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GIFTING FREEDOM ~Independence Day Special OS~

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 12:55am | IP Logged

  Heyya Guys Big smile First and foremost A Very Happy Independence Day to all of you.Guys lets admit it , whatever problems we face inspite of all that there is something which connects us to our country, and the progress our country has made is surely worth praising.Though we cannot truely say that we are very proud of India , due to corruption, violence against women,poverty,etc. But we can surely help in our own little ways.

So now I decided to write an os, it is an emotional one, but I just wrote it.


                                     Gifting Freedom:

 

Taani and Swayam are walking in the college corridor. Both of them look sad.

Taani: Bhai , I seriously want to help them.

Swayam: Taani, mujhe bhi unki madaad karni hai, but lets face it we don't have enough funds.

Taani: Bhai, we can ask the gang for help.

Swayam: Taani, agar gang bhi help karegi, fir bhi I don't thik utne paise collect ho paenge.

Taani:Bhai, aap kabse 'positive' ki jagah 'negative' sochne lage?

Swayam: Not negative Taani , I am being practical.

 

Gang Enters.

Rey: Hey guys ! Wassup?

Sharon: Swayam, you look upset, Hua kya hai *looking from Swayam to Taani and again to Swayam*

Rinni: Sharon, sirf Swayam hi nahi, Taani bhi upset lag rahi hai, Kya hua Taani? Kaahi tum logo ke family ka koi aur member aa gaya ?

Sharon and Rey*panicking*: Kya, Ab hame unko bhi impress karma padega.

Nilesh: Taani, yeh batado kaun aaya hai fir uss hisaab se ye log prepare kar lenge.

*Taani tries to speak, but Vicky interrupts*

Vicky: Haan agar maa hogi toh jaldi pat jaegi, lekin agar papa hoga toh solid preparation karni padegi.

Amar and Bharat nod in agreement.

Neha: Sharon, me telling you how to impress mummyji, see first you will have to wear traditional, Don't worry, Neha giving you hers and''.

Bharat*to Rey*: Abbe Papa ke saamne thoda bachke reh'

Amar:Haan, bahut khatarnak hote hai'.

Nil: Aur agar'.

Rinni*to Sharon* : Tumhe proper makeup bhi karma padega'..

Swayam*irritated*: Shutup Guys !!!!

The gang yet keeps on blabbering while Swayam looks at Taani helplessly.

Taani: GGUUUYYYSSS !!!!!!!!

Everyone looks at her.

Taani:phew , koi nahi aaya hai.

Simmi:Haan to kab aayenge?

Swayam: arre hamare ghar pe koi nahi aanewaala hai.

Aashi: Fir aap log sad types kyun hai?

Taani: Actually it's a long story, hum sab log canteen mai jaake baat kare please.

 

Everyone goes to the canteen and settles .

Taani: Ok , guys , we need your help.

*Rey tries to interrupt but Swayam stops him*

Swayam: Rey, and everyone, please hamaari puri baat sun lo, fir tum log baat karma, please.

Taani:Ek chota sa hotel hai, woh jyada chalta nahi hai par poor log waha pe bahut aate hai, kal bhai aur mai ek casual ice cream ke liye gaye the, aate waqt hum log uss hotel ke raaste se chalkar aa rahe the, tabhi waha pe Ek aadmi ek bacche ko maar raha the , woh baccha 14 saal ka lag raaha tha ,uske kapde gande the aur ladke ke muh se khoon beh raaha the, aur ek ladki jo around 12 years ki hogi, uss ladke ko bacchane ki koshish kar rahi thi,uske bhi kapde gande the , thodi jagaho par phate bhi the,uske haath se khoon beh raaha tha..

 

 

    "Chachaji , bhaiya ko chod dijiye"*crying*

    "Nahi, hum isse kyu chode, isne gustakhi ki hai,customer ko ghusa maara" and he hits the boy again.

   "Humne koi gustakhi nahi ki, voh aadmi, Mina ko kheech ke le jaa raha tha", the boy says angrily.

"Toh kya hua, kaunsa kaam karti hai teri behen ?"

 

Fir bhai aur kuch dusro aadmi uss Chacha ko samjha rahe the. Mai Mina ke paas gayi aur usse bhai ka jacket pehnaaya, woh bahut ro rahi thi, maine usse samajhaane ki koshish ki, lekin uska dard bahut jyada tha, uski haalat dekh mere aankho mai aasu aa gaye.

Thodi der ke baad Chacha aaye aur unhone dono baccho ko kaaha ki agar who dono waaha par dikhe toh dono ko maar dalenge. Bhai aur mai, Mina aur uske bhai,Rakesh ko apne ghar le gaye unhe freshen up kiya, unhe kapde aur khaana diya.

 

 Khaane ke baad dono baccho ne hume Thank you bola.

Tabhi maine Mina se pucha ;

 

"Mina, asal mai maamla kya hai?"

"Didi , Mai aur mere bhai anath hai, humaare babuji ne hammare chachaji se kuch paise liye the, jisse veh lauta nap aye, jab chachaji ko maa aur babuji ki mauth ka pata chala toh unhone hum dono ko apne hotel mai kaam karne ke liye bola , tabtak jabtak hum saare paise nahi chukka dete.

 Hum dono din raat kaam karte, jobhi  khaana bachta ussi se pet bhar lete, hotel ke kitchen mai hi sote.

 

Aaj ek aadmi aaya hotel mai, usne sharaab pi rakhi thi, who mujhe aur sharaab lane ke liye bol raaha tha, maine usse mana kiya, kaha ki unhone pehle se hi bahut pi rakhi hai.

Fir unhone mera haath pakda, aur mere muh par thuke , darke mare maine unke liye sharaab lai, tabhi veh chachaji se baat kar rahe the, mere liye accha daam dene ki baat kar rahe the.Uss sharaabi ne chachaji ko kuch paise diye aur muje kheenchne lage, maine jor se bhaiya ko cheenkh lagai, bhaiya aaye aur hathapai shuru ho gayi."

 

Taani left out a sigh.

Rinni and all the girls were crying while the boys had wet eyes.

 

Swayam: So guys we want to help them by sending them in a hostel a bit far from Mumbai, where they don't have to work, and they can study and live their lives, but we don't have enough money.

Rey: So what? All of us will contribute to the future of these two.

The gang: Yes, even we will help them.

A random boy who was sitting in the canteen: Taani we heard Mina's story, even we want to help.

And all the people in the canteen stand up.

Taani sobs seeing the response.

Taani: Thank you guys.

Sharon:Guys I even think that a part of the money which we earn from professional dances can be given to them , to finance books, clothes, etc.

Everyone agrees.

Group Hug.

Rinni: Guys , do you know it is 15th of August today, lets gift freedom to Mina and her brother.

 

  



Edited by --coco-- - 16 August 2013 at 4:31am

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 1:50am | IP Logged
This is one amazing OS, di. I loved it completely. It had an amazing concept. Loved loved loved it.

PS: Change the title to and write One Sot there, so that people read it. Do mention it's for all fan bases. Of course, if you wish. =)

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 1:55am | IP Logged
A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!!!! is d only word wich i can say.
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keep writing lyk dis nikki! Hug n do pm me as well!=D

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 3:12am | IP Logged
wow awsam 
i luv it n happy independence day 

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 3:42am | IP Logged
amazing OS 
i really liked it
truly on freedom
thanks for the PM
really well written

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 4:17am | IP Logged

Amazing Os really really loved it

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 4:18am | IP Logged
lovely!!!
truly a beautiful independence day gift!

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