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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50) - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update...

poor Riya...

gosh...bacche hai ya terrorist...shaitani ideas ka to pitara hai ye dono...

ab pata nahi bechari Aisha ko kaise drug peddlar banaya hoga...

continue soon...

PS:i hav a doubt yarr...i dnt think 3 yrs old children can do so much...u mst atleast keep their age 5-6...

pls dnt mind...i jst told u wat i felt...



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Posted: 10 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

beautiful update...

poor Riya...

gosh...bacche hai ya terrorist...shaitani ideas ka to pitara hai ye dono...

ab pata nahi bechari Aisha ko kaise drug peddlar banaya hoga...

continue soon...

PS:i hav a doubt yarr...i dnt think 3 yrs old children can do so much...u mst atleast keep their age 5-6...

pls dnt mind...i jst told u wat i felt...



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Aisha

I know dear bt story plot k hisab se unki age 3 saal ka hona hai.
But dont worry unke itne mature hone ka reason bhi bata dungi.
Just wait 4 some time.
These kids r most imp part of ff.
And i dont mind at all.
Thnk u.
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART : 9 (c)

DONT MESS WITH ME

After hearing Riya's story all r hving tough tym to control thier laugh bt Riya sees dis n pouted her face.
Shree controls his laugh n turn to Aisha n asked.
Shree- Aisha tumhare bacho ne kya kia.
Aisha- Shree??Wo meri bachi nhi hai. Aur waisi chahiye bhi nhi. Pata nhi usk parents use kaise jhelte hai.
Chotu- Toh tumhari wali akeli thi.
Aisha- Us akeli ladki ne akele hi pure mall ko sar par utha lia tha. Kisi toofan se kam nhi thi.
Sirf us chuhiya ke karan mera sara mission kharab ho gaya.
Riya- Mission???
Aisha- Ha. Mujhe mere informer Shakil ka phone aaya tha ki Mumbai me kuch illegal activity hone ke chances hai to usne mujhe milne bulaya.

Scene- Alveraz Shopping Mall

Aisha is waiting 4 her informer Shakil and pretending to buy sumthing. But soon her eyes caught a beautiful black knee legnth dress. And being a girl she cant stop herself frm picking it up. Suddenly she heared a girl's voice calling her name. She turned n found a lil girl.

Lil girl- Ye dleess meli hai.
Aisha (showing her dress)- Ye tumhare liye thoda bada nhi hai.
Lil girl- Usse aap ko kya. (n tried to snatch d dress bt Aisha took d advantage of her height).
Lil girl- Aap ye dless mujhe de do walna bahut bula hoga.
Aisha- Pehle to socha de do bt mujhe dhamki de rahi ho. Ab to bilkul nhi dungi.
Lil girl- Dont tly to mess with me.
Aisha- Huh! Watever.

Saying so she moved to otherside to talk with Shakil who entered d mall. But unknown to her a same lil girl followed her.
Aisha was talking to Shakil when dey heard d crying of a lil girl. For a while Aisha didnt think n started her talk with Shakil. But later realised dt d same lil girl crying next to her n all ppl at mall luking at her with suspicious eyes.
Aisha to lil girl- Kya hua tum ro kyun rhi ho. Dress chahiye to le jao bt rona band karo. Aur apni mumma k paas jao.
Lil girl (taking dress)- Mumma k pass to hu.
Aisha- What! Main tumhari mumma nhi hu.
Lil girl again started cryiing dt too bit loudly. All gathered around her.
One lady- Na jane kaise maa baap hai. Bache paida karke chod dete hai.
Aisha to lil girl- Dekho chup ho jao aur apni mumma ke paas jao.
Lil girl- Yeh aap kya bol lahi hai mumma. Aap hi meli mumma ho. Plz aap in uncle (showing shakil) k liye Papa ko mat choliye.
Wo aap se bahut pyal kalte hai.
Aisha spotted one goon who was dere to deal abt next attack on mumbai. So she was trying her best not to cme in goons eyes. But goon saw Aisha n tried to run frm dere bt She catched him. Soon police arrived dere arrest all including Aisha.

When Aisha spotted goon she ran to catch a hold on him. They did fight n aftr sum tym police cme nd found some drugs pkt at floor. Police asked dt to whon drugs belong to. Before Aisha can reply lil girl jump in thier conveo.

Lil girl- Police uncle ye pkt in aunty ka hai. (showing Aisha)

Aisha- No insp. Its not mine ye jhooth bol rhi hai.

