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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) (Page 11)

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
haaiilllaa!!
sabke biwi a gye!!
ab bachenge kaise sab!!
hahaha!!! 
achi wat lagegi!!

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
Nice update. ..

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
awesome update
sabki wife aa gaye.
continue soon.
and thanx for pm.

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 7:22am | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Awesome update...SmileSmile
Continue soon...SmileSmile

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 11:48am | IP Logged
PART: 7 ~ NOTHING CHANGED BUT ALL CHANGED ~ Maya n Arjun who r relishing thier past memories n drown in pain tried to sleep but it seems dt sleep is far away frm them.Here Maya n Arjun once again recollecting thier memories n unknown to dem one more person is restless tossing on his bed.He walked out of his room n pacing frm one place to other.An elderly man sees him n goes to him. Old man- Sameer baba sab thik hai na.Sameer- Ha Maharaj ji (MJ) (cook) sab thik hai. MJ- Sameer Baba aap jhoot bolna nhi jante to boliye bhi mat. Samar baba ki yaad aa rhi hai na???? Sameer noded his head in yes! MJ- To phir jao waha???? Sameer- MJ wo kamra usne sajaya tha. Waha un dono ki yadein judi hai aur sirf meri wajahh se dono aaj sath nhi. Aur sayad yahi wajah hai ki koi mere sath nhi.Kal rakhi hai aur sayad ek baar phir meri kalai suni reh jaaegi. MJ- Aap ek baar Bahu rani k hatoh sajaye hue kamre me jayiye to sab kuch thik ho jaega. Sameer didnt argue further and goes upstair n stand at doorstep.Some memories r cming infront of him. 1- A girl is decorating room n scolding a boy. Girl- Samar plz i want our room beautifull like paradise not as haunted bedroom.So remove ur all posters. Samar- Maya i m not going to take out anything. Maya- So b ready to sleep outside. Samar- Wat??? R u crazy.??? Maya- Samar iss kamre me har jagah humare pyar ki humare pariwar ki pics hogi. ( Luking at a person standing at doorstep) kyun sahi kaha na JAITH JI!!!! Sameer also smiled bt soon smile faded as he realised its just a hallutination of past memories. Tears rolling down frm his eyes. He stepped inside n started to luk at wall full of pics. He goes there n sees each pic.Bt two pic grabs his attention. He walks to pics. Pic 1 is of Samar n Maya. There everything is ryt. Maya luks happy. Pic 2 is of Sameer n Maya.Where sumthing is missed n dts Her smile. Sameer- Its only Samar dt makes u smile n wat i did, snatched ur smile. He takes out his n Maya's pic n throw it on floor n glass shattered in whole room. As he moved out f room a glass piece pearced in his barefoot bt he didnt cared abt it n directly goes to small bar at his home.He opened d liqour bottle n started to drink n while drinking all past memories cming in front of his eyes. FLASHBACK STARTS ~ SCENE- PARADISE HOTEL ARJUN, SAMEER IS SITTING WITH THIER FRND AROOJ, AMAN, VIHAN AND HARMAN.And luking at thier wives and to b wife bt thier love is glaring at dem. Sameer- Yahi hota hai shadi ka natija aur karo shadi. All glared him with murdereous luk n Sam sensed if sumone can b dead by glares dan he must b died for sure. Sameer- Mujhe guro mat. Main janta hu tumhari biwia ab bhi naraz hai. So function end hone ke bad hotel k manager se milna aur baki ka kaam tum jaan jaoge. Sameer- Thnks bolne ki jarurat nhi hai. Arjun- Sale hua bhi to tere aur tere us casenova bhai ki wajah se. Arooj- Aaj aa raha hai na. Aane do. Vihan- Uska band na bajaya na to mera naam vihan nhi. Sameer- Mere pyare kamino agar tum logo ne uska band bajaya na to zindagi bhar biwi ki sakal tak nhi dekh paoge. Arjun- Par usne hi dancers k badle humari girls ko bataya. Sameer- Nhi Samar ne kuch nhi kiya.Rosh ki koi frnd Research desk par kaam karti hai. Yeh usi ka kaam hai. Harman- Kaun hai woh frnd. Main uska khun kar dunga. Sameer- Relax tu kya hum sab badla lenge. Wo sayad aaj aaegi.Ab dekhna hai ki kaun hai wo. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ After some tym a beautifull girl clad in light purple coloured saree entered party. Everyone drooling over her except BACHELOR PARTY BOYS as they were busy to luk at lovly ladies n also getting fuming glares. Girl directly went to meet Roshni n hugged her. Now boys also saw her bt cant see her as her back was facing dem. Roshni to girl- Thnk u dear 4 cming. I m glad u r here. Girl- Anything 4 u. Naina- thnks yaar sirf tumhare wajah se hum sab humare patiyo ko jaan paye hai. Girl- Sorry guys mere karan tum sab me problem create ho gayi. I dont mean it. Aditi- Dont be yaar. We know ki un logo ko kaise track par lana hai. And asar to dikh raha hai humare rude behavior ka!!! Suhani- Sab hume manane me lage hue hai. Girl noticed Rosh disturbed n she asked her matter. Girl- What happen Rosh. Why r u so disturbed??? Roshni (sobbing)- He didnt cme to apolozise not even to explain last night scene. Girl- What???? (taking pause)ok I want to meet him. Roshni took her to Arjun and introduced dem. Seeing her all boys turned to Arjun shooting glares. Sometime back~ All were discussing abt d girl n dts when dey heard some guests talk. Guest- Arre wo ladki jo hai na yeh wahi ladki hai jiske karan Arjun ki party flop ho gayi. Another guest- tumhe kaise pata. Guest- Arre khud hi baat kar rahi hai. Main pas se gujar rha tha to sun liya. Now All boys were fuming frm inside to take revange. Aftr sum tym all heard Roshni's voice. They turnd n found her with same girl who ruined thier party. But all get shocked to knw who d girl is.

