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LOVE IS PRECIOUS ...chappy 4 pg 24 (Page 17)

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Posted: 19 October 2013 at 7:26am | IP Logged
really loved it especially when uday kissed manyata on the cheeks please update soon and thanks for the pm 

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 12:32pm | IP Logged

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 4 PM me...



 
 4 comment sooo late...Ouch...
 
 

ur update was  
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u done a 
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lots of  4 u.Hug..
 
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Posted: 21 October 2013 at 1:12am | IP Logged
awisume thanx for pm

pari

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Posted: 21 October 2013 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Nice update sis...
All parts r really interasting...
Love it
do pm me nxt time n update soon

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Posted: 23 October 2013 at 7:26am | IP Logged
nice update...and thanks for pm...

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Posted: 27 October 2013 at 11:20am | IP Logged
I liked it infact loved it but tht promo thing is nt in the chapter... still I ll b waiting fr ur pmz...

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Posted: 29 November 2013 at 11:13am | IP Logged
love is precious 

chapter 3 

the bike race is start ... 

n in other side a girl who was standing speech less rember her first day in collage the start of a day its not like wired  ... when everything is control in her hands 

flash back ...

its a morning a sunrays disturb someone who was try to sleep she take her pillow n try to cover her beautiful face but suddenly her phn was ringing she take a phn she accept the call widout looking who is on the phn 

she is in sleepy mood 

hello who is this ?

 WHERE R U ? 

in sleeping tone she answered 

in my bed 

GOD NOT AGAIN TODAY ITS ITS A FIRST DAY OF UR COLLAGE N LOOK AT UR SLEF 

vinni chil yr its just 8 am  

what  ? R U BLIND OR SOMETHING 

WHAT do U MEAN 

manniee its 10 am ... 

vinni r u ... n she look at the watch she gone a be speechless couz she is right its 10 am n she missed her first lecture how can she do this ... she thinking to her self 

she got up her bad ...n start blabring her self  

shit shit shit i m coming i m coming 

she cut the call 

she get out of her bad she take her cloths n in an second she gona be ready for a collage 

she looking like this 


in other hand 

mam AAP ANDAR NHI JA SAKTI 

kyu hum andar kyu nhi ja sakte ?

kyu ki yuvraj uday veer singh ne kisi ko bhi andar ane se mna kiya hai 

in room a girl was sleeing her bad ... n suddenly she look a cup n n some jug n she asked 

wat is it coffee ?

SOME ONE SEATING ON SOFA N LOOK AT HER 

NHI CHAIYE HAI ... !!!

n suddenly she is shouting like aaa... 

uday is come out in his washroom n look at ... 

n he take breath n he said kitni baar kha hai ane se phele call tho kiya karo 

a girl who is seating a bed she asked him 

baby who is she ?

she looked at him n uday looked her when uday told her 

suddenly she tell 

baby ki choti bhen 

oh nice to meet u 

same here ..

she wears uday shirt uday looked at her ... 

uday : driver tumhe ghar chod ayega 

 N UR SHIRT  

ISE HUMARA TOFA SAMJH KE RAKH LENA 

she smiled at him 

she picked her cloths n get out there 

she huged her titly 

UFF KITNA CHILATI HAI 

dada i miss u so much but u noe this is to much

ab hum kya kare jab humpe saari ladkiya marti hai tho 

n wat about manyta ?

srsly i want to meet her actually i want to see how she is hawt now ... 

DADA !!!

uday : ok ok ... now i m going to my collage ... now i m already late ... 

unnati : bye dada !!!

uday : bye choti ... !!! 

in other hand 

I M SORRY I M SORRY I M SORRY I M SORRY I NOE I M LATE I M SORRY 

ITS KK !!! 

NOW WE R ATTENED NEXT LECTURE 

VINNI LISTEN I M NOT TAKE BREAK FAST CAN WE R GO IN CANTEEN FIRST THAN I PROMISE WE R GOING TO CLASS 

VINNI :sure lets go ... !!!

in canteen

vinni: mai kuch lati hu 

no no wait mai lati hu 

she got up her seat n she she was waiting for her turn n  suddenly some one come in middle of line ... 

hey line cutter ... r u blind or something ? i m standing there since 30 min ...

 everyone was scared 

one girl : now she is dead ... !!! 
2nd girl: he didn't forgive her ... !!

he turn his face ... 

r u talking to me ?

no i m talking to ur ghost now back off man ... !!! 

she push him

r u new in this collage ?

why did u ask me ? 

couz u don't noe me 

n who r u ?

he pull her weast ... he took her hand on the wall she try to go other way but he block her way 

wat u trying to do ?

introduce my self 

really ? i think u try to kiss me ...n than u introduce urself

wow great idea ... !!! 

he go toward her face he took his hand on her lips ... 

u just take off this fingure i warning u mr ... !!!

she try to complete her sentance when his cold lips touch her soft lips ... he kissed her wid more passion he kissed upper lips her soft upper lip than he kissed her lower lip ... she try to push him but her all strngth were vanished she pused him titly n looked at him who the hell u r ?
he looked at her wid a great smrick n she looked at his choclaty brown eyez ...  he go close to her ears n wispered !!!

yuvraj uday veer singh !!! 

she don't noe but her heart beat is faster as she noe that touch that choclatly brown eyez rember her some one else 

in other side some one watching them in jealousy 

uday leave her ... n looked at her wid signature smrick 

flash back ends 

every one is charing for uday n abhey 

n she rember how she meet abhey n than how her life is changed 

in a class room 

she entered a class room seniors were ranging were all juniors abhey just looked at her he go close to her n tell 

ur punishment is kiss me 

he take his hand on her lips manyta try to go another side .. he take her weast n said 

if u kissed uday than y not me 

leave me u jerk i m not a s**t 

really ?

he try to go close to her she touch his chest n some lightning in her hands n she pushed him wid full force n he pined on other wall the lightning is brighting ... everyone shocked the guy who kissed her now his hand is fracture ... she luked her hand shockingly ... !!!

a girl :wat is that ? 

i don't know ... !!! 

girl :some light in ur hand ... !!!! 

god swear i don't know ... !!!

a boy:watz wrong wid u ?

how can i do this ... !!! 

girl :r u ?

wat ... ?

girl :nothing leave .. !!!

she just run out side suddenly she looked at vinni 

vini some thing is litreally wrong 

but wat ... ?

that i don't know ?   

flash back ends 

kritzEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

now i think ur all doubts r clear n if u r not understand than u asked me EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


   




   

 

 




  


Edited by -Kritika- - 29 November 2013 at 11:21am

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