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KR OS: Inexorable Separations (Page 4)

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 11:04am | IP Logged
awesome os

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 11:44am | IP Logged
awesome OS
loved it

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Awesome OS ... 
luved it 

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
suprbbb yaar ...!!!
totally loved it...!!!
beautifully written..!!!
u kept d suspense till ends...!!!
apne masters ko pagal bna diya...:p
awsummm...!!!
nd abt song... its nycc..!!
jst read d lyrics..!!!
truelly lovd it...!!
thanxx 4 pm

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 9:23pm | IP Logged
Reserves LOL

unres

1st of all this s for d titleClapClap

2nd s for d brilliant write-upClapClap

and this s for d songgClap

woww mindblowing os upiHug

d ending was unexpectedWink

i thot it would b a sad one but noSmile

totally loveedd itttSmile


Edited by aishu3003 - 22 August 2013 at 4:58am

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Posted: 14 August 2013 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
it was freaking awesome...
written beautifully...
loved it...
thnx for pm...

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Wonderful! :)

I read the ending and I thought yeh to Ishaqzaade types ho gaya, but how can I forget your Upsana! :p

Loved it. Every inch of it. The wait, the desperation, the passion and of course, the fake encounter.


Amaaa-zzzing! :D

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 6:37am | IP Logged
'Inexorable Separation'  - Awesome title Thumbs Up...
When I read the first paragraph , I made a mental note that this OS is going to have a sad ending Ouch...
N that was getting confirmed after each line...
But then u made this unexpectedly Amazing twist Wink...
N mere uss note ki dhagian urda di LOL...

Kria's thoughts And feelings when she entered her enemy's territory , were described beautifully...
The thought of being your lover's death , honsla kese ho insaan mein yeh karne ka Ouch...

Then their Hot and Passionate sa Re-Union Embarrassed...
Kuch ziyada he Passionate N Wild hogaya tha Blushing...

Then again I thought k woh ek doosre ko shoot karein gay..
N buss die , not in their lover's arms But by them Ermm...
But esa nai hua , fortunately Big smile...

N at the end both of them ran away , together Day Dreaming...
The song selected was Great , went along with the story very well Approve..
Mast OS hai'Big smile...
Me loved it Heart...

N thanks for the pm Smile



Edited by Roxxy47 - 15 August 2013 at 6:39am

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