Edited by Samara92 - 30 August 2013 at 12:04pm

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Roshni takes her frnd to Arjun. She introduced dem.
All get shocked to see her.

Roshni- Arjun meet my frnd Maya n Maya he is... Arjun.

Maya n Arjun (same tym)- what r u doing here?????

Roshni- U know each other???

Sameer- Janege kaise nhi. Dono twins hai. Waise iss afat ki dukan kab mil gayi.

Just dan Maya noticed Sameer n replied.
Maya- Now understand???
Roshni- what???
All girls also joined her.

Maya to girls- Girls now i m sure all ur husbands r innocent aur rahi kal ki baat to woh zara behek gaye the or unhe iss (pointing finger to sameer) ne behkaya hai.
Plz forgive ur boys n punish him.

Sameer- WHAT!!!!

All turned to him.
Sameer- Tum kis janam ka badla le rahi ho.

Maya went to him n wishper- kuch 2 mahino pehle tumne meri burai mere samne ki thi its for dt. Battameez boy.

Maya- Girls usse bad me punish karna 1st enjoy coctail n sangeet party with ur love.

Maya- Lekin plz isse tumhare boys ko BADTAMEEZ banane ke liye punish jaroor karna taki yeh BADTAMEEZE bhul jaye.

And Maya went to Arjun n hugged n wished him.
Maya- Congratulation Arjun. Bt I m angry. U didnt call me.

Arjun- Tera aata pata to tha nhi to batata kaise.

After sometime suddenly line get off n they heard voice of man.

Man- Welcme Ladies n unk gentleman bhaiyo to d Sangeet n coctail paarty of Two lovly couple.

Coctail party to enjoy kar rhe ho ab waqt hai sangeet ka bt usse pehle main kissi ko kuchh samjhana chahta hu.

