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Asya ss..The Truths Out..part 5---30 sept....note

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
Hey guys i just joined if yesterday so decided to write something so heres my 1st ss on asya.
Hope u guys like it. Do comment hows it.
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The days in khan villa were goin all smooth...asad zoya fullfilling wishes...nazmas rishta still findin...(same as show)...
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The day started with a small sun ray on her face. She woke up to find it was 6 n she had woken up too early. Nor she was felling any more sleepy neither lazy. She decided to have a bath n then have something. She opened her ward room to search some good to wear n suddenly her eyes caught something. There they were-the two musical boxes, one hers n second of her abbu. A tear escaped her eye...
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It was 9 when eveyone was done with there breakfast were having some random chats when the doorbell rang.
Nazma-me dekti hu
The door opened n a shock + anger expression occured on her face
N- tanveer tum?
Zoya almost jumped from her seat.asad all angry. Dilshad shocked.
Tanveer-oh ho...itna jayda shock hone ki koi zarurat nahi h kyuki ab sabse bada shock lagne wala h...
She spoke as she came in the house.
Asad-ab kyu ayi ho tum yaha..kya chati ho tum.

Tanu...kuch nahi, bas apki thodi si help karne ayi thi main. Socha bahaut hurt kiya h na maine to thodi si help bhi kardo.
She said as her hands folded.
Tanu...main yaha sirf kuch batane ayi hu.zoya k abu k bare me.

Asad...kaha h zoya k abu. Bolo tanveer kaha h vo.

Tanu...are are.vahi to batene ayi hu me jammy...
But uske pehle kuch calls karne h.

She picked up nazmas phone which was lying on d table and called a number n put it on speaker. She sat on the sofa...


Tring..tring...
Hello...came the voice.

Every ear knew who it was...rashid

Tanu...to rashid miya kaisi h apki ami.

Rashid...whos it?
Asad was angry but wondered why did she call him.

Tanu...oh ho. App hame nahi phechante. Tanver..vahi jike khilaf apne sabut collect kiye the zoya k sath meri sachai sabke samne lane k liya..

Every one looked at zoya all surprised.

Tanu...so. me chahti hu ki ap apke ghar me jo bhi h une bula k phone loud speaker pe rahke. Me sabse bat karna chati hu.

Rashid...me tumhari bat kyu manu. Phlese tumne mere bete ki life kharab karne koshis kar chuki ho. Tume pata bhi h kitna kuch saha asad aur zoya ne tumhare karan...

Asad was all shocked.

Tanu...jaisa me kheti hu vaisa karo warna tum nahi jante me kya kar sakti hu. Ek bar try to karo.

Rashid calls every one n keeps it on speaker.
Rashid...ab bolo..
Tanu...20 min me muje sab ke sab yaha asad ke ghar pe dikne chahiye aur agar kisi ne bhi naa kaha to u never no.

Ayan...ye kya khe rahi ho tu.bhaijan ke ghar?

Tanu...ha ayan...

Ayan...but kyu...
Tanu...koi sawal nahi.yaha abe ke bad jo sawal karna hoga wo karna.me sabka jawab de dongi. I want everone here warna sabke raaz khul gayenge.

Rashid...kaise raaz?
Tanu...kahi raaz h...gudiya factory,zoya k abbu,and all n all...

All shocked..

Rashid...tum kaise ja...

Tanu...20 mins n everyone here...

----Call End----

Just 15mins n every one was der...
Tanu...masha alla. 5 min jaldi ...wow

Siddique(sidi)...kyu bula h yaha..is ghar me aur tum kya jati ho gudiya factory k bare me..

Rashid all shocked

Tanu...thoda sa sabar kijiye bas 2min aur
Asad...kya ho raha h ye sab tanveer.tum sidhe bata do ki zoya k abu kaha h.
Tanu...bas thoda sabar jammay...(flirty)
A car soung is heard n every one is shocked to see razia with cloth on her eyes.tanu open it.

Razia is shocked to see her at khan villa...zoya n every one der.
Raz...y have u got me here n wat is all this goin on.

Tanu...dont worry. Kych jayda nahi but aaj sare raaz khulne wale h. Sari sachai samne ane wali h. is ghar k bare me...