Police- Jhoot or sach ka pata hum laga lenge. Chalo yaha se.

And dts how Aisha ended up dere.

Shree- Wakiya main manana padega accha phasaya hum sab ko.
Chotu- Dushman ki tarif karte acha nhi lag rha bt shree tu sahi haii.

Seeing a tensed Aisha Riya asked her d matter.

Riya- Aisha kya baat hai tum itni pareshan kyun lag rahi ho.
Aisha- Riya us bachi ki shararat aur gunde se fight k karan mera info wali CD kahi gir gayi. Hope wo kisi or k hath na lage. Main yaha se nikalte hi mall wapas jaa ka check karungi.

Bas Arjun sir or Rathod sir jaldi ya jaye aur bell kara de.

Choreeya- WHAT! RATHOD SIR OR ARJUN SIR YAHA AANE WALE HAI!

AANE WALE NHI AA GAYE HAI, Arjun informed frm behind.
All stand n lowered thier head as thier senior finds dem behind bars.
Rathod signed d bail paper. And all moved out of police station.
Aisha nd Arjun moves to mall to find CD of attack plan on mumbai.
And here trio tried to explain d situation bt one glare frm Rathod shut dere mouth. Rathod dropped all at dere respective home. Than headed back to home.

While Rathod is driving he gets a call frm Maya. He stopped d car n recieve phone.

Maya- Main kal Pune jaa rhi hu. Ek undercover mission hak. 3 din baad aaungi. Dont try to contact me.

And line went dead. He just composed himself n figure out what happened few time ago.

Suddenly he sees two lil kid struggling hard to lift dere some pkt n lil girl fell on ground. She started crying nd lil boy telling her nt to cry. Rathod approach to dem n made d lil girl stand. He sees some cut marks in her hand nd legs. He goes to his suv nd bring bandages her.
At 1st lil boy hesitate 2 tke help frm him bt 1 luk at his lil sis mellowed him.
Rathod asked dem- kaha rehte ho. Aur is tarah itne sare shoping bag lekar akele rehna thik nhi. Ghar jao.

Lil girl- Aap police wale ho.
Rathod- ha par tumhe kaise pata.
Lil boy- Aap tv pal aate ho na. She lespect u.
Rathod- thnk u. Ab aap ghar jao.
Lil girl- main chal nhi paungi.
Rathod- Main chod du.
Both kids nods dere head n Rathod moved to drop dem.
In SUV-
Rathod- Tum dono ka naam kya hai?

(To be cont)
Edited by Samara92 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ye updt jaldi me diya hai.
Utna accha nhi hai.
Sorry to disappoint u guys.
Bt my health is not gud at all.
So plz frgv me 4 any mistake.
And also sorry 4 not pming.
Now i m not feeling well so i m going to rest.
It may happen dt i wont b online bt dont stop loving my story.
Bye!!!
Luv Samara.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing part
the kids are really cute
but can be dangerous if someone
messes with themπŸ˜†
sameer also met them
eager fornxt update
thanks
cont soon
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PART: 9 (e)

RISTA JANA PEHCHANA ~

In d last part d two lil kid knocked down d best officers of ETF n dey all get bailed by Rathod n Arjun. On his way back to home Rathod met d same lil kids nd offered dem lift to thier home. The duo settled demselves at d front seat. Rathod did a little chit chat with dem.

Rathod- To tum dono ka naam kya hai ?

Lil boy- Mela naam Samal Lathod hai aul ye meli sistel Samaya Lathod.

Rathod understands thier problem of calling 'L' instead of 'R'. So he enquired .
Rathod- Samar Rathod n Samaya Rathod ????

Both lil kid nodded thier head in positives. Rathod again asked dem.

Rathod- Tum dono itne chote ho aur is tarah akele bahar itni shopping bags lekar ghum rahe ho koi tumhe chot pahunchata to.

Samaya- Alle uncle dont worry hume kuch nhi hoga. San humali mumma ko jante hai aur hume to unse bhi jyada hum swt jo hai.

Rathod just smiled at kids.

Rathod- But phir bhi bacho is tarah akele??

Samar- Wo kya hai na uncle aaj hum mothel'day pal sulplise dena chahte the. Aul shopping bhi kalni thi. Buboo ne plomise kiya tha ki wo hume shopping pe le jaegi pal unhe ek kaam k liye goa jaana pala. Jate waqt laste me unhone hume drop kal diya or kaha tha ki stole wale uncle hume ghal drop kal denge. Ghal paas me tha to hum pedal hi aa lahe the ki aap mil gaye.

