Asya ss..The Truths Out..part 5---30 sept....note - Page 3

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Hey...heres my part 3...
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SHE FELL DWN ON THE BANGING HER HEAD HARD AGAINST THE FLOOR..
"Zoya..."
Shouted asad..

HE RAN TOWARS HER.
"Zoya..zoya utho zoya..."

HE PICKED HER UP...LAYED HER ON THE SOFA...NAZMA GOT SOME SOME WATER...DILSHAD SPRINKLED SOME ON HER FACE...

"Zoya please utho"..dilshad.

AYAN CALLS THE DOCTOR.

BY THIS TIME RASHID HAD GOT WHAT WAS GOING ON AND TEXTED THE POLICE.

ASAD TRIES TO WAKE HER UP.TANU COME NEAR HIM. PLACES ONE OF HER HAND ON HIS SHOULDER. HE SEES BACK N REMOVES HER HAND...

TANU.."Oh jammy...chod dijiye use. Vaise bhi kya fiada. App jante h na wo kiski beti h.. uske abu aur ami kaun h. Is ladki k abu ne khud apni begum ko mar dala aur fir appki, khala nazma sabki zindagi barbad kardi. Aur jo bhi iske sath hua h wo dik hi hua h. Aisi ladki kisi k layak nahi h jisne itne logo ki zindagi barbad ki h. Aur nahi wo itna pyar deserve karti h. Aur app sab kuch janene k bad bhi iski fikar kar rahe h. Chod dijiye."

ASAD COULDNT CONTROL THIS ANYMORE. HE FELT LIKE SLAPING HER BUT RIGHT NOW HIS FIRST RESPONSIBILTY WAS ZOYA.

Tanu..."Mar bhi jayegi to kisiko koi gum nahi hoga. Aur vaise bhi iske jine ka koi matlab nahi h. Aur na hi koi chahega ki ye jiye. Kisiki chodi wahi beti se kon nikha kar na chahega. Kisiki anath,nazais(illegminate) aur ch..."
A TIGHT HARD SLAP ON HER FACE BY ASAD MADE HER SPINE SHAKE...


Asad..."Bas tanveer. Aur ek lafs aur me tumhe jan se mar dalunga. Tum zoya k bare me bol rahi ho...uske pehle ek bar khud ko to deklo. Tum jaisi aurat ka iss duniya me jina hi ek bojj h. Aur jaha tak meri bat h...muje isse koi farak nahi padta ki zoya k abu aur ami kaun h. Mujhe is duniya ki koi fikr h. Zoya meri zindagi h me use koi bhi kimat pe firse nahi kho sakta."

Tanu..."Aur agar wo apko khud chod k chali jaye to?"...IN A CONFIDENT VOICE

Asad..."Wo aisa kuch nahi karegi. Unhone mujse wada kiya h ki wo hamesha mere sath rahegi... aur me tumse iss bare me kyu bat kar raha hu..tumhe isse sab se kya. Tum sirf rishte todna janti ho. "

HE TURNS TOWARDS ZOYA N TRIES TO WAKE HER.
THE POLICE ARRIVES.."MR rashid ahmed khan?"
TANU RAZIA GAFFUR GET ARESSTED AFTER A LONG YES NO...

DOCTOR COMES.
ASAD PICKS HER UP N TAKES HER INTO HIS ROOM. EVERYONE WONDERS WHY ASAD TOOK HER TO HIS ROOM...

INSIDE THE ROOM...
ASAD LAYS HER DOWN. SHIREEN LEAVES.
EVERYONE ELSE IN THE ROOM.
DOCTORS CHECKS HER.

Doctor..."Wo abhi coomplete shock me h n islye wo behosh ho gayi thi. Maine unhe kuch doses de diye h. Unhe hosh to agle 12 ghate to nahi ayega. I will come back at 7 for a checkup. Take care .."

SHE LEAVES.
ASAD SITS NEAR ZOYA N KISSES HER HAND N SLOWLY HOLDS IT. DILSHAD PLACES HER HAND ON ASADS HEAD.

DILSHAD..."Sab kuch tikh ho jayega asad. Pls atleast tum kamzor mat pado. Is waqt zoya ko tumhari sabse zayda zarurat h. Aur agar tum kamzor padjoyege to..."

ASAD NODS IN A YES..

--------------8 PM ------------
ASAD WAS SITTING WJTH ZOYA THE WHOLE DAY CREASING HER HAND. OTHERS HAD LEFT.DILSHAD AND NAZMA IN THEIR OWN ROOMS. AYAN HAD CALLED UP MANY TIMES TO ASK IF EVERYTHING WAS OK.
THE DOC HAD COME AND WAS DONE WITH CHECKUP..SHE HAD GIVEN SOME MORE DOSES.
DILSHAD COMES TO ASADS ROOM.
ASAD IS HOLDING ZOYAS HAND AND SITTING ON THE FLOOR WITH HEAD ON THE BEAD...SLEEPING..

