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#2 But I love you - SS - VIRMAN - part - 25 to part 33 - THE END (Page 80)

Kiekeboe Goldie
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Posted: 12 August 2014 at 10:53am | IP Logged
finished it... 
Superb yaar!! I loved it so much, you have written it with so much emotions, wonderful! 

virman_superhit Senior Member
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Posted: 12 August 2014 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Oh god... Such a nice and a wonderful story has now come to an end... CryCry.. Would have loved to read more and more... But I can understand that u wanted to end it now.. So thanks for ending it in such an awesome way... Loved it.. Their POVs were awesome and written from ur heart... SmileClapClap..

Loved update 32.. It was so cute and was virmanilicious.. :).. WinkWink... Their love and romance was so hot... EmbarrassedEmbarrassed.. Love every time u write about their feelings and emotions.. It's a treat to read.. SmileSmileLOL.. And I loved Maanvi in ur story... She has such a big heart... She din want her own child coz she wanted to give her whole time to Abhi... Awww... How can someone b so sweet... Clap.. Great read... And Virat was lucky to have her... 

Simmy's decision of giving the custody to Virat was a nice and wise decision... Finally she had some sense.. LOLLOL.. Haha... 

Part 33... The POVs were good.. But Simmy is one confused soul... Lol.. She wants to have what Maanvi has and she also wants her happiness... Crazy... She can never b Mannu... SmileSmile.. 

Virat's POV was also good... Finally he realised that Mannu is his life.. And so he was thankful to Simmy to leave him n go... That was so nice.. Summed up his feelings and his happiness in those few lines... SmileClap.. Maanvi's as usual was cute.. And true.. Mannu rocks... Lol... 

All in all it was an exceptionally good story dear.. Keep writing... Other stories.. And please write the epilogue soon... Would love to read it.. But make it Virmanish... SmileWinkWink.. Waiting..:).
Dee-jay Senior Member
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Posted: 13 August 2014 at 3:34am | IP Logged
First of all thanks for the pm.
It took me while to finish reading the story.
Amazing ending. Just loved it. 
I loved how you wrote how others are feeling.
Can't wait for the next fic. Do let me know 
shaalivirman Senior Member
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Posted: 13 August 2014 at 8:33am | IP Logged
I think this the best ending I have alwaz loved this a lot this such an awesome story im gonna read it again and again fr sure :D
nd I loved manvi and abhi's pov :D
chandiniebinda Goldie
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Posted: 13 August 2014 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Heeeyyy..
Dont you have part 23 and 24??
nrithyao Goldie
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Posted: 13 August 2014 at 11:28am | IP Logged
superb story
will miss this story a lot

hangok IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 19 August 2014 at 3:53am | IP Logged
waiting for the epilogue...
Nandita217 Senior Member
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Posted: 19 August 2014 at 4:15am | IP Logged
First of all i am a bit emotional that the story has come to its end...it was beautiful, cute, and very sweet SS i have ever read...i will be keep on reading it time & again...like i do read your rest of your works, i simply love all your works & you are my fav writer among all over here!Smile
Coming back to the story...the povs were much needed at the end...there was a great intensity in simmi & virat's pov...simply loved it...and as i scrolled down manvi's pov cracked me up!!!LOLLOL I mean a second before i was reading the update with much seriousness & concentration & as soon as manvi pov came...i just forgot in a sec what all simmi & virat said!!!! In this case i am with abhi...his mannu maasi rocks!!!LOLLOLLOL

Waiting for the epilogue...is there any chance you write BILY season 2...hehehe...will be waiting for the updates of the  rest of the stories too!!!SmileSmile


Edited by Nandita217 - 19 August 2014 at 4:13am

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