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New Virman FF- Tanhaayi- Ch. 7 pg 19- UPDATED!!!! (Page 18)

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Posted: 04 January 2014 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
liked their both pov
both of them understood the other feelings 
continue soon
waiting for next update
thanks for the pm

Edited by niki795 - 04 January 2014 at 10:14pm

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Posted: 04 January 2014 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
Res :)
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Heyy!!
What a wonderful update!
I love how you give us both of their POVs
It's absolutely a treat to read
The connection between them is so perfect.  
Their loneliness bonds them to each other, which I think you've shown very beautifully.
Thank you soo much for the pm!!
Will be waiting for the next one Embarrassed
Take care,
Hinal Smile


Edited by basket_101 - 04 January 2014 at 9:57pm
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Posted: 05 January 2014 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Awseome update...!
Loved it...two people bonded with same feeling and felt the same in the past...beautifully written and portrayed...like it...waiting for their 1st time alone...n thanks for the pm...!
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Posted: 05 January 2014 at 1:02am | IP Logged
hi,,,, Minisha..Smile
Dear, wish u a very happy new year!!
update was super awesome...
liked it to the bits...ClapStar
plzzz continue soon!!!Wink
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Posted: 05 January 2014 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Wonderful update!! <3 Very nicely written.. Loved their POV's.. Both can feel each other's loneliness and both are kind of eager to be with each other and share their thoughts.. Lovely! :D Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care :))


Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 05 January 2014 at 9:20am
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Posted: 05 January 2014 at 9:41am | IP Logged
cool looking forward to read more
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Posted: 05 January 2014 at 10:49am | IP Logged

Both the chapters are fantastic.

I am so glad that they are
already feeling the connection between themselves.
The way you described virats happiness, his friend
getting amused seeing his smile.. then also helping
him realise the reason behind all these... superb job.
 
They both were searching each other and
when virat ran into her and that ear to ear smile... wahhh...
even I also had an ear to ear smile :)
 
Looking forward to their lunch date... ;)
Excited to know how the story will move forward...
how many obstacles are there that they have to face
in their way of love.
Then there is manvi's past also which I am
eager to know about.
 
So cont real soon and thanks a lot for
your pm's...
 
Take care...
tada...

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awesome update
thanks for the pm

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