DILSHADS THOUGHTS...'Yaa alla...is ladki ne mere asad ko kitna badal diya h. Kuch bhi karke meri bachi tikh ho jaye. '

SHE WAKES HIM UP.
DILSHAD..."Asad. Tumhe bhuk lagi hogi kuch khalo.tumhne lunch bhi nahi kiya tha. Appne app ko itna kamzor mat karo asad. Chalo kuch khalo. "

Asad.."Ami mujhe bukh nahi h. Me bilkul tikh hu . App aur nazma kha lijiye."

DILSHAD GETS DINNER FOR ASAD AND FEEDS HIM...

Dilshad..."Tum jante ho asad..jab tum chote the to me sochti thi ki jo kuch bhi hua uske badme kya tum kabhi firse has paoge. Kya tumhare life me firse wo sari khushiya ayegi. Aur tumhe yad h bahot pehle jab zoya ko kuch hi don hue the is ghar me aye..usdin jab zoya aur nazma movie dekh rahe the aur zoya ne koi joke kaha tha...tab maine tumhe pehli bar itne salo bad haste hue dekha tha. Ek pal k liye mujhe laga k mujhe mera beta wapis mil gaya h. Aur us din mujhe ahsas hua ki sirf zoya hi tumhe kush rak sakti h. Maine tumhare aur zoya k rishte k bare me zoya ki appi se bhi bat karne ki sochi thi par fir maine chod diya. Ajj me sirf alla se dua karungi ki zoya jald dikh ho jaye."




Asad..." Ami me ye soch raha hu ki jab zoya ko hosh ayega tab uska reaction kya hoga. Kaise control kar payegi wo apne app ko..."

Dilshad..."Ha asad...wo puri toot jayegi. But no...she isa strong girl...
Bahaut kuch saha h zoya n apne life me...aur abb ek aur dhoka...yhe alla..."

DILSHAD GIVES A SMALL KISS ON ZOYAS FOREHEAD.

Dilshad..."asad tum thodi rest kar lo...kuch jahi hoga zoya ko. Hmmm..."

DILSHAD LEAVES ASAD AGAIN SITS ON THE FLOOR BESIDES ZOYA N HOLDS HER HAND AND KISSES IT.
SUDDENLY AYAN POPS THROUG THR WINDOW. BUT WHEN HE SEES ASAD HE DOESNT MAKE ANY SOUND.

ASAD SITS ON THE BED AND TUCKS ONE OF ZOYAS HAIR STRAND BEHIND HER EAR.

AYAN GETS EMOTIONAL AND REMEMHER ABOUT HUMERA AND HOW ASAD HAD EXPLAINED HIM ABOUT LOVE...

HE LOOKS AT ASAD AND IS ABOUT TO SAY SOMETHING BUT HE STOPS AS ASAD SAYS SOMETHING TO ZOYA IN HER EAR. AYAN WONDERS...


Asad..."Apko pata h na app meri zindagi me kya maine rakti h. App to meri zindagi h. Aur app k bina ek pal bhi mere liye jina mushkil h. Aur app yaha kab se aisi lati h. Pls utho na zoya. Nahi dekh sakta apko aise. Nahi dekh sakta apko dard me. Kaha gayi wo zoya jiske chere pe hamesha dimple wali smile rehti thi. Wo smile jo mujaise pathar dil wolo ka bhi katal kar deti h. Pls uth jao na. Sab kuch bhool jao. Sab kuch. Hum hamari zindagi ek naye sire se start karenge. Hum iss duniya se bahot dur chale gayenge. Waha sirf hamari family hogi aur koi nahi. Koi nahi hoga hamare bich ane wala. Sirf hum aur hamari khushiya.
SOBS...
Apko pata h maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki meri zindagi me aisa koi ayega jo mujhe jina sikhaega. Ajj sirf apke karan me fir se hasna sikha hu. Ajj sirf aur sirf apke karan ami aur nazma itne kush rahe h. Apne muje hasna sikhaya h. Logo ko bahar se nahi balki andar se dekh na sikhaya h. Har choti si bat me muskurana sikhaya h. App se Mohabbat karna sikhaya h.
U noe what...app mera sab kuch h. Me apki sari wishes manunga. App jab chahe tab pizza cake kha sakti h. Jha par chahe waha beth kar. Jitna mess falana chati h utha falasakti h. Jitni bore shayri aur bate karni h utni kar sakti h.

Ek pal tha jab mujhe apki har choti si bat par gussa ata tha aur ajj apki vahi bate mere jine k wajha ban gayi h.
Pls zoya uth jao naa...pls...mere liye..
Apko meri kasam,tum sirf uth jao. Warna me app se kabhi bat nahi karunga. Get up zoya...
Pls..."

AYAN COULDNT HELP BUT SMILE REALISING HOW MUCH HIS BHAIJAN HAD CHANGED COZ OF THE BIGGEST MUSIBAT...ZOYA

Ayan..."bhaijan..."
ASAD GOT UP AND WIPED HIS TEARS...
TEARS OF LOVE...

ASAD AND AYAN BITH GAVE EACH OTHER A TIGHT HUG...
Ayan..."kuch nahi hoga bhaigan mona ko. Wo tikh ho jayegi..."

