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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 8:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lenco

beautiful update

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Originally posted by shimu1

Mayur were feeling for each other- wow
i loved it

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 8:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pihu.

wonderful part
congo for new thread
do update next part soon

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ab thoda bhatakna band ker aur jaldi se update de.. Senior Member

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very nice..
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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
@shafy yup just in few ins

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chapter 22

"Main tum lagraha hun acha nahi wo"

He said while stammering unknown of what he was uttering.


"Tum na nahi main keh raha hun nahi wo performance practise time..Nahi.."

 He said it all in a state of complete nervousness and strangely he dint feel like the usual Mayank ,who had all the confidence in the world specially while talking to a girl.

"Kya tod tod ke keh rahe ho sahi se kaho na."

He took and deep breath to calm himself and uttered

 "Nupur, you look beautiful today."


 Nupur lowered her gaze while blushing but surprisingly he cupped her face and made her face him and winked at her and slowly left while making her experience a new feeling,while leaving her surprised and while leaving her lost in him. Nupur just smiled while standing there..


Bann ke titli dil uda uda uda hai

Kahin dooor...

Butterflies fluttered in her stomach as she saw him leaving.


Chal ke khushboo se juda juda

juda hai

Kahin dooor...

Mayank walked with a continuous smile on his face and slowly turned around to see his impact on her.

Haadse ye kaise

Unsune se jaise choome adheron

Ko Koi Nooor...

He smiled on seeing her nervous and lost in some thought while staring at the exit.


Bann ke titli dil uda uda uda hai Kahin dooor...

He came back to her happily and made her known that it was their turn for the performance.

Nupur seemed reluctant on facing the big audience but Mayank assured her while holding her hand.

Sirf keh jaaun ya

Aaasmaan pe likh doo

tHey were on the stage while putting in all they had been storing in for days.

Teri taarifon mein

Chashme Baddoor...

They showed their best moves while leaving an impact on everyone with their sizzling chemistry on the stage.. Everyone seemed to enjoy their performance to the fullest and this is

what gave Nupur confidence . They slowly ended as the song came to an end but Mayank and Nupur were so lost in each other that they wanted the song to continue till they were alive.


Nupur and Mayank came down the stairs and with no control over herself Nupur hugged Mayank and left Mayank in a state of shock.

"Thank you Mayank."

 "For what?"

 "For...For being there ,for making me feel confident and for giving me the assurance that i can do it."

"Shh..Nupur please ab sab koi ehsan nahi kia hai maine tum pe ok."


 Nupur nodded with a little wet eyes as she could not believe on what she has done and how it was liked by everyone.

"Ye tum kar sakti thi so tumne kiya theek hain??"


She said while tears actually making way towards her cheeks.

Mayank wiped them with his thumb and spoke

 "Tum pe ache nahi lagte ."

Saying this flaunted his dimples and added something more to it

"hasa karo agar ye abhi tumhara make up kharab kar dete toh main khamakha dar jata."


Nupur glared at him and Hit him on his chest.

"Acha tum thodi dair ruk jao phir tumhe drop kar dunga ok?"



 Nupur was feeling strange,but all she could see in herself was admiration for Mayank. Suddenly Samrat came out of the bloom in front of her and congratulated her for her graceful performance.


"Kya hua Nupur kuch badli badli si ho aj kal?"

"Kya humesha jaisi hi to hoon."

"Nahi kuch to alag hai aj kal tumhari ankho me ek alag nasha hai alag gleam hai Nupur jaise..." While speaking he stopped just to get her reply.

 Nupur was carefully examining his words and immediately spoke


"Jaise hota hai jab woh ho jata hai."

"Kya hojata hai?"

 "Nupur pehle tum mere sawalon ka jawab do."


 "Kya tumhe bina wajah kisi ke bare me soch ke ya uske presence se nervousness hoti hai?" "Haan."

 "Kya butterflies flutter karte hai tumhare stomach mein?"



"kya phool pyare lagte hai zyada kya hawa mein udhne ka mann karta hai?"

 "Haan toh?"

Nupur asked him all confused

"Tabh to ye pakka wahi hai."

 "Kya hai samrat?"

"wahi... Nupur.."


 Finally Nupur lost her patience and shouted

 "Ab bologe ya ek chamat marun?"

 "Pyar..pyar Nupur Pyar."

Nupur just froze in her place and her face became pale. Noticing the change in her Samrat held her shoulder slightly shaking her and then asked

"Kya hua?"

