yaha. To humne socha kyun na hum ek ho jaye. Par raste me Anup or Soniya the. Aur humne plan banaya.

Arjun- Soniya ko marne ka. Ryt!

Kajal- Ha!!

Aisha- Par tum to Soniya ko pasand karti thi.

Maya- Wo bas ek dikhawa tha. Soniya ko to wo pehle se nafrat karti thi. Usse lagta tha ki soniya k karan Wo Anuj se shadi nhi kar payi.

Arjun- Pehle to mujhe bhi laga ki sazis Anup k liye hui he bt jab pata chala ki Anup ne kalakand ki jagah kaju ki barfi khai. Tab maine Mr Raisheena ko phone kiya or is kaju barfi ka hal chal pucha, to pata chala barfi tum layi thi. Magar barfi kabhi na khane wala Anup aaj behen k pyar me barfi kha liya aur plan kharab ho gaya.

Kajal- Ha! Barfi main hi layi thi. Mujhe pata tha Soniya iske alawa kuch nhi khaegi aur Anup barfi khate nhi the. So maine chance liya or barfi me zeher mila diya.
Humara plan tha Soniya ki maut ke baad hum court me proof kr denge ki Anup ne zeher de kar Soniya ko maar dala or usse phasi ho jaaegi. Iske baad Anup ki sari property meri ho jati or me Anuj se shadi kar leti.

When Kajal confessed her crime she get a tight slap frm Soniya.

Soniya- Main soch bhi nhi sakti thi ki aap ye sab karogi. Aap ko kya lagta hai ki main Anuj se pyar karti thi isliye ye shadi ki to aap galat hai.
Maine shadi Bhai ki khusi or aap ko is Laalchi Anuj se bachane ke liye kiya.

Jish din shadi thi us din mujhe pata chala ki ye bhai se tumhare jariye paise chahta tha. Aur bhai dete nhi coz wo aap se behaad pyaar karte the. Par jab pata chala ki aap Anuj se shadi kar rhi he to wo piche hat gaye.
Par jab mujhe Anuj ki asliyat pata chali to maine zid karke usse shadi ki taki tum khush raho or isse bhai khush rehte.
Magar itne salo me tum unke pyar ko na jaan payi afsosh tumne sacha pyar kho diya.

Soniya- Bhabhi kuch riste hume janam se milte hai to kuch hum banate hai. Kuch riste jaan kar bante hai or kuch anjane. Par zindagi me hume aise unchahe riste milte hai jisse hum na chahte hue bhi nibhana padta hai. Agar apne bhai k sath ye unchaha rista nibhaya hota to bhai aaj aap ke sath hote.

Par main aap ko maaf karti hu kyunki bhai ne kaha tha

RISTEY CHAHE JAISE BHI HO NAYE YA PURANE, USE AAP CHAHO YA NA CHAHO PAR EK BANA RISTA RISTA HOTA
HAI. AUR US RISTE KO EK MOUKA DE KAR DEKHO KYA PATA ISSE TUMHE KAI AUR RISTE MIL JAYE.

ETF solve d case n moved to office. Bt d words of Soniya was playing with Rathod, Maya nd Arjun.

Rathod goes to meet Liza at her lab n dere he found her with rakhi in her hand. He silently goes to her n shows her his ryt hand.
Liza first luk at d hand dan d person standing next to her.

Rathod- Rakhi nhi bandhogi.

Liza- Wo haq aap kab ka kho chuke hai. Is rakhi ka koi mayne nhi hai even koi rista nhi.
She throws rakhi n get out of lab. Bt Riya just cme to meet liza n she heard everything.
She goes to Rathod n take d rakhi in hand.
Riya- Yeh kya sir rakhi hath me nhi kalai me acchi lagti hai. Hath aage layiye.

He forward his hand n Riya ties Rakhi in his wrist.

Riya- Sir mujhe pata nhi aap k or liza k bich kya problem hai. Bt sir apne riste ko tym de sab theek ho jaega.

Rathod- wahi to kar rha hu riya. Anyway thnks for tieing dis.
Riya- Omg!Akhir kaun family ko thnks kehta hai.
WE R FAMILY. ABHI TO RAKHI BANDHA. MERA GIFT DO.
Rathod- kya chahiye?
Riya-Apki smile aur aur.. Amm. ..bad me bataungi.
Bye

At d same tym in conference room. Maya is still lost in Soniya's word just den Arjun cme infront of her.
She luk at his hands. He is holding a rakhi n swt pkt.
Maya takes rakhi frm his hand n Arjun forward his hand bt to his surprise she thow it away n goes out frm dere.
When Maya throws rakhi same tym Aisha enter d room nh rakhi fellin front of her. She bend n pick it n luks at d duo. As soon as Maya left room she goes to Arjun n without saying anything tied it around his wrist n left frm dere.

Both Sameer n Arjun seeing thier rakhi n den to thier sisters old plus new.

Sameer & Arjun- WE ALL R FAMILY!!!!!
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Precape-
Doc- Maya u need them. Dont send them.
Maya- I hv to. U said na ki dere r some treatment. I vl take it.
Doc- But it vl take tym till den u want dem.

One more case- Attack on Daycare.
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Guys its enough for today. Enjoy precape n gve cmmnts.


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