This is Suhana, i am not new to IF but yeah new here in Madhubala forum. Previously i had been an active member of Kis Desh forum but off scene from the time the serial went off air. Now, my crazy craving to write something has brought me back. i had a couple of unfinished FFs there but i am in no mood to continue with those as i think the stories over the time have lost their worth. So trying my luck with my current favorite on-screen couple, Rishbala. but you would obviosly be reading about Premeer here too as they have been my favorite and i can't let go of them but obviously Rishbala are the leads.
To be frank, i am a lazy ass so updates might be infrequent and also i am a bit greedy sorts, so will continue only if i get a nice response. Be frank and let me know if you want this to continue or should i just go away.
Lastly, please let me know if you people want me to give you some alert whenever i update. Looking forward to a kind response, here goes the Prologue.
This was third time in the month
and this was it, Prem thought as he got off his car and eyed the weirdly lit
building in front of him. It is not going to happen again, he decided, that
girl needs some serious straightening up and she would sure as hell get that
from him.
He leaned against his shiny black BMW and contemplated his moves. It's going to be kind of tricky to get on the first floor from the back of the building as there wasn't any solid pipe or anything to provide him the kind of leverage needed but he had to think of some way as he had just fifteen or may be twenty minutes at max before the police raided the building and arrested all the junkies partying like crazy on the first floor.
It was time for him to act and get that stupid, silly and totally retarded sister of his out of there before the police reached there. He quickly got rid of his suit jacket and threw it on the back seat along with his wallet and cell phone and started towards the building.
Music was blaring full on and the throngs of people who were wasted as hell were falling on each other doing their weird dances as shots of all kinds of alcohol and drugs kept on coming their way. The whole lounge was filled with smoke from cigarettes and other drugs the people were taking. The whole scene was exactly the same as it could be in some cheap and low class pub it was.
A girl about age of twenty one was settled in one of the bar stools and was barely keeping her balance. She had some drug filled syringe in her hand which she was about to inject in her arm when Prem jumped in through the window right across her. He rushed forward, grabbed her hand and threw away the syringe.
She looked up his face and gave him a funny smile. ''What timing you have got, Big B' Admirable!'', she said as she leaned her spinning head against Prem's shoulder.
"You bet, kiddo", he replied as he tried to make her stand up but she was not able to stand on her feet and kept on leaning on him. "You put yourself together right this moment Miss Madhubala Juneja, otherwise God knows what I am gonna do to you once we are out of this hell hole".
She shot him an annoying glance and muttered "Oh God, please Big B, can't you be any louder? I have got a reputation that goes to the dogs when you call me by that ancient name".
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So that's all for today folks. Lemme know what you think, i will be waiting. Plus ignore any spell or grammar mistakes as i mentioned earlier i very lazy to proof read or something. 😉
Loads of Love,
Suhana.
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