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FF- I Tried to be Yours - Updtd Part 29 Pg 48 07/05/14 (Page 29)

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"Maa I am taking Peehu to meet Priya today." Said Ram to his mother while coming down the stairs.


Krishnaji argued: " Lekin Ram, she is too small to carry her in the hospital."


Ram counter argued immediately saying: "But Maa, I have to take her, I want her to meet her mother, I can't separate a child from her mother."


Krishna looked amused hearing the word separation: "When did I say separate? I am just saying that Pihu is too small to carry in the hospital, how much will she understand what you want to make her feel?"


Ram just smiled and said: " I am sorry Ma, but she doesn't need to understand anything, her heart will speak a thousand volumes just while being close to her mother.""Do I have to tell this to you Ma?"


Krishnaji went silent listening to her son's words as she knew that when Ram talks about emotional bonding and relationships it's hard to argue with him and defy him. Though she didn't want the little girl to go to the hospital, she had to amend because of her son.


She said: "Ok, but come back soon."


Ram went near her and said: "Ma don't worry, Pihu is going to be with her father and mother, her parents, don't worry so much."

 

Ram went in his room and cuddled his little wonder, he kissed her on her forehead, and got her ready to meet her mom, while doing so he kept on saying : " Pihu, princess today you are going to meet your mom after your official name functioning ceremony." Excited?"

 

The little kiddo just smiled on seeing her father and his infectious smile. Ram carried her in his arms and took all the necessary things with him which would be needed for his daughter on the way and return.

 

He came down and once again Krishnaji called him up and said : " Ram, please be careful, today the atmosphere is playing strange, it might rain. And you are carrying Pihu with you. "

 

Ram again gave his infectious smile to his mother and said : " Ma, don't worry, Pihu is my daughter, I will take care of her more than myself. And if the weather is changing, it should be a good sign after a long time na?"

 

Before Krishnaji could say anything more Ram went off carrying Pihu with him to the car. He himself volunteered to drive the car. He then nicely tucked Pihu on the seat and started driving the car with a speed to justify the weather and his daughter along.

 

Few months after the wedding - An evening to remember?

 

" Aaj mausam bada suhaana sa hai, hai na Ram" Priya questioned him while they were driving to a business party.

 

Ram : " Hmmm"

 

Priya looking out from the windows, absorbing the changed weather in her eyes said: "Lagta hai baarish hogi."

 

Seeing her trying to open the car windows Ram chided immediately: "Priya, close the windows, I have put on the AC here. Don't irritate me like always."

 

Priya looked at Ram who without a reason sounded irritated and so she asked: "Why are you getting so irritated? If you didn't want me to come with you, why did you insist then? I would have better stayed back and prepared for my upcoming assignment."

 

Ram gave her an annoying look and harped loudly saying: "You very well know that I don't have any interest in taking you along with me , but right now I don't have an option. Everyone wants to meet you as my wife Mrs Ram Kapoor, and in my business circuit, it's necessary to maintain relationships for future scores, so I am taking you. And I guess I have told you about it and if not you should have guessed about it, after all you are very smart na, right?."

 

Priya scuffled saying : " Yes, I am indeed smart. Thank you for saying that. Let me tell you one thing then clearly, I too don't have an interest coming with you, but it's a business party and I can catch up with some clientele over there, meet some important people there, and get my work, and so I am coming with you. Otherwise I would have straightaway declined your polite offer."

 

Ram got the message clearly when Priya stressed on the word politely' and thus he got agitated listening that. Though it was not the first time, it was happening ever since they got married.

 

Ram (pointing his finger ) at her said : " Stop getting back at me like this."

 

Priya (in the same tone as his) said : " Stop arguing with me like this."

 

Both went silent to stop the argument counters.  And so he kept on driving and she kept on looking outside the window enjoying the weather while the radio got played in their car softly.

