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New Virman FF- Tanhaayi- Ch. 7 pg 19- UPDATED!!!! (Page 15)

devilaonmoon IF-Rockerz
devilaonmoon
devilaonmoon

Joined: 14 March 2013
Posts: 5031

Posted: 06 November 2013 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
I love the way you use the words and make them alive
in your writing, you make the feelings in those words so simple
yet so beautiful that each time I read your updates... the charm stillkeeps lingering in my heart for so long.
Yes dear.. your writing have that magic in it.
 
             
               Thanks for again starting to write after footprints...
             The truth is I still keep reading my favourite chapters 
                      of Footprints whenever I feel like Smile Smile
 
 
In this update virats pov rocked... Big smile... Really loved
how you explained the way manvi made virats frustration
of the whole day vanish just like that.
So viru boy was that desperate to be with our cute mannu that
he even proved himself a foody.. haa haa LOL...
Glaring at the waitress part for saying that the cafe was about to
close was sooo funny...
 
          It was adorable how each time they shook hands virat
                            felt something something   Embarrassed Embarrassed
 
                          Kuch toh hua hai
                                      Kuch ho gaya hai...
 
 
                The best was the sunset part on the roof...
                  Manvi was busy watching the sunset while
    virat was busy staring at the beautiful lady beside him instead,
                            well thats so wise of him... Wink...
         Virat is getting more and more adorable day by day and
               I am falling in love with this story with each updt.
 
 
 
I want to ask you one question if you dont mind... that is
are you interested in airplanes by any chance ??
Thats because in footprints also virat was interested in
airplanes.. I still do remember their awsm parasailing... Star...
Hope you would create such splendid and overwhelming
adventures + romance in this story too...
 
                               Thanks a lot for the pm...
                    And please dont be late this time cause
                  I will be eagerly waiting for your update...
 
                                                                               Take care... tada...
                                                                               ******************* 

drunkiiebabe IF-Sizzlerz
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Posts: 22900

Posted: 06 November 2013 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
superb update
thanks for the pm
Jannat94 IF-Dazzler
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Posts: 4794

Posted: 06 November 2013 at 6:38pm | IP Logged
Superb Update DearBig smile
waiting for  next part
update soon
niki795 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posts: 16463

Posted: 06 November 2013 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
loved their pov 's
virat is feeling strong connection between them
he is getting attracted towards her..
continue soon
waiting for next
ambarsariya Senior Member
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Joined: 15 October 2012
Posts: 591

Posted: 07 November 2013 at 1:07am | IP Logged
that was super awesome Minisha...
I mean the way u illustrated both of their views...was mesmerizing...hope u continue very soon...
will b waiting...
thanks 4 PM...Wink
bye,,,Smile
.Yamin. IF-Rockerz
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Posts: 5843

Posted: 07 November 2013 at 7:30am | IP Logged
i have been waiting for ur update n here it comes perfectly n awesomely ! beautifully written ! it's is terrifically superb ! i really really loved it Heart Lovely n amazing . Do continue soon if possible ! will be waiting :) thanx for the pm !
manvilover18 Goldie
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Posts: 1731

Posted: 07 November 2013 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Amazing update...
Update soon waiting...
JESNIA IF-Dazzler
JESNIA
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Posts: 2862

Posted: 07 November 2013 at 11:17am | IP Logged
awesome update

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