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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 50)

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Posted: 22 October 2013 at 3:09am | IP Logged
Knock knock!
Pls don't slam the door right on my faceUnhappy oh you could LOL
no excuses! I am super late!
Bandi aapke khidmat mai hazrir hai! Jo saza hai wo manjoorWink

The part started with Comm. Choelo's POV on the matters that happened. But the surprising part was, how deeply he connectes himself with the tow person and their personla life. He too understands the pain and the sacrs on his soul , his rage, his agressivenes , his anger everything that lead him only one way is sikander. And now Riya.

I really don't know what is the past story of riya that made Comm think like that but, there must be something which made him think like this.

The way he connected himself with two of his officers is brillantly written.

I am sure you will reveal it on the right point.

Then comes to Arjun.. One side he was feeling defeated by loosing her grip again but still his little soft part stored its own medicine for the wound. Loved the way his mind restored every moment of the two lady of his life. Roshni and riya. Perfect description of the mixed memories in the blue and green color ! Those words made me drown in the memory lane. Thanks a lott for that.

Next to that, he was very much successful to hide his turmoil composed himself out of the office was commendable. He seems experienced with masking his pain everytime from the outside , increasing his suffocation more. Choelo was right. He deserves the best of this world. Don't know about riya.. But still.

Umm I knew it she must be riya in the conference room. Don't know how will he react! At what point you stopped yaar!

Jumping jhapang to next thread now! Lol

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Are yar why im not able to reply to this story... I'm sorry yar wrote comment for half part still more to go... i'm one Lazy female...

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Posted: 22 October 2013 at 8:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Leki

Are yar why im not able to reply to this story... I'm sorry yar wrote comment for half part still more to go... i'm one Lazy female...

count me with you didiyaa

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