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Raya FF: The Apples of Our Eyes Part 5: Pg 11 (Page 8)

viny_queen IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 12:19pm | IP Logged

lovelysakshi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
really wonderful update
well connected the document scene
meine socha bhi nahi yeh wahan jaake connect ho raha hai...
I thought ki Sid is negative but he is good person accept his fault
.Ram anger is too much but he is a very good father. i like depite in problem he fulfill his promise
continue soon and thanks for PMSmile
Pinkjali Senior Member

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
extremely sorry for not being able to read ur story on a regular basis.. part 1 = that was indeed a fantastic start. this ff also has the same freshness like the previous one.. the name mayra and rayna is so beautiful, really shipcy di did a gr8 job on finding the names... raya's chori chori romance was also very gud. seems peehu will help as to get some more raya moment. rayna mayra r so cute, sweet and inocent , i am toh just in love with them. by the way i think something is fishy with vicram, hope am wrong... going to read the next..

Edited by Pinkjali - 23 August 2013 at 4:25pm
Pinkjali Senior Member

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
part = 2 wow..!! this was really awesome.. the twins uff.!! what a blunder package nasdaq ko nastha bana diya , am still laughing .. there phn convo was very very beautiful, specially the kbc section of ram with the twins. and the phn romance was just so romantic.. what happened in the last..? now i feel something definitely is fishy and again i hope am wrong.. finger crossed. going to read the next part..
Pinkjali Senior Member

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 4:58pm | IP Logged
part = 3
omg.!! it was a shocking start and lovely ending wala update... ram shouldn't have shouted so badly on priya but all well that ends well.. Ohh..!!so it was sid the idiot king behind that fishyness and i was suspecting vicram.. i just dnt understand how sid the idiot king everytime manage to created problems..? thank god he was sorry ... and despite being so angry ram didn't broked his promise , that's really sweet of him.. u know what after reading 3 part of ur ff onething is clear that there is definitely a fresh touch in this ff but it also has those special usp of ur previous ff. like fed up peehu with her parents hugging session.. gr8 and awesome job. now i promised to try not be the late latiff .. pls if u can pm me.. waiting for the next, update soon...

Edited by Pinkjali - 23 August 2013 at 5:02pm
gaurip71 Newbie

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
Awesome update...
Please continue soon...
Dilli4BALH Goldie

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Woot woot! Loving ur new ff very much.. RK is the best even in FF. Can' t believe that he made his presence at school. Totally family man.. he he

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 1:49am | IP Logged
sorry again for late comments ..
Super duper hit update ..anger then love swt and also teasing..this is raya without fighting they r incomplete ..thank u for ur PM

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