IPKKND OS - Birthday Suit [Romance] - Page 10

This content was originally posted by: glamourbird

WOW!! that was hot!! Oh why thank you! I do try. 😳

I love how u have still kept arnav & khushi alive even after so long!! It is all because of readers like you that keep on reading my stories and give me fuel to continue! 

Keep writing and keep the flame of arhi burning always Their flame was more like an inferno. Not so easy to die out! 

This content was originally posted by: Alexandrite91

I have officially been rendered speechless. You definitely have a way with words. I'd never expect such perfection and intricate design in an OS that it so ravishing and sensual. 

The basic idea is not unheard of but your rendition is truly remarkable. This was one more reason I hesitated to write this OS a year ago, as I realized that many others before me might have written something similar. This time I just couldn't help it and decided to let my words set me apart if they could! 

The dinner and her taking authority into her own hands was such a master stroke. How you expressed the effect her sassy and saucy attitude brought in Arnav made the entire episode unbelievably potent and simply amazing.

The intensity of emotion that your words crafted definitely deserves praise. This is the first sample of your work that I have read and you have swept me off my feet. Aww! Yay! Being romantical is hard work! 😳 Thank you for letting me affect you as I have. 

Actually, I found the song selection a bit weird at first but as you progressed with the OS I was completely convinced and thrilled with the result. Haha, yes I know that song doesn't induce the normal person to say "yes this is a tune I want to strip to", but then again our beloved Khushi doesn't exactly fall into the "normal" category! 😆 

The orange color is not even close to my favorite but you worked it in beautifully. Again, same notion as above. Only Khushi would pick such a horrendously un-sexy color, for the sake of her jalebi theme. 😉

Another thing that I want to specifically appreciate is how you maintained ArHi's innate nature while expanding the horizons and experimenting with possibility. The return call of "Aap ayegein na"  and Anrav's reaction were very realistic and charming. Thank you for that. I do try my best to stick to their original characters from the show, albeit I do have to deviate when I am improvising the stuff we never saw on tv, but I think their characters are what made us fall in love with them on the show, and so I always want to carry that through my writing as well. 

I definitely want to read all your previous work and any future work so please feel free to PM with anything you write.

Meanwhile, I shall remain a greatly impressed and very happy reader. Looking forward to it!! 😃