 Nupur came back to her senses and replied

 "K-k-uch nahi tabse kya bakwas kiye ja rahe ho chalo ab niklo yahan se."

Samrat knew what she was going through so he immediately left.


Nupur wondered for a minute and questioned herself

 "Kya Samrat sahi keh raha hai ki mujhe pyar hogaya?Nahi par aise kaise?"

 Then she took a deep breath and recalled his questions and spoke

"Haan mujhe ajeeb nervousness hoti hai Mayank ke presence aur sirf uske ek msg se bhi.Haan mujhe hawa me udhne ka mann karta hai .Haan mere stomach me butterflies flutter karte hai use dekh k..Haan haan Samrat har ek bat mera haal bayan kar rahiti jo main khud nahi samajh payi.Tu pagal hai Nupur ekdum pagal jo samajh hi nahi payi."

She had a broad smile after her Conversation with herself.

"Yes,Yes ,yes Ms.Nupur Bhushan you are in love."

Smiling she left the place.


Nupur was in a different land when she suddenly bumped into someone and fell on the ground. This time she got up but surprisingly dint shout like the last time and Mayank was even more shocked when she said

"Sorry Mayank i know it was my fault.I am sorry."

"Forget it Nupur tumhe lagi to nahi."

She nodded her head negatively and kept looking down.

"Chalo main tumhe drop kar deta hoon."

Today,Nupur sat on the bike without any hesitation and comfortably held him by his shoulder. Mayank too noticed the changed and loved it. Mayank soon dropped and left a new Nupur home.

"Gunjan tu kab ayi?"

Nupur asked her while entering her room.

 "Jab tum mujhe chor kar agayi.Di batana to chahye na."

Gunjan complained while giving Nupur deadly looks.

 "Wo Gunjan Sorry main bohot thak gayi hoon na.."

 "Theek hai but next time se bata dena and Congratulations di."

Gunjan gave Nupur a side hug and left for bringing some water for Nupur.

 "Mujhe di se baat kar leni chahye.Nahi ek kam karti hoon kal subah karungi abhi di bohot tired." Meanwhile Nupur changed into her night suit and felt a bit relaxed when suddenly her phone rang


Nupur said.

 "Sunlo meri baat mujhe nahi lagta tumhe apni koi fikar hai par ab jo hoga usse tumhe zarur farq parega.Mayank se door raho warna wo hamesha ke liye is duniya se door chala jayega..."

 Nupur was shivering badly on hearing the deadly voice once again. Her heart skipped a few beats when she heard that he would be in trouble because of her.

 She spoke while trembling

"Kaun bol r-a-h-aa hai?"

But the phone was cut by then , she just sat there on the floor while sweating badly and shivering continuously. Gunjan entered the room and saw Nupur sitting on the floor so she immediately went towards her and held her by her shoulder which shook Nupur so badly that she screamed.

"Di kya hua main hoon Gunjan."

 Nupur tightly hugged her and started sobbing.

 "Di Kya hua?kuch kaho."


"Kya phone di?" Nupur without any hesitation told her whatever she was told over the phone.

"Di mujhe pata hai yeh kaun hai."

Nupur immediately looked at her and asked

"Kaun ?"

"Rhea di Rhea."

"Par wo."

 "Di main tumse kitne dino se yahi baat karna chah rahi hoon.Di Rhea Mayank ke liye kisi bhi hadh tak ja sakti hai kuch bhi kar sakti hai kuch bhi.Wo jo kar sakti hai uski hume bhanak bhi nahi lagegi di.Di please tum Mayank se door raho.I know woh bohot acha hai but di humare bare me soche aur ab Mayank ke bare me bhi.Tumhari aur uski bhalayi isi main hai. Akhir wo sirf ek dost hi di naye dost ban jayenge door raho usse di.Please di promise me tum Mayank se aj se abhi se koi baat nahi karogi."

 Nupur was panicking inside she had just recognized her feelings for him today and now this.

Nupur was standing there blank so Gunjan once again asked her

 "Promise karo di?"

Gunjan's tears and concern and nervousness forced Nupur to utter

"Promise Gunjan."

Gunjan hugged Nupur tightly and asked her to come down for dinner.

Nupur stood there with tears finally making way towards her cheeks

"There is no doubt that i love you isliye main tumse door hi rahungi chahe hum kabhi sath na ho paye.I love you and will always do."

She rubbed her tears and moved out of the room.




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