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i wish.. Mayur ff..#2 updated LAST part 27 pg 33 (Page 32)

ri.mn Senior Member
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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 1:56am | IP Logged
Very nice...bt sad

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Thanks for tha pm...
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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Just a few questions that i
would like my readers to answer.
Did you like the way i wrote?
Yes
Was the concept good enough?
yea
Was it well executed?
yes
Are you disappointed the way it
ended?
yes...aisa q kia..if possible change it..
Should i write more
Yes and that too very soon
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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 2:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ri.mn

Very nice...bt sad
Thanks
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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ri.mn

Thanks for tha pm...
Np
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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 2:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ri.mn

Just a few questions that i
would like my readers to answer.
Did you like the way i wrote?
Yes
Was the concept good enough?
yea
Was it well executed?
yes
Are you disappointed the way it
ended?
yes...aisa q kia..if possible change it..
Should i write more
Yes and that too very soon

Okkk i'll try
Irum. IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 4:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Faria.

Originally posted by Bhatakti_atma

@Fari hehe i knew ppl are going to hate me for it..bt its just a ff..and surely i will give a compensation for this after my boards...promise next that next u'll have a smile on your face when u read d end...and love u too dear...


i dont hate u dear and i cant. but yah i m angry on u for this update. Dil tod diya..
though it was nothing but a story but u know na how much we r connected to Mayur. so cant see such a sad ending on my fav. hope u understanding
and i m waiting for ur dhasu comeback
all the best for ur board exam.

I agree with Faru.
I m not liking the  ending.
Actually mayur are so close to our heart even after many years of MJHT ending , bt our love for mayur is still blossoming ,We cant see them apart .
Plz ager ho sakey tu change the ending. 
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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Irum.

Originally posted by Faria.

Originally posted by Bhatakti_atma

@Fari hehe i knew ppl are going to hate me for it..bt its just a ff..and surely i will give a compensation for this after my boards...promise next that next u'll have a smile on your face when u read d end...and love u too dear...


i dont hate u dear and i cant. but yah i m angry on u for this update. Dil tod diya..
though it was nothing but a story but u know na how much we r connected to Mayur. so cant see such a sad ending on my fav. hope u understanding
and i m waiting for ur dhasu comeback
all the best for ur board exam.


I agree with Faru.
I m not liking the ending.
Actually mayur are so close to our heart even after many years of MJHT ending , bt our love for mayur is still blossoming ,We cant see them apart .
Plz ager ho sakey tu change the ending.
ok i'll change by sunday

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