Asad..."ha ayan...kuch nahi hoga zoya ko. Par tum yaha?"

Ayan..."Bhaijan wo mujhe apse kuch bat karni thi."

THEY BOTH SIT ON THE COUCH.

Ayan..."Bhaijan mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha h kya ho raha h. Itna sab kuch ho gaya. Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki hamare zindagi me itne sare raaz chupe honge. Zoya ki ami ka iss ghar se rishta. Zoya k abu..."

Asad..."Ayan maine bhi kabhi nahi socha tha ki aisa kuch hoga. Tumhare ghar pe sab tikh to h na?"

Ayan..."Nahi bhaijan. Humera subh se ro rahi thi. Use badi mushkil se chup kiya. Wo bol rahi thi use ek bar zoya se bat karni h. Nikhat ka bhi bura hal h. Usne imran k sath to rishta khud joda tha par use lagta tha ki wo usse mohabbat karta h. Ami bhi roo rahi thi. Abu pata nahi kha h. Unhone kaha ki wo raat tak loot jayenge par abb tat nahi aye. Wo bhi abb tak shock me h ki mumani aur mamu ne itna sah kuch kiya. Mujhe to kufh sqmqj nahi aa raha h...soch soch ke mera dimag fat gaya h..."


Asad..."Dekho ayan.. ham me se kisine expect nahi kiya tha ki aisa kuch hoga... par hame abb ye sach accept kar ke age badna hoga. Me samaj sakta hu tumhe kaisa lag raha h. Nazma bhi bahot roo rahi thi. Ami ne kaise to bhi khudko control kiya h..."

Ayan..."Bhaijan mujhe zoua ki bahaut fikr ho rahi h. Ham sqb to samal lenge apne app ko but wo.? Usske abu ne use aur uski ami ko chilod diya. Uski ami ka katl kiya haya tha...me khud apne app ko samal nahi paa raha ho bhaijan. Zoya kaise samalegi...?"

Asad..."zoya ne apni life me bahut kuch saha h...kuch der pehle me bhi yahi soch raha tha. Unke zindagi ke kitna kuch ho gaya h par wo hamesha koshish karti h ki wo sab kuch bhul k age bade. Pehle mujhe lagata tha ki wo iss duniya ki sabse khushnasib ladki h. Unke life me koi dard nahi h. Aur sirf me hi nahi...koi bhi unhe pehli bar dekhega to aisa hi kahega...wo hamesha apn dard ko chup k rakti apni smile ke piche. Kabhi unhe bahar ane nahi deti. Jab mujhe unke ami abu ke bare me pata chal tab mujhe ahsas hua ki wo itni bhi khusnasib nahi h. Mujhe tab pehli bar ahsas hua ki unki life me mujse zayda problems h. Atleast mere pas meri ami thi...behen thi...tum the...nikhat thi...nuzat thi..atleast mujhe pata that mere abu kaun h. Unke pas kuch nahi tha... Me sochta tha ki itna sab kuch hone k bad bhi wo kush rehti thi. Har choti si chiz me khushi dhundti thi...par abb mujhe pata ki zoya ko kuch nahi hoga. Hab sab h unke sath unhe support karne k liye."

Tring trig...

IT WAS A CALL FROM NUZZAT TO INFORM AYAN TO COME HOME SOON...AYAN LEFT




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ASAD WAS THINKING THE WHOLE NIGHT ABOUT ZOYA...THE TIME HE HAD SPENT WITH HER...EVERY TIME SHE HAD MADE HIM SMILE ON HER STUPID ANNTICS...EVERYTIME HE HAD LOST HER TO DEATH...

HE COULDNT SLEEP THE WHOLE NIGHT...


THE SAME CONDITION WAS WITH EVERYONE ELSE...


NEXT DAY ALSO WENT THE SAME WAY...ASAD RARELY ATE ANYTHING...THE SAT BESIDES ZOYA BUT SHE DIDNT GET UP...THE DOCTOR HAD COME BUT NO USE...



NEXT MORNING...AYAN NIKHAT NUZZAT WERE AT ASADS PLACE TO MEET THEM. ...ALL WENT IN ASADS ROOM...

IT WAS 9 WHEN THE DOCTOR ARRIVED...

SHE DID A CHECKUP AND GOT SOME REPORTS...

Doctor... "unki condition abhi bahaut serious h. She is still in the state of shock. Unke andar koi dhar behta h. unki body aur heart ek dusre ko support nahi kar paa rahe h. Unka heart unke body ke against ja raha h n isliye unhe hosh nahi aa raha h. Rest all depenndson her heart n wo kya soch rahi h. Right now me unhe ek dose de rahi hu. Iske bad kuch chances h ki unhe agle ek gante me hosh ayega. "
SHE GIVES THE DOSES



..Doctor..."Agar unhe hosh aa jata h to please mujhe inform kar dijiye n yes apko unhe bahaut carefully handel karna hoga. Unki mentally aur emotionally condition bahaut weak h. Thank you. And take care.."


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PRECAP FOR PART 4 TO BE UPDATED SOON...
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Read all in one go
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So emotional update..

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Asad emo confess to zoya..