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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 12)

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
After six month both Samar n Maya think to disclose thier relationship to Arjun. 1st he didnt accept it bt get brainwashed by Sameer n Roshni, he agreed but at one condition.

Arjun- U must get Baba's approval too nhi to bhul jaao.

Maya- What!! He wont accept him. Tum jaante ho na Baba police officers ko pasand nhi karte and Samar is at Narcoutics dept as a chief. Aur to wo mujh par bhi gussa hai as maine nhi police line join kar li.
Samar- Dont worry Maya Bhai hai na he vl handle everything n i vl also try to talk. Trust me.

Sameer- WHAT!! NOT AGAIN. BHAI KIS JANAM KA BADLA LE RAHE HO MUJHSE BADI MUSKIL SE HUMARE GHAR ME SAB MANE HAI AB TU CHAHTA HAI MAIN RAWTE UNCLE KE PAAS JAA KAR UNHE MANAU. NO WAY.

Samar- Bhai ghar me sab maan gaye hai na to ab app un sabke sath milkar Rawte house jaao or baat ko aage badhao.

Samar- FINE!!!!!

Arjun- Lekin Sam tune aisa kya kiya ki tere ghar par sab Samar ki shadi ke liye ha keh diya wo bhi tujhse pehle.

Sameer- Mat puchh Arjun dhamki dene ko to de di par dad ko dekh kar jaan muh me aa gayi thi.

Roshni- Dhamki!! Kaisi dhamki!!!

Sameer- Maine ghar walo ko jab Samar aur Maya ke bare main bataya to sab kush ho gaye. In dono k liye nhi balki mere liye. Wo in dono ki shadi k bajay mera band bajane k liye ready ho rahe the.

Roshni- Matlab!!!
Arjun- Matlab ghar wale isse shadi ke liye kabse bol rahe the par ye taiyyar nhi ho rha tha aur jab isne samar ki baat batai hogi to sab kush ho gaye honge ki ab Sameer shadi se mana nhi kar paega.

Arjun to Sam- toh kya tu bhi shadi karne jaa rha hai.

Sameer- Tujhe kya lagta hai main itni asani se phas jaaunga. Back up plan tha mere paas.

Arjun n Roshni- Back up plan.

Samar- Bhai jante the ki aisa hoga isliye bhai ne dhamki dete hue kaha

AGAR AAP LOG SOCH RAHE HAI KI AB
APP MERI BHI SHADI KARA DENGE TO GALAT SOCH RAHE HAI. PEHLE SAMAR KI SHADI HOGI BAD ME MERI. MANJOOR HAI TO MAIN BAD ME SHADI K BARE ME SOCHUNGA NHI TO KISI KI SHADI NHI HOGI.

Dad ko pass aata dekh inki almost jaan nikal rhi thi par jab dad ne ha keh diya tab shanti mili.

Maya to Sameer- Tumne ye sab humare liya kiya. Thnk u so much. Bt dont worry main jald hi ek acchi si ladki tumhare liye choose kar dungi.

Sameer- Nahi. Tum to bilkul nahi. Pata nhi agar apni jaisi le aayi to tum dono ko jhel nhi paunga. Tum single piece humare ghar k liye kafi ho.

All laughed n plan how to convince Suryakant Rawte.
Soon Sameer along with his parents went to meet him n everything get settled for Samar n Maya's marriage.

Flashback ends~

After regaining d past memories all three Arjun, Maya and Sameer cme to thier real world. Last night dey enjoyed thier beautifull past but now hv to face bitter present where nobody likes each other.

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At Ravi lodge-

Arjun get up frm his rockiing chair n goes to washroom to freshen up. Soon he left for ETF office.

At Maya's Place-

Maya also wake up n does her part as mother n sis-in-law. Then also moved out with Liza n her twin devils i.e. Samar n Samaya. Liza goes to drop children at Daycare n frm dere she goes to join her new office. Maya too moved towards ETF.

At Rathod Mansion-

Rathod is now up frm his sleep n found bandage on his foot. Which is done by MJ last nyt. He get up frm bar counter n goes to get ready for work. He also reaches ETF.

Scene- ETF OFFICE PARKING

Three car at d same tym cme to parking area n all three person driving car cme out n gives thier famous glare to each other. They r Arjun,Maya n Rathd. Seeing each other faces they moved inside office. All staff wish them n luks at dem still dey disappear to thier respective cabins.

Riya, Shree and Chotu along with Aisha saw thier entry n begins gossiping.

Shree- kya attitude hai inka. Zara dekho kaise aaye aur chale gaye.
Chotu- Shree bade bade ACP's ki badi badi bate.
Riya- Dont know aaj kiska Rudra avtar dekhne ko miilega. Teeno ko dekh kar lag raha hai ki Bijli girne ki sambhawna 99.09% hai.

Aisha- Tum sab aisa kyun bol rahe ho.

Riya- tumhe aaye hue 2 din ho rahe hai na koi nhi jald hi pata chal jaega. Guys isse pehle bematlab Rathod sir k gusse wali barish hum par gire lets move to work.

All moved to thier workstation.

Bt One person is far away to even think abt work.

Inside Rathod's Cabin ~

He is sittiing in his chair n thinking abt his life n tried to understand eqation of his relationship.

Rathod in mind- Zindagi hume kab kis mod pe le jaae pata nhi chalta. Aur is raste me bane riste kabhi hame khushi dete hai to kabhi gum. Wahi hamare sath bhi hua.

SAB KUCH BADAL KAR BHI KUCH NHI BADLA.

EVERYTHING CHANGED BT NOTHING CHANHED
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I KNOW GUYS YEH KUCH JYADA LAMBA HO GAYA. SO BIG CLAP TO BEAR IT.

NOTE: FRNDS IN FB THERE R SOME POINTS R LEFT N VL DISCLOSE LATER. I KNOW U ALL MUST B CONFUSED NOW. BT I VL PROMISE TO CLR IT SOON.

SO ENJOY PRECAPE- A CASE ,
NEW ENTRY, MAYA'S ANGER, RAKSHABANDHAN OF RR DUO.

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
Superb update.
Flashbacks were nice and lovely.
Some were emotional.
Loved the convo of Cho-Ri-Aye-Shree in the end.
Continue soon.

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
sorry for not replying on last update
it was awesome
the dancers were actually
the wives n they took a good class of their husbands
poor roshni she was hurt
finally we get to meet samar
sameer-maya fights were nice n funny
all fbs were amazing
arni married n samar n maya in relationship
thanks
cont soon

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
awesome
waiting for d revelations

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zebbie0504

Superb update.
Flashbacks were nice and lovely.
Some were emotional.
Loved the convo of Cho-Ri-Aye-Shree in the end.
Continue soon.
thnks dear.
Harshamara Goldie
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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rizwanaa

sorry for not replying on last update
it was awesome
the dancers were actually
the wives n they took a good class of their husbands
poor roshni she was hurt
finally we get to meet samar
sameer-maya fights were nice n funny
all fbs were amazing
arni married n samar n maya in relationship
thanks
cont soon

Its ok n luv to know u guys r liking it.
Harshamara Goldie
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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Payal_156

awesome
waiting for d revelations
thnks payal. N dont worry bomb vl blast vry soon.
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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
it was awesome update dear.
loved there flashback.
love the talking between choree and riya in the end.
precap sounds good.
continue soon.

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