VirMan SS: Opposite Attraction - Page 18

Hi jen, its me again n u r ryt i m going to cmment more as i love the 3rd part of ur ff, so, accding to it. Virman r still unknow to each other n virat cm here to pecify manvi.. Bt she is not that soft.. Bt wht abt that magical rose of that aunt witch.. Why didn't it shows any magic on manvi.Ok leave it I want virman cnvo bt i know as virat is in peasent avtar,so its not posible bt hope manvi talk abt virat in front of virat unintentionaly.N i think king vishal n empror knew that the peasent is actuly virat

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome..!! Like this Maanvi rude and not easily charmed..and would nice to read on how Virat cracks this tough nut...Waiting fr next n Thanks for the PM..!

Originally posted by: nrithyao

lovely update
loving this maanvi
wonder how virat is going to make maanvi fall in love with him
thanks a lot for the pm

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

awesome updates

loved it

maanvi is so rude

plz cont soon

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: vishalfool

Awesome

Originally posted by: Aashalovevirman

Hi jen, its me again n u r ryt i m going to cmment more as i love the 3rd part of ur ff, so, accding to it. Virman r still unknow to each other n virat cm here to pecify manvi.. Bt she is not that soft.. Bt wht abt that magical rose of that aunt witch.. Why didn't it shows any magic on manvi.Ok leave it I want virman cnvo bt i know as virat is in peasent avtar,so its not posible bt hope manvi talk abt virat in front of virat unintentionaly.N i think king vishal n empror knew that the peasent is actuly virat

Ok.. Sorry.. Not ff its ss.. Happy now, n no yar.. U cn write a gud ff, believe.. Ur writing skill is too gud.. N i cn see that.. Bt u r little weak in presentation.. Sorry bt smtime ur update bore me bt as ur writing skill is gud so i cn forget these flaws.. Bt u r improving.. U know wht both 1st part r litle bore bt 2nd one is gud n this one is amezing.. N m sure next part will b more intersting to see virman.. Bt i hv one request plz plz show virman litle more. Abi tk its very less virman..Thnx again.

Originally posted by: virman123

Thanks! Next time plz give a looong comment 😃

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