END OF PART 1



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HOW WAS IT GUYS..?
SHOULD I CONT.
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Part 2...down.


NOTE...page 3... precap for part 3

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Part 3...page 4...   part 3

Precap for part 4...   page 6...part 4 precap

Summary of part 1,2,3... page 8

Part 4...page 8

Part 5...page 11

Edited by sonia125 - 04 October 2013 at 10:59pm

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interesting.update soon
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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 1:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sasir

interesting.update soon

Thx...will update by 2mrw...
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hey amezing ya. Cnt soon plz
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More, More.  I want more.  Nice start. Smile
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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Xarina

More, More. I want more. Nice start.Smile

Thx sooo much guys

Will continue soon
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Wow! Awesome!!!Clap I love itHeart Please continue soon and please do pm me if possibleSmile
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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Heres my part 2...
Thx for all ur coments.hope u like it...
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Tanu...sare raaz. kuch naye kuch barso purane. Aur..

Just thn Imran enters.
Imran...tanveer tumne yaha kyu bulaya h

Nazma n nikhat shocked to their wits

Tanu...oh was waiting for u.

Everyone shocked..

Dilshad...yeh sab kya ho raha h tanveer. Kis raaz ke bare me bat kar rahi ho.

Tanu...bata raheh hum.
Raaz 1--So lets start from the latest news. Nikhat ki sagai Imran se tut gayi. Nikhat ko laga ki imran loves her n he will come backk but the actuall fact is Imran n Nazma love each other for past 4yrs. 3 sal pehle brekup hua n nazma use chod ke chali gayi. Bichara imran ko kuch samaj nahi aya. Haseena bi ne uska rishta nikhat ke sath fix kar diya n imaran ko laga ki wo age bad jayega n marry nikhat. Raaz 2---Sab kuch dikh chal raha tha but wo kuch bhul gaya tha. Uski amanat. Uska bacha. After brekup with nazma, somwhere a year ago he was drunk n jaise maine asad ka faida uthaya tha the same with imran. So...mere bache k abbu imran h...

NAZMA.NIKHAT.AYAN.ASAD.ALL SHOCKED...

Nikhat...aisa nahi ho sakta. Mujhe pata h imran loves me.
Tanu...oh ho. Abhi se itne jayda shock mat ho
Abb bahaut kuch bacha h batane ko.
So lets continue. Raaz3----   yeh raaz to sabko pata h but half. Me asad se nikha karna chahti thi aur bahaut bar zoya ko marne ki koshish bhi ki. But i failed. Par sirf me hi nahi thi jo zoya ko apni zindagi se bahar bhejna chahti thi. Razia bhi bi chati thi.

ZOYA N ASAD COULDNT BELIVE WHAT THEY HEARD.
SIDDIQUE N ALL THERS HAD A CONFUSED LOOK ON THEIR FACES...

Razia...ye kya keh rahi ho tum. Me kyu karongi. Jooth h yeh sab.
Tanu...bas bi aur kitne jooth bologi.

Zoya...enough tanveer. Jooth tum bolo rahi ho. Wo muje kyu apni zindagi se door karna chagi. Unka mujse kya rishta h?

Tanu...hahaha...zoya zoya bahaut bohli ho tum. Nahi samjogi. Is ghar ke har ek member se tumhara rishta h. Tum abhi wale rishte mat samjna mr khan.phuphi.dost.rabert..and all..sab ka tumse bahaut purna rishta h.ya yu kaho tumhare ami ka aur abb...

Razia...bas tanveer tum kya keh rahi ho.

ZOYA COULDNT BELIVE

Tanu...pata tha muje bi ki app bologi isliye maine apko bande k rakha tha. Par ajj nahi.

Zoya...tanveer tum kaise janti ho meri ammi ko.. kaha h mere abu. Aur kaisa rishta.
Tanu...yeh bahaut bada raaz h isliye end me.
Ha to me kaha thi..haa...razia bi tumhe apni zindagi se nikalna chahti thi kyuki wo nahi chati thi ki tumhe apne parivar ke bare me kuch bi pata chale. Isliye tume aur asad ko alag karne ke har sazaish me wo mere sath thi.
Aur ye sab ka rishta h purane guidiya factory ke raaz me...

