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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 9)

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
Awesome fab update plz cont soon

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
Wow...all the pars were great..
Finally they met han..
yhe way u expresss everyones expression n feelings is too good n awexome..
Update soon..
Love te wholr update...

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 12:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ninii

Wow superb
Its just awsome
but no precap
Waiting for the next update
thnks for the great updates

Thanks, niniiSmile

I am glad that you're enjoying the story. You're welcome, and hope to see you again after I post the next chapter;)



Originally posted by Jorja

Awesome fab update plz cont soon

Thank youBig smileAnd will continue soon.


Originally posted by Pisces_Gurl

Wow...all the pars were great..
Finally they met han..
yhe way u expresss everyones expression n feelings is too good n awexome..
Update soon..
Love te wholr update...


Thanks dear.

And yes, I will be definitely continuing soon. Looking forward to hearing from you:)


Edited by Amri174 - 16 August 2013 at 1:01am
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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 1:05am | IP Logged
I will unres my comment today :-)

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Leki

I will unres my comment today :-)

I'll be waiting, Leki! And I will immediately post a precap, especially for you, if you do;)
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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 1:55am | IP Logged
unres my comment pg-3 and 7

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Thanks a lot for commenting, Megha dear. My responses in bold red.

Originally posted by mastmegha22

FIRST OF ALL CONGRATES FOR NEW THREAD       ThanksTongue


 i have never thought this single lie will affect them this much.
It completely shows that how much they are attached and loved eachother as family.Very true. All of them are like family, and Riya's lies have affected them very much. The consequences will be felt by her later.
She always fun loving girl. help other, never bear pain for her closed ones and makes all of them happy. her bond with her friend. i love that.
i am scared when the see her what will be there reaction.Honestly, I am scared myself. It is not going to be easy for Riya.
And this update also expressing the feeling, the way the each memberes of the team felt for eachother.
Loved the way arjun understood shree, that he too was going through the same turmoil as his.
But the difference was he felt this pain is much more
For shree she was his best friend his best buddy but here arjun she is more special for him. she was the one who cares for him, who trust him and now her own identity was fake.
Now just waiting, when he will realize this little damn thing that he loves her.Yes, he is going to realize it very soon;)
and i know tum itni jaldi nahi dikhane wali.Aisi baat nahin hai yaar, But whatever it is, the next chapter has to be perfect, because it is the moment all of you have been waiting forSmile
love the way riya concerning about arjun.
continue soon.Will do, madam.
and thanx for pm.Welcome!!!
and get well soon.Thanks, I am feeling much better alreadySmile

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 2:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mastmegha22

again you impressed me with your work.
i like whole the update yaar.Thanks yaar!!!This was the most exciting chapter till date, don't you think?
so riya ne arjun ke piche apne aadmi laga diye hain.
love glaring session between riya and her boss.
so arjun is going to meet commissioner sir for clearing his doubt about riya.Both Arjun and Riya are trying hard to do what they can for the other;) And this includes getting past their bosses.
love the way rathore interrogating hotel guyes.
riya sees arjun.Yayy, the 'wow' moment;)
shree was seeing the cctv and he sees riya.
he was shocked.Technically, it's Shree who first finds out about Riya being alive, but it is our ACP Saab who meets her firstWinkand he called arjun to tell him that riya is alive.
but someone attacked arjun but riya saved him.
love there moments.ThanksBig smile
shree was scared about arjun.
finally arjun sees riya.
now i am scared what will happen.Don't worry, everything will be fine!
continue soon.Will do;)
eagerly waiting for next part.
and get well son.Thanks, I am feeling better.

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