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RizArshi IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Welcome back Arushi Hug

I m sure ur angel will be happy to know about u writing again about her Khushi Kumari Gutka. May God bless her.

I was eagerly waiting for u to update Arshi Perfect World. As usual amazing update. Again u played beautifully with the mood of the story. At a time its all so emotional and next second it changes to romance or comedy. Beautiful. I would specially like to thanku for clearing one mess up by stating these lines:

"I had fallen in love with you before our wedding but had only realized it 'how deeply' after it." 

In the show this scene was totally messed up. At least I got a shock when Arnav said he fell in love with Khushi once he was married to her. I mean what the hell was he doing before marriage? So thanks for correcting it.

Khushi is shy and bold at the same time LOL Glad to have ur Arnav and Khushi back with us. Hope u'll be able to update soon Embarrassed

Lastly thanks for the PM :)

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by risat

Welcome back Arushi Hug

I m sure ur angel will be happy to know about u writing again about her Khushi Kumari Gutka. May God bless her.

I was eagerly waiting for u to update Arshi Perfect World. As usual amazing update. Again u played beautifully with the mood of the story. At a time its all so emotional and next second it changes to romance or comedy. Beautiful. I would specially like to thanku for clearing one mess up by stating these lines:

"I had fallen in love with you before our wedding but had only realized it 'how deeply' after it." 

In the show this scene was totally messed up. At least I got a shock when Arnav said he fell in love with Khushi once he was married to her. I mean what the hell was he doing before marriage? So thanks for correcting it.

Khushi is shy and bold at the same time LOL Glad to have ur Arnav and Khushi back with us. Hope u'll be able to update soon Embarrassed

Lastly thanks for the PM :)


Hey risat..
My angel was a big fan of KKG and a bigger fan of ASR.. God bless her.
I am so happy u liked the update.. and I absolutely love and adore the way you seen between the lines in updates.. Clap
Makes me feel special.. and BADA-WALA thank u for the gifts in the earlier post.. Hug
Love u 

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
Brilliant Update! Heart

I'm totally in love with this update! Read it 4 times and aww-ing. Day Dreaming

BRILLIANT! Clap

Continue soon! Smile

P.S.: About helping you with the banners.. I'm always there for you dear! Heart

Love you! Heart

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PhoenixTears IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 7:08pm | IP Logged
So nice to see you back, it was so long since we got an update and after reading it, I was like "Wow, now that was we call an awesome update". Superb work, beautifully written and I loved it. The way you give the scenes from show, a flavor of yours, it really commendable. I cant stop myself by watching this scenes again and again. SmileClap


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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
aww ur back!! did i mention i love this story??Embarrassed

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by TINA!

aww ur back!! did i mention i love this story??Embarrassed

 

DancingPartyThat I know.. BTW  Did I mention how much I love u..?

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ARUSHI_IPKKND

Originally posted by TINA!

aww ur back!! did i mention i love this story??Embarrassed

 

DancingPartyThat I know.. BTW  Did I mention how much I love u..?

aww so sweet.  love u back hun Hug muah!

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 5:52am | IP Logged
fantastic update.missed u dear.continue soon

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