 

A few distance down the lane, Ram's car started giving up.  As the weather changed, and it started raining heavily, his car refused to ply under those heavy waters.  This discouraged him more and made him angrier. He banged his fist on the wheel saying : " Kya musibat hai, Isey bhi abhi kharaab hona tha." He then turned to look at Priya and she got the message looking at his eyes and so she asked : " What? Do you want to tell me, that it's because of me this all is happening?""Oh please, not again."

 

She opened the door and came out of the car.  Ram asked her: " Priya, why are you out? Get inside, it's already raining badly."

 

She chided saying: "So what difference it makes to you. I love rains, and I want to get wet. Don't worry I will take a cab or an auto for my ride back to home, will not let your car seat getting affected."

 

Ram blew up and said : " Thank you for being so concerned but I don't need that. "

 

She started walking the road, taking each drop of rain on herself.  Meanwhile Ram was trying to get some help to start the car, but he knew that it would go all in vain, the only thing he could do was take a ride back home somehow as it was no point in going to the party like this.

 

Wondering why this happened he turned to look at Priya, since somewhere down the line he knew that he was getting concerned for Priya but he didn't wanted to say that at all, but still he couldn't help in thinking that she would fall ill if got wet like this.  And so while turning to her, what he saw was an undeniable moment, his eyes could see that his wife was enjoying the rains playfully, his eyes could see that his wife was getting drenched without any complaints. And the most beautiful moment was that he was actually enjoying the sight of his wife.

 

He kept on looking at Priya who was looking dazzlingly stunning in her attire. His eyes saw "The Priya" he had always tried not to see. He smiled looking at her, saw her getting completely drenched from head to toe, and he kept on adoring her.  He couldn't escape the beauty his eyes adorned.

 

He started walking near her with the music playing the chords perfectly on the radio.   

 

"YEH SAAZISH HAI BOONDON KI, KOI KHWAISH HAI CHUP CHUP SI

DEKHO NA, DEKHO NA, DEKHO NA, DEKHO NA"

 

He came near her and holded her hand from behind. She was completely surprised by Ram's move. She turned towards him and hardly could manage herself from getting not affected by the sudden touch. She turned back and closed her eyes immediately.  He held her hand tightly and brought her near to him, trying to feel her.


"HAWA KUCH HAULE HAULE, ZUBAN SE KYA KUCH BOLE,

KYUN DOORI HAIN AB DARMIYAN"

"DEKHO NA, DEKHO NA, DEKHO NA, DEKHO NA"

 

She went on to close her eyes as she could feel the touch of Ram. She could sense that he was getting very close to her and somewhere she could also see herself losing out to him.

 

 

 

 

He pulled her by her waist and made her to look at him. He cupped her face in both his palms, and kept on adoring the beauty in front of him. He immediately said: "You are beautiful Priya."

 

Listening these words coming from him she was surprised but at the same time got happy because it was the first time Ram had spoken like this for her.

 


"PHIR NA HAWAYEIN HOGI ITNI BESHARAM

PHIR NA DAG MAG DAG MAG HONGE YEH KADAM"

 

She had a slight tear in her eyes, which he spotted and brushed that tear aside with his finger. He kept on looking at her with a surrounding passion in his eyes and he once again confessed saying : " I have never told you before, but trust me I have always found you beautiful. You have very beautiful eyes Priya, the eyes which are like a rare gem; I would like to see myself in them for the entire life. But not only that, you are a beautiful soul from top to toe, and I adore you. "

 

 

The words sounded like a dream to her, but no, it wasn't her dream, it was her reality. A reality of having Ram so close to her. After so many days of their marriage, today was the moment when they were so physically close to each other. The intimacy, the passion was flowing out with the burst of the rains from the clouds.

 

"PHIR NA HAWAYEIN HOGI ITNI BESHARAM

PHIR NA DAG MAG DAG MAG HONGE YEH KADAM"

 " HAAN SAAWAN YE SEEDHA NAHI KHUFIA BADA

KUCH TOH BARASTE HUE KEH RAHA"

 

Priya tried to call his name but only to be shushed by him.