DILSHAD REMEMBERS ABOUT THE DOOL...

Gaffur...kya janti ho tum gudiya factory ke bare..

Tanu...bahaut bolte h sab. But isske bad me koi nahi bol payega.
So..Raaz 4...the famous Gudiya factory raaz.

Rashid...tum kaise janti ho use raaz ke bare m..

Tanu...me kaise janti hu?hahaha. Rashid miya app jo jante h yo to bas ek makhi sa h.

Rashid...tumhe pata h wo aurat ko thi jiski us din maut hui thi. Wo aurat jisne meri puri zindagi bigad di. Mere pure parivar ko tod diya.kon thi wo.

DILSHAD ASAD SHIREEN AYAN SHOCKED...

Tanu...bas bas...
bata rahe h hum. Us din jis ki maut hui thi wo siddique sahab ki 1st wife thi aur ye baat razai bi bhi janti thi. N unhone hi uska katl kiya tha.Aur sara ilzam rashid pe laga diya.
EVERY ONE SHOCKED.
Raziya...bas tanveer. Aur kuch nahi

Tanu...katal razia n sidique ne kiya aur fir rashid miya ko bulaya us factory ko jalane ke liye kuki usme rashid ka Raaz 5 chupa tha..
Raaz 5...shireen rashid se pyar karti thi.unhe pata nahi tha ki unka nikha ho gaya h. Shireen ne apne bhai ko bataya aur fir razia n sidique ne chal chali.Jo maine asad ke sath kiya tha vahi rashid ke sath hua.Alchohol k nashe me rashid ko pata nahi chala ki kya hua..shireen ki izzat bachne k liye usse nikha kar liya.Rashid k 2 biwi hone ka raaz chupa tha use factory me.
Back to Raaz 4.razia ne kaha rashid se use factory ko jala ne ko.Par wo nahi jante the use factory me unke ane se pehle ek katl kiya gaya tha aur wo lash wahi padi thi.Rashid ne use factory ko agg lagaya aur fir unhe ahsas hua ki andar koi h. Razia ne unhe blackmail kiya ki ek aur gunha unse ho gaya.Razia ne kaha ki wo kisiko nahi batagi agar wo dilshad ko chod dega.Apne parivar ko bachne ke liye rashid ne dilshad ko chod diya aur kaha ki wo paiso k liye chod rahe h. Par aaj bhi wo dilshad se bahaut mohabat karte h.

DILSHAD COULDNT STILL COME OUT OF D SHOCK

Rashid...bhabi apne sara ilzam muj pe laga diya aur apne apni biwi ka khun kiya. App dono k karan mere pure parivar ko kitna kuch sehna pada aur muje laga ki yeh sab maine kiya..

Tanu...ha us aurat ne apki puri zindagi barbad kardi Tanu... Aur khud chain se mar gayi. Chalo koi nahi...

Asad...aur zoya k ami n abu kaha h.

Tanu...ok fine Raaz 6..
is ghar ka sabse bada raaz. Use aurat jika katal kiya tha wo raaz.
Zoya maine tumse kaha tha na ki tumhara is ghar se bahhaut purna rishta h.
Tumhe lagta tha ki tumhari ami ki maut agg me jalke hui thi jisme tum bhi thi. Par us din tumhari ami ki maut nahi hui thi.Wo agg to tumhe aur tumhri ami ko marne k liye hi lagai thi par dono bach gaye par ek dusre ke liye mar gaye the.Tumhe ek bhale insan ne bachya tha aur fir ek anath ashram me dal diya tha.Wo insan aur koi nahi rashid the..yaad he apko?

Rashid...ha muje yaad h par wo zoya thi?

