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FF- I Tried to be Yours - Updtd Part 29 Pg 48 07/05/14 (Page 20)

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Posted: 21 October 2013 at 12:35am | IP Logged
Priya ko 1 month ho gaya coma mein..nd now she is going to miss their angel's naming ceremony.. Disapprove
Ram has a big plan..Priya is confused with his behaviour..interesting
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Posted: 21 October 2013 at 1:04am | IP Logged
beautiful progression of d story
cont soon

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Posted: 21 October 2013 at 5:33am | IP Logged
its absolutely brilliant, so Ram has chalked out something real BIG for her and this will let both of them to be together for rest of live am sure, nice one, looking forward for naming ceremony, do continue ASAP 

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Posted: 21 October 2013 at 5:34am | IP Logged
thanks for PM
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Ram finished her work in his office, delegating all the responsibilities and working on some international deals. The company was heading to the major turnovers and was making the profits of many crores in store.

 

Each employee of Ram's only knew how to respect him, and true to the core of his status and work nature he so deserved every praise and respect attached.  The employees got dispersed after Ram's instructions and Ram was seated in his royal chair, the only person staying back was Vikram.

 

Vikram : " You are not going to meet Priya today."

 

Ram (paused for a moment, giving a wide smile at him) : " Tujhe lagta hai that I won't meet her, I am heading towards the hospital now. Just this work was always important so came here first."

 

Ram started to walk when Vikram echoed from behind: "Ram, she is going to be all fine."

 

Ram turned back and smilingly said: "I know Vikram, she has to be fine.  I will leave now."

 

Ram left his cabin leaving Vikram praying for his friend and supporting him any which ways.  Ram headed towards the hospital by driving his car at the speed which he can take to reach his Priya as early as he can. 

 

He came at the hospital and rushed first to see her in her ward. On seeing her he felt good, his smile became wider. He came to sit beside her when Neha interrupted his move.


Neha : " Ram I have to talk with you."

Ram (continues to look at Priya): Hmmm..

Neha (snapping Ram): "Ram , look at me please, I have to talk with you."


Ram (looking at neha, but still glancing at Priya) : " Haan Neha, is it something really important?"


Neha :" Yes it is, I want to talk to you regarding Priya."


Ram turns towards Neha with a little serious look: "Now what Neha? Please tell me only if something is positive for her, I am tired of listening to any negative things and the same things again and again.."


Neha : " Ram, I can't tell you all like this standing like this. You please come to my cabin."


Ram (his mind hovering on Priya) : " Neha, please can you let me be with Priya for some time, I will come to see you after a while, please.."


Neha looking at the earnestness in his eyes nods in affirmative and walks back to her cabin. Here Ram comes inside, and moves towards her bed, and sits beside her.

He pats her forehead, and gives a small kiss on her forehead, and then gives a soft peck on her lips.


Taking her hands in his he says : " Priya, I am sure you are doing good, and I also know that you are listening me. Priya, pata hai, humari beti ab ek mahine ki hone ko aayi hai.  Maa ne aaj mujhse kaha ke why not name her? And I liked the idea, Priya humari bachchi ko naam to milna chahiye na. Priya, don't worry, naam wohi hoga jo humne decide kiya tha, jo tumhe sabse zyada acha lagta hai. I promise I will name her by that name only."

Coming near her more Ram continued :" Priya, the only thing I will miss is being with you there. I so wanted these moments with you, especially now when I have realized how much importance you hold in my life. Priya, I am waiting for you to come back to me, and I am sure you are coming back. "


Ram kisses her hand and again pats her forehead, he is about to leave the bed, when he feels the touch of small fingers holding him.  He turns back to look at her, sees her holding him and gets surprised.  A myriad of emotions passes inside him.


He sits back on the bed holding her hand and keeps looking at her. 

 

 

Sun City - South Africa

 

The rays of sunlight fall straight on Priya's face. She smiles and wakes up from her bed. Looking at the time, she gets panicked and straightaway gets down the bed. She murmurs to herself: "Are Priya, tum aise kaise der se uth sakti ho, kaam nahi hai tumhe..aaj toh tumhe field pe bhi jaana hai.."

 

She starts to get readying up and suddenly she recalls the last night encounter with Ram. She stands still for a while thinking: "Priya, you are supposed to leave this hotel today. Then why are you here still? Priya, you have to leave, you better leave from here. It's just not possible to face that man."