Rathod- Par Mother's day kal hai na??
Samar- Wo kya hai na mumma ek kaam k liye Pune ja lahi hai. 3 din baad aaengi. To aaj raat ko hum celebrate karenge??
Rathod- Phir tum dono akele??
Samaya- Next day se Daycale camp sulu ho laha hai to hum 1 week ke liiye camp me lahege.

Rathod- Tumhare Mom Dad kya karte hai??

Samaya- Mumma Papa ACP hai but humne Papa ko nhi dekha.

Rathod- Kyu??

Samar- Mumma to Papa ke bale me kuch bolti nhi pal Buboo n Dadi sa bolti hai papa mission pal gaye hai.

Rathod sensed dt sumthing must b wrong with thier father so he silently change d topic.

Rathod- To mumma k liye shopping ho gayi.

Samaya- hmm! Unke liye fav chocholate n flowers liya, unki needed softwale, unke liye ek beautiful dless bhi aul ye kya hai (while chekung d bags) bhai ye CD apne li hai.
Samar- Nahi. Sayad mall ki hogi hum kal uncle ko de denge.
Samar- Uncle humali society aa gayi??
Rathod parked d Car near Rama Society. Both get out of SUV n bid bye to him.

Rathod (thought)- Pata nhi in bacho se milne par ek apnapan feel ho raha hai.Kitne cute hai ye dono.

After dropping dem he also goes to his home.
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Next Day
At 11:30 am

As usual all r sitting around conference table nt dere is sumthing change in etf.
Choreeya r trying dere best not to make any mistake to anger dere bosses bt thier chit chat help thier chief to lose his temper.

Rathod- Tum logo ki agar bate khatam nhi huyi hai to bolo wapas usi jail me bhej du jaha se chudaya tha.
I dont belive ki tum sab is tarah lock up me band miloge.
Wo to chodo Chotu aur Shree tum dono apne badges ghuma diya. ETF kehlane layak nhi ho. Shame on u guys.

Arjun- Rathod inki chodo inse kuch aspect nhi kar sakte bt Aisha yeh to irresponsibility ki line cross kar gayi. I mean ki itni important case ki detail wali CD isne kho diya just bcoz madam ek bacchi se argue kar rahi thi. Imopossible all of u.

Both boss left the room leaving thier juniors who r cursing lil kids in thier mind.

ChoReeYaSha (in mind)- I swear ager tum bacche kahi mil gaye to tum gaye kaam se.?????

Later ETF get d news dt a Daycare Camp is being attacked by some terrorist groups. ETF swiftly made thier entry in Daycare n kill all terrorist.
All teachers r now observing all kids. Soon a teacher sensed dt two kids r missing. She enquired abt dem. Arjun also came to know dt. Than a lil girl told dem one of d terrorist has taken dem somewhere.
Arjun- Beta aap ko pata hai wo un dono ko kaha le gaye hai.
Kid- Wo un dono se kisi CD k liye puch rahe the to Samar aur Samaya ne bola ki wo unke ghar par hai.

Hearing d name Rathod felt a sharp pain in his heart. He worridly ask d kid.
Rathod- Kya naam bola apne?? Samar aur Samaya??

Kid nods head in positive.

Arjun to teacher- Kya aapke paas inki koi pic hai???
Teacher showed dem thier pic bt most importantly his eyes caught d name of thier parents.

Rathod only see d pics which is taken by Arjun frm register.

Rathod- Ye to Samar aur Samaya hai. Rama society me rehte hai.

Arjun- Tum inhe jante ho??

Rathod- Ha! Kal main in dono se raste par mila tha aur inke society drop kiya tha.
Ye bacche ghar par akele hai. Inki maa kisi kaam se Pune gayi hai. Aur koi Buboo hai jo goa me hai. Hume in bacho ko bachana hoga.

All moved towards Rama society for d rescue mission. Soon terrorist died n d two kid get rescued. Bt b4 dying terrorist planned a bomb n in dt explosion total house was burning in fire. Kids were vry much frightened due to all bt Rathod taken d gud care of dem. When he tried to give dem to other dey clutched him vry tightly n not ready to leave him. So Rathod thought he vl move back to office with kids nd rest of d team vl do pending work.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u Jia03 always liking my story first. Thank a lot 4 ur support. Now its time to share ur views with us.
Plz cme out of ur shell n share ur views.
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