To suno
Bhagwan ki banayi huyi nayab Amanat.
Gurur na kar tere husn par
tere alawa aur bhi hai
pariya is jahan main.
Mana tujh sa na koi
par tere jaisa doondhne
ki talash ne hame kar diya
hai badnaam
aur bulane lage log
BADTAMEEZ lekar naam!!!!

And light cme n all found a boy at stage. He turned and music starts.

Sameer standing ryt next to Maya shouts his name.

Sameer- Samar u rock bhai.

Maya sees him n pass him glares n sameer signal Samar dt party spoiler is Maya. So Samar proposefully went to Maya n danced infront of her.
All cheered him.

Kaan me pudina dekha
Naak ka nagina dekha
Chikni chameli dekhi
Chikna kameena dekha
Chand ne bhi nidar hoke kiya
To sare bole gili gili akha.

Pap...parap..pap...pap... parap...pap parap pap paraaa x2

(Samar went to Samar n Arjun n hug dem. Both also joined him in dance along with others.)

Ho...
Meri bat teri bat,
jyada bate buri bat
thali me katora leke
Alu bhat muri bhaat
Mere piche kisi ne b pith kiya
toh sala maine tere muh pe mara mukka...

Pa...parap pap pap parap pap pap parap praraaa.

Ispe bhut koi chada hai
teharna jana
apna kya bura kya bhala hai
fark pehchane na
ho badtameez dil
badtameez dil
badtameez diil
mane na mane na

All danced at dis song. Sameer didnt leave any chance to tease Maya. All couples were together at d end n moved to their suits booked by Sameer n Samar Rathod as an apology. (Dont ask me why as u guys r too smart to guess n guys dont count Arni on dem. Samjha karo they r still to get married).

Finaly Maya also bid bye to his Arjun n Roshni.

Maya- Bye both of u n Rosh plz keep him away frm ur frnd Sameer or he vl ruin him. See at wedding.

Sameer- Hey!! Maya tu galat baat kar rahi ho. Bigad to main gaya sath me badnaam bhi coz of ur bhai.

Maya- Watever!!! Bye Arjun. Bye Roshni.

She moved out f party area to parking. And there someone was waiting for her leaning on her car. He was Samar.

Maya- U??? What r u doing here?? Wont u go home??

Samar- Hv to bt how can i. I mean how can i leave u here alone. Its my duty to drop u home.

Maya- Sorry to disappoint u Mr Samar par mere pass meri car hai. Aur agar aap hate to main jaau.

Samar- Ja to sakti ho par jaaoni kaise. Tumhare pass car to hai pae tyre me hawa nhi.

Maya- WHAT!!! par ye hua kaise.

Samar- Maine nikala.

Maya- kya??? Par kyun???

Samar- Mere jaise handsome ladke ke hote huye tum jaisi beauty akele kaise jaa sakti hai.
Maya just smiles at his antics.
Samar- So chal rhi ho na!! Kyunki tumhara intezaar karte karte mere pair dukh rahe hai.

Maya agrees at his request n he dropped her at her Rawte house.

Maya- Tum mujhe yaha kyun laye. Maine tumhe address bataya tha na.

Samar- Pata hai. Par koi hai jo tumhara bahut dino se intezaar kar raha hai. Jao.

Maya- Dad!!!

He noddec his head in positive.

Samar while leaving- See u at wedding.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

After all function marriage was done n all were vry happy for newly wed couple. But Sameer was happy 4 two reasons. First his two bstfrnd get married n 2nd his brother
Samar is serious abt a girl bt little sad to know dt d girl is Maya as she irked him so much and after dis relationship she wont leave any chances to irk him.

Soon time passed n now its almost six month passed of Arni marriage. Arjun also cme to know abt Samar n Maya's relationship. First he didnt accept bt after Sameer n Roshni brain wash him n finaly he agreed bt at one condition.

Arjun- Ok frm my side bt baba ki permission k bagair kuch nhi hoga n u all knw him ki he dont lyk police officers.

Maya- He wont accept him.


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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
great update
cont soon

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