Tanu...ha wo zoya thi.
Tumhari ami ko laga ki tum nahi bachi n fir wo apne shuhar k pas ayi...
And abb kuch dots connect karo aur tumhe pata chal gayega kya hua tha.
Wo aurat jiska katl kiya tha wo tumhari ami thi.
SHOCK SHOCK SHOCK
Razia bi n sidique n unhe mara.
Razia bi nahi chati thi ki tumhe pata chale tumhare abu ke bare me isliye tumhe apni zindagi se nikalna chati thi.
Yeh tumhare abu jisne tumhari ami ko mara aur ilzam rashid miya par laga diya.
Zoya..abb to mujpe vishwas karo.
Ek minute.
SHE GOES INSIDE N COMES WID THE MUSICAL BOX.
Yeh dekho. Ye tumhe tumhare abbu ne diya tha na.
Pehchante he app isse siddique sahab.Apne aise do banaye the.Ek apni badi beti ko diya tha aur ek humera.
Zoya zoya...kya hua tumhe. Maine kaha tha na ki tumhara is ghar se bahaut purana rishta h ya yu samjo tumhari ami ka
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Tumhari ami ke karan aaj is ghar ke har member ki zindagi aisi h..
Agar us agg me tumhari ami aur tum dono mar gayi hoti to aisa kuch nahi hota. Na asad ki khala,nazma rashid ayan nikhat nuzat shireen..kisi ki zindagi aisi nahi hoti.
Tum to ache se janti ho na asad aur sidique sahab ki bahaut purani dushmani h. Pata nahi kaise jee paogi tum itne bade ilzam ke sath. Itni sari zindagi barbad karne ke ilzam ke sath...hahahahahahaha...

EVERYONE COULDNT BELIVE THE TRUTH..
ASAD WAS SHOCKED...ZOYA...SIDDIQUIS DAUGHTER...RAZIA KILLED HER AMI...BLAME ON RASHID SAHAB...

HE LOOKED TOWARDS HER STANNDING RIGHT BESIDES HIM..TEARS WERE ROLLING DOWN LIKE A WATERFALL. HE COULD EASILY UNDERSTAND WHAT WAS GOING INSIDE HER..ABOUT HER ABU...AMI...FAMILY...

HE LOOKED AROUND. EVERYONE WAS SHOCKED. TANVEER LAUGHING... EVERYONE WAS IN TEARS... ZOYAS HEAD STARTED FEELING HEAVY.
HOW COULD HER ABBU KILL MY AMI.
HOW COULD SOMEONE KILL MY AMI...

ALL THESE THOUGHTS WERE THERE JUST FOR A SECOND.
NOW HER FEAR FOR FIRE WAS VERY SMALL THAN THE FEAR IN HER HEART AT THAT TIME...
NOT HER AMI...
NOR ABU...
BUT SOMETHING THAT WOULD JUST TAKE AWAY HER SOUL FROM HER BODY WITHIN A FRACTION OF SECOND...
HER KNEES FELT WEEK...
SHE COULD FEEL A PINCH IN HER HEART OF HER LOVE...
OF HER MR KHAN...
THE THOUGHT OF HIM LEAVING HER JUST KILLED HER...
SHE HAD LOST HER MIND...
HER BODY...
HER SOUL...
ONLY THING LEFT WAS HER HEART FOR THE MAN STANDING BESIDES HER...WHICH WAS NOW CRUSHING INTO PEICES...
SHE FELT A PEICE OF HER HEART JUST FELL DOWN TO HER LEGS...
EVERYTHING IN HER LIFE WAS SHATTERED...
HER LIFE AN HOUR AGO WAS SOO GUD N NOW...
A TEAR SLIPED...
HER HEAD WAS SPINNING...
SHE FELT SHE WOULD DIE ANY MOMENT...
SHE WAS BROKEN...SHATTERED..
HURT...
SHE HAD A FEAR OF LOSING SOMEONE CLOSE TO HER HEART...
NOT SOMEONE CLOSE TO HER HEART BUT LOSING THE ONE AND ONLY OWNER OF HER HEART...
HER EYES WERE CLOSING..
SHE TRIED HER BEST TO KEEP THEM OPEN BCOZ SHE KNEW ONCE HER EYES CLOSED,THEY WOULD FOREVER REMAIN CLOSED...
SHE KNEW THAT EVERYONE WAS STANDING RIGHT THERE BUT SHE COULDNT SEE ANYONE...EVERYTHING WENT BLANK...HER EYES TIGHTLY SHUT...
HER LIPS PARTED FOR ONLY A SOUND TO COME...
NOT SO LOUD ENOUG BUT EVERYONE PRESENT THERE COULD HEAR...
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"Assaaad..."

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