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VirMan SS: Opposite Attraction (Page 5)

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 3:33am | IP Logged
part 2 was nice he is sending his
marriage porpasal to her and he put
condition front of his father if she
refuse marriage him then he will stay single
update soon

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 3:50am | IP Logged
wow  yaar  the  story  is  awesome  

i  started jumping  due  to  happiness  when i understood  that  the  princess  is   manvi

great  story 

continue  soon  excited  for  the  next  part  

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 4:04am | IP Logged
amazing update...loved the characters ...and their conversations...really interesting ff...nice work...continue soon...take care...

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 4:20am | IP Logged
Awsm buddy... Its a very unique story and am lovin it... virman marriage ... yipiee super excited... cont soon and thnks fr th pm...

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Hi, jennifer.. Nice update..i m going to post 2 cments 1st is for +point n 2nd of -point.. 1stly,I like this king father n his 2 prince.. I lv virat in any form n this virat is too sweet n cute n simple adoreble n so on.. N u made viren younger that's smthing amezing.. N viren is evil like bro, wow thats too intersting. The cncept is nice n manvi, u never present her bt still i cn feel she is too tough to lv.. I mean very crul n egoistic type of girl.. N i like virat's strong will like only manvi none eles.

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Now.. Cm to the -point.. No.. M not going to cmment on ur writing skils i jst want to share what i feel when i read both of ur part.. So i don't like king vishal n they way he talk with his sons bt thats ok as its ur story n ur free to present ur character the way u want.. Bt he is too rude, next i m cnfuz while reading as m not that gud in eng n sm of lines goes over my head that i cnt understand the real meaning of those line n wht was that great aunt witch n that magic.. Its so unreal n cnfuzing for me.

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Aashalovevirman Senior Member
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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 5:04am | IP Logged
I know my view is like useless n stupid bt i seriously find smwhere very funny n intersting n smwhere very bore. Like the place where u r talking abt castle, cndlestand n all those decor were too boring to read.. N wht wast that magic n cnvo in the end, was he on teliphon or that was a magic machin or smthing like that. N why was that cucumber in virat's hand lol..n those vegiteble thing is also cnfuzing..All in all cncept,character, plot,story is gud.Bt presentetion, execution, progress is bore n cnfuzing

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Quite a different concept!
Thanks for the scrap...
Please update soon!Smile

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