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#2 But I love you - SS - VIRMAN - part - 25 to part 33 - THE END (Page 87)

chandiniebinda Goldie
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Posted: 12 August 2014 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
Loved it...
How you wrote Simmy and Virat point of vieuw we really awesome...
Hope you will write the epilogue soon with a lot of Virman scenes...
And i had 1 question are you alsoo going to update all this part on wattpad???
Feel sad that you ended this awesome ff..,
But i know you have more ff to write...
It was really awesome..

aisha77 Groupbie
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Joined: 18 March 2013
Posts: 70

Posted: 12 August 2014 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Wow wow wow beautiful nd amazingly awsme, the thng i likd the most is tht u ended it in no time , matllb tmam gilay shikway dho dalay Clap as per updates was afraid tht simmy wil again create problm bt thnx God she didnt, like the way manvi showd hr trust on virat, in short FANTABULOUS . love ya
luvmanat Senior Member
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Joined: 28 March 2013
Posts: 557

Posted: 12 August 2014 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Superb story
An unimaginable twist... Then Mannu accepted virat and abhi whole heartedly is just awesome
Simmy is independent girl but not a girl who can take the responsibility
Virat took decisions for his child because of his self experience
When he broke down that was such a sad moment...
But he is strong man... And have a loving & adorable life partner
Really mannu rocks...
Smile
Beautiful and lovely story
Thanks for completing it... U r great writer i had ever seen
Thank u...
-LumosMaxima- IF-Sizzlerz
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Joined: 14 October 2012
Posts: 14338

Posted: 12 August 2014 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Awesome updates!! Ending is veryyy different and unique.. Chalo it's good to see all are happy with their lives now.. Simmy realised her mistakes and moved on.. She found her happiness in a successful career & Virman found their happiness with each other.. Abhi-Mannu part was really cute.. Loved it Anu.. Eagerly waiting for the epilogue now.. Thank you for the pm.. Please update two left feet and my umbrella also.. Take care :))
rasp_berry IF-Rockerz
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Posts: 5169

Posted: 12 August 2014 at 8:30am | IP Logged
*sniff* *sniff* khatam ho Gaya...sad
 
Simmy...i m still not able to understand this mystery...she is something different..., i m glad that she chose to give away Abhis custody to Virman...thats the best she can do fr her son...nobody n nothing can hold her back...her dreams r too high that's y she think everything is worthless in front of...but u hv to wake up 1 day frm ur land, n hv to step in present...still i think she is lucky bcs even after that she hs her family at her back
 
Happy fr virman...never though that they will bcm a perents like this...
 
pls do complete ur other stories as well...pls pls pls
Kiekeboe Goldie
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Posts: 10026

Posted: 12 August 2014 at 10:25am | IP Logged
read till part 31, wonderful turning point! 
... goes to read further Tongue
Kiekeboe Goldie
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Posted: 12 August 2014 at 10:53am | IP Logged
finished it... 
Superb yaar!! I loved it so much, you have written it with so much emotions, wonderful! 
virman_superhit Senior Member
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Joined: 06 August 2013
Posts: 216

Posted: 12 August 2014 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Oh god... Such a nice and a wonderful story has now come to an end... CryCry.. Would have loved to read more and more... But I can understand that u wanted to end it now.. So thanks for ending it in such an awesome way... Loved it.. Their POVs were awesome and written from ur heart... SmileClapClap..

Loved update 32.. It was so cute and was virmanilicious.. :).. WinkWink... Their love and romance was so hot... EmbarrassedEmbarrassed.. Love every time u write about their feelings and emotions.. It's a treat to read.. SmileSmileLOL.. And I loved Maanvi in ur story... She has such a big heart... She din want her own child coz she wanted to give her whole time to Abhi... Awww... How can someone b so sweet... Clap.. Great read... And Virat was lucky to have her... 

Simmy's decision of giving the custody to Virat was a nice and wise decision... Finally she had some sense.. LOLLOL.. Haha... 

Part 33... The POVs were good.. But Simmy is one confused soul... Lol.. She wants to have what Maanvi has and she also wants her happiness... Crazy... She can never b Mannu... SmileSmile.. 

Virat's POV was also good... Finally he realised that Mannu is his life.. And so he was thankful to Simmy to leave him n go... That was so nice.. Summed up his feelings and his happiness in those few lines... SmileClap.. Maanvi's as usual was cute.. And true.. Mannu rocks... Lol... 

All in all it was an exceptionally good story dear.. Keep writing... Other stories.. And please write the epilogue soon... Would love to read it.. But make it Virmanish... SmileWinkWink.. Waiting..:).

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