 

On the other side Ram gets up from his magnificent bed and moves towards to see the sunrays beaming on the wide open gallery of his room. 

 

He smiles looking at it and thinks: "This morning looks good after so many years." He smiles a little more and keeps on thinking something. And then goes to dial the restaurant's number, he orders two cups of coffee with special instructions attached to it and a breakfast menu for two and asks the order to be brought in his room. 

 

He smiles again and dials Priya's room number. On hearing the dial of her room Priya who is lost in her thoughts panics more.  Knowing who could be at this hour she wanted to put a resistance for her for not picking up the call but then went ahead and picked up the phone.

 

Priya : " Hello."

 

"Good morning Priya" Ram spoke from the other end. Hearing him Priya stood rooted and her voice almost getting choked.

 

Ram spoke again : " Good morning Priya."

 

Priya : " Good morning Ram."

 

Ram (pleasantly) : " Priya, can you come down to my room now"

 

Priya getting tensed on this proposal : " What?"

 

Ram ( laughing) : "Are don't get serious, I am just asking you to come over because I am thinking to join you for morning coffee and breakfast."

 

Priya (tad uneasy) : " Nahi Ram, I am ok" "I will order for myself"

 

Ram : " Are but you will order the same thing what I have already ordered for you. Why disturb those poor kitchen fellows and make them do the same thing again."

 

Priya(questioning) : " Kya matlab?"

 

Ram : " Are matlab, I know what will you have, and what kind of coffee you prefer, so have ordered according to that, so please come over and we will have it together. Before you leave this hotel, atleast we can have the morning breakfast."

 

Priya stood rooted to the ground hearing this from him : " Par Ram, main toh.."

 

Ram (firm): " Toh tum aa rahi ho na?"

 

Priya (unsure and confused) : " Haan ok, I am coming, just in ten minutes."

 

Ram (smilingly) : " Ok, I will be waiting, tab tak order bhi aa jayega."

 

He keeps the phone thinking something more, and here Priya is utterly confused. She couldn't escape her thoughts: "What are you doing Priya? Why are you saying yes to everything which Ram is asking? No Priya, No, control yourself, you are not supposed to think of him, not on those regards, Priya, the past is still not forgotten, it will be haunted every time you meet Ram. Go Priya, leave this place as early as you can. Go, just leave from here"

 

Ram gets freshened up and at the same time the order comes inside his room.  The order gets placed up in his room, and he waits for Priya to enter.

 

The awaiting time gets extended to half an hour, and there are no signs of Priya to enter. Ram gets restless and is thinking loudly now: "How can my judgement be wrong of Priya? I can't be wrong in judging her, I was very sure that she would come then why isn't she here still? Did she run away, did she escape without making me know about it? No, it can't happen, I am sure something is amiss.""I have to see what's actually going on.."  He checks with the receptionist regarding Priya's sudden departure, but luckily she hadn't checked out yet. 

 

He rushes then out of his room wondering what could be wrong and walks towards Priya's room. He walks hurriedly towards her room and on coming near it, he is relieved to see that the room is bolted, he knocks on the door calling her name : " Priya, Priya, are you inside?"

 

He again knocks the door, and this time the door gets opened, as it was kept opened a little, though Ram realized it now. He opened the door and walked inside the room calling Priya's name and stood rooted on the spot seeing the scene.

 

 

" Priya I know you are getting better. And I know that you will be coming home very soon"  Priya clutches Ram's hand a little tighter and Ram reciprocates by keeping his hand over her. He smiles again, kisses her lips, puts her hand aside on the bed  and rushes outside the room to talk with Neha,  one thing he knew now that whether Neha has any good news about Priya or not, but he does have now. But once again promises himself and Priya in his mind that the naming of their baby would be a complete funfilled ritual and the name would be the same as she had her pick on. 

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Posted: 28 October 2013 at 3:04am | IP Logged
story is getting interesting but wat happen to priya hope ram will handle the situation continue soon and thanx for the pm

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Posted: 28 October 2013 at 4:22am | IP Logged
the way the track proceeds full of mystery is exciting i like it but please provide it quite lengthy please

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Posted: 28 October 2013 at 5:43am | IP Logged
too good, am loving this, awesome, suddenly what happened to her, is she okay, doesn't seem so, you left us amidst so many unpleasant questions and full of odd guesses, hope to get the answer of these soon , plz continue ASAP 

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