*~Independence Day O.S. - SoorYa~*

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Posted: 10 years ago
Holaa DABH-Ians,πŸ€—.

Every country, part of the world has struggled a lot to get independence. As we're living in the world of "globalization" I've decided to tribute small OS which depicts the feelings of the Solider and his wife and their eternal love. Hope you'll all enjoy reading it.😳.

Here I've represented Sooraj as a 'Solider' and Sandy as his 'Wife'.


*Cool early morning in the monsoon
*

It was a calm early morning in the Monsoon.
The flowers were all sweetly blooming
The Robins and Jaybirds did blithely sing
as I walked thru our beautiful garden
the scent of your roses filled the air
In my hand a letter that you had penned
I made my route to the bench by the pond.
The sun was rising resplendently that day
With the warmth reminiscent of our bond
I mildly unfolded your letter with dismay.


My dearest little Sandy,
Though I can't be with you right now, Always remember that I'll always love you.
When I'm not there to hold you in my arms, I want you to go to our garden and aroma the roses.
Listen to the birds tweedling their songs. Sit by our bench and recollect how we held each other so tenderly and kissed.
How you laughed when I fell into the pond and I got all wet.
How fun it was that day, You jumped in the pond too and we splashed around like kids at play. The goldfish didn't mind.
Then we made our way to the bedroom and made love all day.

 
Yes, my little Sandy that was the day I told you "Wo I Nee" for the first time.
Always remember that special day, as it is forever incised in my heart.
You are and always will be my friend, my lover, my forever soul-mate.
 
If I should die before I get home to you my little Sandy, Always know that from the Heaven's I will await for you. And if the God's allow I will visit you in our rose garden, But for now I pray that I'll make it home safely to you.
 

.❀️.Wo I Nee My Precious Sandy.❀️.

You never returned to home from war and this letter is all I have of you.
I listen to the birds chirping, it's so hard to smile some days, But I
still look into the pond hoping I may see your image there someday.

 

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amisha,
lovely letter from a Warrior to his Princess.πŸ‘

Agar aise romantic letter bheje gaye tou WIFE WAR ZONE MAY AA JAYEGI AUR ZANG JEET LEGI πŸ€£
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely love letter but tragic😭 Ab Hara hara se milan hone tak yahi haal hai kya tumhaara


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Posted: 10 years ago
Such a beautiful love letter for a brilliant episode. Great job Ami.πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful heart touching letter Ami
Made me go back to the Kargil war where we lost so many young men. They gave their lives for our country
My heart goes out to their families .

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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved reading the poem...especially in light of yesterday's indian navy submarine tragedy where 18 men are feared killed during ID practice. 

SurYa's poignant love was brought out beautifully, so touching. 
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely poem... i'm thinking wat reply sandy has given to dis letter if it was in real..?? πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you everyone for such a heartwarming appreciations. It was inspired from 'Border' movie and esp song:- 'Sandeshe Aate hain...'

@Anu:- Sandy's reply will be tricky one. I don't think so she'll add any romantic angle. May be she'll write:- Remembered Sooraj how we played indoor games like hanky-snatching, eye-blinking, carrom, pitto game.πŸ˜†.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful Poem Amlu.πŸ‘

Loved it very much.
U portrait the words very well.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful letter AmiπŸ‘πŸΌ
'Sandeshe Aate hain...' What a beautiful song..❀️