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i wish.. Mayur ff..#2 updated LAST part 27 pg 33 (Page 26)

Bhatakti_atma IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Roses-khushi

Fab story...Thumbs Up

Thanks

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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
story was nice..
but i expected different ending a happy ending..
it was nice..
do make more
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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shafy_MN

story was nice..
but i expected different ending a happy ending..
it was nice..
do make more

ThankS
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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 10:23am | IP Logged

Here was the last part friends.Smile

Sighhh i gonna miss this FF dear. it was a very nice start and the story was good but the ending was very frustrating as  cant imagine mayur apart from each other.

I dont know if you all are happy with the end but to justify the title i had to do it.--
frankly speaking i dint like this ending a bit. and to justify the title i believe u may end it in a positive way..
I hope no one is disappointed..


sorry to say but i m disappointed with this part.. but u wrote the whole update beautifully. 

I had no intentions to end it but since i am not finding time to update as i am in 10th thats why rather than dragging i decided to give you all a end of this FF.

Hope u'll come with another beautiful FF with happy ending...and i m waiting for that day.
Just a few questions that i would like my readers to answer.

Did you like the way i wrote?definitely i liked the way u wrote this FF.

Are you disappointed the way it ended?i answered it already.

Should i write more?yesss.
yesss u should write more. compensate tou karna parega he. isbar rulaya tou next time hume khusiya deni hogi


Love u dear
please come back soon with new ff

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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 11:33am | IP Logged
@Fari hehe i knew ppl are going to hate me for it..bt its just a ff..and surely i will give a compensation for this after my boards...promise next that next u'll have a smile on your face when u read d end...and love u too dear...

Edited by Bhatakti_atma - 15 October 2013 at 11:33am
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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bhatakti_atma

@Fari hehe i knew ppl are going to hate me for it..bt its just a ff..and surely i will give a compensation for this after my boards...promise next that next u'll have a smile on your face when u read d end...and love u too dear...


i dont hate u dear and i cant. but yah i m angry on u for this update. Dil tod diya..
though it was nothing but a story but u know na how much we r connected to Mayur. so cant see such a sad ending on my fav. hope u understanding
and i m waiting for ur dhasu comeback
all the best for ur board exam.

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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 11:57am | IP Logged
@Fari aww...so swt of u thanks..do u thnk i shud change the end????
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Posted: 15 October 2013 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
sad ending kyun? nice

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