LOVE IS PRECIOUS ...chappy 4 pg 24 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey i m update 1st chapter of love is precious plz forgive me for my grammitical mistakes n do do comment n like also ... 😳😳😳 enjoy 
guyz 
ss : love is precious 

chapter 1

knok kock ... knok knok 

wait wait i m coming ... 

knok knok 

oofo uff 

i m coming ramu kaka plz clean this table 

yes mam 

she open the door 

ufff u !!! u have not passions right mannie ?

manyta: mom ... today i m really tired can i go ?

wat happened dear today is ur 1st day in collage so wat happened can anyone hurt u ? something wrong wid u 

suddenly she remeber today incident 


how he kissed her on her lips 

how she pushed him 

how lighting in her hands n everyone luk at her wid a great shock !!!

she wave her hand front of manyta 

suddenly manyta come in reality 

i m talking to u not ramu kaka wat happened manyta where r u lost  ? huh now i got it !!!

manyta is scared 

manyta: wat u got it ?? 

my daughter have a boyfrnd !!! 

manyta (wid wat the hell expretion) : wat boyfrnd 😕😕😕 ? 

aww don't be shy maniee tell me whoz the guy ... 

manyta : mom wat r u talking about i have no boyfrnd 

oh really so why r u tired suddenly  ? 

couz i m ... ya !!!

wat 

actually tommorw is my presentation thats why i m really tired now if u finished ur investication i m going to sleep gud night mom !!! 

gud night sweet heart 

manyta open the door she enter in her room she throw her bag in sofa ... !!! 

n she lay in bed she closed her eyes n rember wat happen to her 

wat was that ? that light ? i pushed him n ? 

oh god my head is paining like a hell .,.. !!! 

i need a desprine 

...xxx...xxx...

next morning 

in collage


uday take his hand on her mouth n he take her a empty class room 

uday pushed her weast she luk at her eyez ... !!!

wat r u doing uday ... !!! 

uday try to close u 

uday leave me 

uday where is abhey 

 i think he is in a medical room couz of ur best frnd  

he take her hand on her chicks n luk at her eyez 

my best frnd ? ? u mean manyta ?

yes cutiee pie  !!!

i listening many thing he try to kiss her on her lips n he punch him on his face ... i think ur best frnd more spicy den u !!! 

leave my hand i m not ur riyast leave me !!! 

i m here couz i meet ur best frnd wat is her name ? huh manyta !!! 

uday u !!!

suddenly someone open the door

uday got seprate her !!!

vini !!! 

manyta luk at uday den vini 

manyta: wat r u doing here wid him 

vini: maniee actually 

uday: actually we r talking about examz 

manyta: really ??

she luk at vini wid confusing luk 

manyta: so wat r u doing here ? 

uday: i told u i m talking about examz 

manyta: r u deaf ?

uday: i m sorry 

manyta: apologies accepted let's go vini 

vini: ya ... !!!

uday: who r u ?

manyta: i m a  girl 

uday: oh thanqu so much for informing me i think u r a boy 

manyta: oh u r blind also ... its kk u will be alright soon 

vini brusted out laugh 

uday : don't mess wid me i m not abhey i m yuvraj uday veer singh 

manyta: thax for introduce ur self let's go vini we r late ... !!!

precape : manyta n uday got a detention 


kritz 😳






 



























 







 



 

 
Edited by -Kritika- - 10 years ago
fireroad99 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
CANT WAIT WHATS THERE DETENTION GOING TO BE 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome loved it especially the scene between manyata and uday where they are answering each other back... Can't wait for the next chap please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...
luv it...
thx fr the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey!
awesome update dear
u have written it beautifully
manveer's convo. was nice
i just loved it
do continue soon
btwn hanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...loved it...and thanks for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
i love wizards!!!! loved the cs,prlogue,woub waitng fr ur chappys!!!!😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome story...nice concept and cs...continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey
How u? 😊
Extremely sorry for the late reply
First chapter was amazing
Superb, fantastic 👏
Really loved n enjoyed it
Wow, Manyata punched a guy
Really amazing, too good
Would really love to see why n how they got detention
Sounds extremely interesting
Thanks for the pm
Plz update soon 😃