 

He put his finger on her lips and said : " Kuch mat kaho Priya, just stay like this."

 

"SAMJHO NA, SAMJHO NA

SAMJHO NA, SAMJHO NA

HAWA KUCH HAULE HAULE, ZUBAN SE KYA KUCH BOLE,

KYUN DOORI HAIN AB DARMIYAN"

"DEKHO NA, DEKHO NA, DEKHO NA, DEKHO NA"

 

He went closer to her, and kissed her forehead, and then her cheeks. With every touch, she could feel her senses aroused. She had her eyes closed when he kissed both of her eyes with passion.  He went down to her neck and gave soft kisses on it.

 

"JUGNU JAISE CHAHAT DEKHO JALE MUJHE

MEETHI SI MUSHKIL HAI KOI KYA KARE"

 

Not only the rains, but both of these loving souls were caressing each other.

His eyes spotted her soft lips and he moved his finger on it.


"HMM HOTHON KI ARZI AISE THUKRAON NA

SAANSON KI MARZI KO JHUTHLOAN NA

CHUU LO NA, CHUU LO NA

CHUU LO NA, CHUU LO NA"


Before she could pull away from him, he kissed her on her lips quite passionately. She too responded to it, and within seconds they both were lost in each other making time freeze the frames, with rains playing a perfect support to their intimacies which were hidden in their ignorance and hatred towards each other.


"HAWA KUCH HAULE HAULE, ZUBAN SE KYA KUCH BOLE,

KYUN DOORI HAIN AB DARMIYAN"

 

 

And just like a sudden storm passes by, leaving everything scathed, Ram Priya drifted apart from each other's arms and standing across keeping a miles distance between them.

 

The rains stopped, and there it stopped the coming together of two souls, who were passionate for each other, who were in love but only to be denied by the haunting pasts, who were still trying to heal the wounds, but their minds not leaving them forget about the past incidents.

 

Ram (in a calm voice) : " Lets get back home Priya."

 

Priya who otherwise could have gone to argue with him didn't say a word and just nodded in a yes' and started walking towards the direction in which Ram went.

 

Ram called up a taxi for both of them to get escorted towards their home, but throughout the way both couldn't stop reminiscing the moments which they just spent some time back, the moment they had in each other's arms.  Was it a start to their new chapter of life or there was still a long way to go? The questions still remained unanswered like many other questions.

 

Ram entered the hospital area and thanked the weather for not playing a spoilsport as he was concerned for his daughter. He parked the car and went on to pick Pihu up in his arms and then started walking towards Priya's room.

 



Edited by *Resham* - 30 November 2013 at 7:53am

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Posted: 30 November 2013 at 8:39am | IP Logged
beautifully written the song written in between their emotions for each other was very nice hope ram realised that priya is good soul so hoping that in future he may love priya and priya also reciprocrate her feelings towards ram continue soon and thanx for the pm

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Posted: 30 November 2013 at 9:05am | IP Logged
i read it already in rkr but every time its feels fresh 

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Posted: 30 November 2013 at 9:17am | IP Logged
yippie.. finally the next update that am waiting for will be the NEXT !! Smile Smile Smile


Read this one too and i again love it.. Clap

See ya.

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Posted: 30 November 2013 at 9:44am | IP Logged
beautifully written...
pls continue soon...

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Posted: 30 November 2013 at 10:17am | IP Logged
lovely update
both past and present are beautifully written.
Ram took pihu to meet priya...so cute and lovely.
but this lovely Man is very different person in pastConfused. I am confused like Priya, when did marriage happen...why Priya not questioned about her marriage and accepting the truth like this. First of all I am not understanding the Ram's Plan. so many questions...
but the best part of this update is rain part. at last Ram confess she is beautifulEmbarrassed...loved all part specially the kiss partEmbarrassed. hope from now Ram behave with her normally.
please continue soon and thanks for PM

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Posted: 30 November 2013 at 10:32am | IP Logged

pihu ram scene were superb..n rain scene too...
cont soon

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nice update. Continue soon

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