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Ristey... naye ya purane (updt ch 15, 16, 17- pg 45n 48,49 n 50)

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Sorry guys for my stupid works. I m going to restart dis work as i lost d track of my story. So i decided to write it one more time n promise u dt u vl luv it. I vl updt bt u guys hv to cmmnt too.So lets move to story.

INDEX:-
CS N PART 1: PAGE 1, 2
PART 2: PAGE 3
PART 3: PAGE 5
PART 4: PAGE 6,7
PART 5: PAGE 8
PART 6: PAGE 9, 10
PART 7: PAGE 11, 12
PART 8: PAGE 13
PART 9 (a): PAGE 16
PART 9 (b): PAGE 18
PART 9 (c): PAGE 20
PART 9 (d): PAGE 22
PART 9 (e): PAGE 23
PIC OF MAYA n SAMAR DAMSINGH RATHOD: PAGE 24
PART 10 (a): PAGE 25, 26
PART 10 (b): PART 27
PART 11: PAGE 29
PART 12: PAGE 33
TEASER 4 PART 13: PAGE 37
PART 13: PAGE 37, 38
PART 14: PAGE 43

PART 15: PAGE 45

PART 16: PAGE 48,49

PART 17: PAGE 50

Edited by Harshamara - 13 February 2014 at 1:08pm

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
PLEASE UPDATE SOON

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CHARACTER SKETCH~

ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE~
Second in command f ETF. A man no nonsense attitude, handsome, smart etc etc. Luv his wife ROSHNI (dead). Want to give justice to her by killing Sikandar, who is responsible for his lose.

ROSHNI ARJUN RAWTE~
Wife f Arjun Suryakant Rawte. Frnd f Sameer. Cute n simple girl, who was murdered by sikander.

SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHOD~
ETF Chief. Long lost frnd f Arjun n Roshni. Serious cop with serious luk. Has a past n secret which is killing him everyday. He is living in a guilt.

SAMAR DAMSINGH RATHOD~
SAMAR is d younger brother f Sameer. Bt he is also dead. I vl tell abt him later as story cntnd.


MAYA~
A girl who is connected with d life f our heros. She n Samar was madly in luv with each other. She hates Sameer a lot n dont want to face him ever in her life.

RIYA MUKHERJEE~
Research specialist. Luv Arjun secretly bt express her feelings.

SHREE~ SAME AS SHOW.

CHOTU~SAME AS SHOW.

Edited by Samara92 - 15 August 2013 at 1:05pm

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
CS looks interesting.

Plzzz update soon.

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
nice cs
cont soon
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PART: 1

~TERA MERA MILNA~

Scene: ETF HDQTR

One girl is continuosly luking at d entrance f ETF office n it is noticed by two person. They approach to her n so dt dey can ask her to whom she is luking for.


Curly hair boy- Hey Ri tu is tarah se entrance ki taraf kyun dekh rahi hai.

Girl (Riya)- kuch nahi shree.

Shree- Aise kya kuch nahi. Ek min kahi tu unka wait to nhi kar rahi.

Another boy- kiska shree?

Shree- Arre chotu unka jise dekh kar humari Ri ki galon me dimples humesha bane rehte hai. Humare one n only ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE, ETF 2ND IN CHIEF.

As Shree takes his name , a man f aged 28, well built, handsome enters etf removing his glassess n placing it on its right place (u all know which place i m talking). He is non other than our hero ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE.
He sees d trio n goes to dem.

Arjun- Rathod aa gaya.


Shree- yes sir! Wo apne cabin me hai.

Arjun- ok! Go back to ur work.


All nodded thier head and moved to thier work station.And Arjun goes to Rathod's cabin.

Rathod's cabin~

Rathod is reading a file bt lost in sumthing. His trances broke by d opening f cabin door n he sees Rawte is cming with sumthing serious luk. He enquired d matter.

Rathod- Rrawte kya hua hai itna serious expression.
Arjun- Rave party hone wali hai. I m sure agarr hum raid kare to bahut drugs n dealers pakde jaenge. Wat u say.

Rathod- Lets discuss it with team.

Both headed to Conference rum joined by others..

SCROLL DOWN~

Edited by Samara92 - 15 August 2013 at 2:18pm

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Scene- Conference room.


Rathod- Guys Rrawte ko ek bahut hi bade rave party n usme hone wale drug deal k barein me pata chala hai. Hume waha raid karke sare drugs ko seal karna hai.


Shree- sir yeh party ho kaha rahi hai?


Arjun- Sea View club.


Rathod- Shree waha ki sari details nikalo n Chotu Commissioner office se jaa kar raid ke liye papers par commissioner k sign le aao.

Chotu- ok sir!

Rathod- Aur Riya is party k host or baki sab info nikalo.Riya nods her head.

A few hrs later.

Scene- Sea View Club.

Shree n Riya r already at party as AMEER BAAP K BIGDE BACHE.Chotu is at Bar Counter. Arjun is also thier wearing a hood n keeping an eye to all.Rathod is at outside with forces waiting for Arjun's signal.

Arjun noticed a girl dancing on floor n he doubts dt she is involved in drug racket. So he goes to gather some info as he thinks dt she can do amything for money.


Arjun- Tumahara naam kya hai?


Girl- Isse tumhe kya.


Arjun- Mere sath chalo tumhe jitne rupaye chahiye le lena.


Girl- Rupayo ka rob kahi or dikhao mere samne nahi. Dafa ho jaa mere samne se.

Some1 call her frm behind "Nadiya" n she goes to dt person.

Arjun on mic- Rathod its Show time.


N After dis Rathod marched inside club n fired a warning bullet. All started to run bt dey cant.


Arjun to Rathod- Rathod ek ladki ko dundho jisne silver colour ki dress pehni hai. Her name is Nadiya.Hamare sawalo ke jawab use pata jaroor honge.


Nadiya's dress: image.dhgate.com/albu_316248313_00-1.0x0/sexy-nude-sequin-party-dress-short-prom-dress.jpg


Rathod spotted a suspicious girl. She was not d one Arjun asked for.


Rathod- Arjun mujhe ek ladki pe doubt ho raha hai. Main usk piche jaa raha hu.

Arjun- hmm!

Rathod follows another girl. Her face is not clearly visible. She is going to upstairs. She also sensed dt sum1 is following her. So she hide herself in a dark rum. Rathod entered rum n d girl attacked him.

SCROLL DOWN~

Edited by Samara92 - 15 August 2013 at 3:22pm

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